Vote on appearance.
EDIT
I've posted and made it somewhat pretty to look at while also dividing the update into 4 parts
1) main party group.
2) secondary party group.
3) World building and side scenes
4) FORESHADOW OF DOOM
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Vote on appearance.
EDIT
I've posted and made it somewhat pretty to look at while also dividing the update into 4 parts
1) main party group.
2) secondary party group.
3) World building and side scenes
4) FORESHADOW OF DOOM
Ok. Im gunna post soon either tonight or tomorrow.
2 days is plenty of time i think. If your gunna make a post you got 3 hours till i either start working on one and "assume" your characters are listening to important details.
(I havnt double checked but i think we are missing a couple post. Hmm maybe they said skip. Uh. Hmm anywho its been long enough wait.)
2 days is plenty of time i think. If your gunna make a post you got 3 hours till i either start working on one and "assume" your characters are listening to important details.
(I havnt double checked but i think we are missing a couple post. Hmm maybe they said skip. Uh. Hmm anywho its been long enough wait.)
He'll have some fun! If you can manage to fend off some holy attacks.
"Teamwork" if we can manage personalities.
Sometimes blocks of text are hard to read but other than that i enjoy the rp. :)
Heavy contrast between characters certainly adds flare.
Heavy contrast between characters certainly adds flare.
"Don't think we forgot about you!" the voice said. "Why dont you come on out before we have to make you!" it seemed like Soroms quick action to hide only worked to get out of his foes sight.
Kanobu on the otherhand was pinned to a tree trunk with the horns of a beetle holding him against the back. Both arms were held down even pierced by the ribs of the horns. It was clear that the shinobi was also unconscious.
Gallade's detection only told him that there were enemies. It seemed like his ability to sense others like sonar was disabled by rayquaza for the time being.
Kanobu's demons were at his side. Vulpix was using fire to burn the beetle while Haunter was attempting to confuse the giant bug.
"Foolish leaf shinobi."
Kanobu on the otherhand was pinned to a tree trunk with the horns of a beetle holding him against the back. Both arms were held down even pierced by the ribs of the horns. It was clear that the shinobi was also unconscious.
Gallade's detection only told him that there were enemies. It seemed like his ability to sense others like sonar was disabled by rayquaza for the time being.
Kanobu's demons were at his side. Vulpix was using fire to burn the beetle while Haunter was attempting to confuse the giant bug.
"Foolish leaf shinobi."
0_0 oh my! I hope hes ok.
Anyway i have a lot of typos cause im on my phone. I think i even spelled genin wrong.
Anyway i have a lot of typos cause im on my phone. I think i even spelled genin wrong.
"The hammer was figurative I think." Mikone said. Thinking about what her sensei was saying brought up concerns. Ot wasn't about his ability to teach but rather the way each of them would accept each other.
"What do you need to know about us, Akihiko-sensei." she tried to sound kind but her concern was apparent. Did her teacher know nothing about them at all? She wondered if he was asking a out something else. In any case she knew group training might not be the hardest part to come.
"Just one more question. Why did you accept four fenin when the other students were grouped in threes?"
"What do you need to know about us, Akihiko-sensei." she tried to sound kind but her concern was apparent. Did her teacher know nothing about them at all? She wondered if he was asking a out something else. In any case she knew group training might not be the hardest part to come.
"Just one more question. Why did you accept four fenin when the other students were grouped in threes?"
The character looks great!
Theres just a couple things about the kingdom i wiwill have to address.
A kingdom smaller than navire is pretty tiny. Are you sure you'll be ok with it since the economic status is going to be not so great. I know you said nomatic tribes but that implies they move. Is it really a kindom with a patron? I mean it would be easier to state it was a village with a good military keepung it from crumbling o ovovernight.
Theres just a couple things about the kingdom i wiwill have to address.
A kingdom smaller than navire is pretty tiny. Are you sure you'll be ok with it since the economic status is going to be not so great. I know you said nomatic tribes but that implies they move. Is it really a kindom with a patron? I mean it would be easier to state it was a village with a good military keepung it from crumbling o ovovernight.
Ok. Stay safe and get well
(I actually took a sick day too)
(I actually took a sick day too)
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