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On second look through the roster, I think I am going to back out of this. If only there's only top tier servants and not a lot of... Innovation or new area that hasn't been tread already. The Rider slot can be given to someone else.
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I don't intend to do a Discord for this story, since I'm not particularly good with that and I prefer to make any important announcements here anywhere, where they'll logged and easily accessible.

Anyway, regarding your characters:

I cannot accept that 1st one for some reasons, other than just the Unified Language. That in itself wouldn't be a problem but other things, especially the Parameter stealing in his 1st skill are concerning. The extra damage against Kings is no problem, but stealing Parameters, especially END, with a single non-Noble Phantasm attack is.

For the second idea, she's pretty much ok, with a few points needing attention.

1st - Her 1st Noble Phantasm should work like all similar ones in canon and be deactivated when she needs to use her second one. You can summon the mount without giving away her identity, but when she uses the charge attack (which requires calling the Noble Phantasm's name), her identity must be given away like any other Servant using a Noble Phantasm.

2nd - Make it so that she and her mount lose much of the benefits of that Presence Concealment-like effect when they prepare to attack, not when they are about to hit with an attack so that it's in line with all other canon stealth effects.


I'm surprised... If possible I can convert 'stolen parameters' to 'stolen magical energy', a very minor amount. As Od is the currency which the Master's wage war. I'd be willing to discuss if that was the only critique about the sheet.

As for Hatshepsut, there are only a handful of Female Pharaoh, so that is a big clue. I'd rather her disguise only burn away when using the charge attack for sake of fairness. As for the 'presence concealment', it does drop when the beast attacks... It can only be cloaked when out of combat or not moving to attack, that's my intention.
I won't be making a Master, as to allow more people access to this RP.

Also, are we going to be making a Discord for quick communication?
PS: I'm making two servants, due to the first having 'unified language' and that can be polarizing if used unfairly. I've tried to give it enough wiggle room to be fair but I have provided a backup Servant just in case. I still would prefer to play the first, but understand.





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If you already have an idea, and really want the spot, I can let you have it. I still have backups in the other classes and all of them are characters I'm interested in playing so it's no problem for me to pass on Rider.


Very well, as it happens a large factor of my sheets tend to be riders. I'll graciously take up the slot then.
Place holder... Darn wanted Rider. I guess I will take whatever class is least desired then I guess
Wouldn't you need more than that? As there are team pairs or are you implying all teams need to make a Master and Servant?
I might be interested.
I'd like to reserve Assassin, I have two or three sheets available so if this doesn't work let me know.

Tentatively Reserving a Servant slot, Rider would be nice but not required. I enjoy Cavalry class the most. If none are available I have some Masters available.
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