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The Harvester


The Harvester nodded to the queen and descended the stairs of her throne room. There was much to process about this datascape and HR-513 would have to get in touch with the being known as "Krieg." Once the datascape was fully charted HR-513 would have the valuable information needed to accept the position of High-Cartographer. With that, the vast stores of knowledge held within the Machina database.

Some time later, HR-513 learned of the battle to be begun in this other world. The Harvester decided that he would bring a large amount of mass with him in case the warp connection did not allow for objects to be brought into that world from the other. HR-513 entered the dying world in all his 10 meters of metallic glory and took in the new information at his disposal. "Interesting." He said aloud. There he saw Machina soldiers and equipment moving about busily preparing for battle. Up in the sky he perceived his ally Maceroy ascending into very high places above the graveyard world. "Probably observing for weaknesses in the enemies' ranks." He thought to himself.

HR-513 turned towards the dead tree that was The Machina's landmark for arrival. The Harvester began clanking towards it and as he got close a bright blueish light formed a miniature warp cyclone around the tree. Within seconds, the tree had grafted unto The Harvester's body. He was "wearing" the tree as camouflage. His metal form from before would stand out too much in this gray dying world.

He walked forward, following Maceroy's perceived path. From his position above he had a much better idea of where to move. Harvester fired a single shot from his warp cannon below Maceroy to get his attention."I shall observe the battles taking place and learn as much as I can about their abilities. When anyone happens to become expired I will absorb them onto myself."
@KolIs everyone required to go and what is the time frame of our arrival?
@McHaggis Hey, I'm all done my cs, let me know what you think.
@Mchaggis thank you for your long detailed response! All your points are valid. I will look into adding a screw up militarily. For lightning bending, I will add his struggle was to switch his method from using anger to fuel his bending into calm strikes. I will also limit the range to 10 ft.

For his fatal flaw I'd prefer it didn't deal with military tactics on the enemy, but more of a social thing. If you'd like another flaw to be added I can make him solve problems through violence more often then not, sabotage etc. He is in war mode constantly.

Yakedo was not a bloodline thing, just an art passed down that Ryuu did not reveal in combat until the Agni Kai.
@McHaggis I finished my CS. let me know what you think ;) I will credit the pictures after being accepted.
@Mchaggis Thanks! Would you like me to post in cs?
@Kol If you could crank out another response quickly Harvester could go to the next location to find the datascape. I appreciate your response from earlier.
The Harvester


The Harvester looked at Eos, taking in every word. When she mentioned "datascape" HR-513 searched its' vast storage for the proper information and found nothing on it. Unacceptable. It had to have the information on this in order to start the trial and fulfill its' purpose of acquiring the position of High Cartographer. There was no secondary option. Whatever got in its' way would be assimilated or destroyed. No exceptions.

"I do not have the necessary information about this datascape, High Queen of the Machina. Where must I go to proceed with this trial?" It asked with a perplexity. It had to know about the datascape. It was integral to its' purpose. It did not like riddles and pointless fetch quests. It wanted to get to the bottom of it immediately. Queen Eos had a vast collection of knowledge herself and she most definitely had the information HR-513 required.
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