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Shall I pluck you a Lion's Tooth
As it strives towards the sun

Shall I count the circumference of a Day's Eye
And tell you there is twenty-one

Shall I gather the glory of morning
And fill a room with it's scent

Shall I wear a crown of mouse ear
In prayer that you won't forget

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@Aldridge

Yep, still open, no slots have been filled as of yet. Available initials are C and L.

Please note that we have had people submit their interest before you, and so their characters will be reviewed first, but we do not do automatic acceptances. So you still have a shot at being accepted.
Sure is. Jump on over to the thread (link in the first comment), give it a read, and submit away.
Okay, she has been updated again, because Fallen reviewed her as well. Yay!

Name: Andri Perrin
Species: Epicanthix
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Knight
Captive? Yes

Appearance:

At 193cm tall, Andri is shorter than average for her people but still taller than most humans. She has thick black hair usually tied back in a loose bun and dark brown eyes, a rounded face with a strong nose and a wide mouth and darkly tanned skin. Her build is lithe and wiry, with no real defining curves to show beneath her robes.


Notable Characteristics of Species:

Epicanthix are immune to Force-assisted mental trick, influence, domination and mind reading.
Epicanthix are identifiable by the epicanthic fold of their eyelids.

Flaws:

Often blinds herself to the darkness in other, giving people the benefit of the doubt.
She is willing to give everyone chances to redeem themselves, but with each broken promise she becomes less lenient towards that person. She gives six chances to each individual - she’s twice as lenient as others, but after the sixth she will cut ties with that person. In the case of Sith, after six attempts at redemption she will instead attempt to ‘put them down’, regarding them as little more than rabid dogs.
Subscribes to the ideal that if you are going to change, you must change in all areas and not just the ones that are easiest or benefit you most.
Her combat skills are lacking, being more suited for diplomatic roles instead.
Automatically trusts all Jedi, except those that were previously Sith. Redeemed Sith, she treats with civility and neutrality, unless they have breached her chance limit, in which case she distrusts them and waits for the moment when they fall back to the darkness so she can put them down.
Looks towards a better tomorrow rather than dwelling on today or the past.

Skills:

Basic field first aid (non-force powered)
Diplomacy, politics, history, basic tactics
High observation skills, able to read body language and the tension in a room to determine her next course of action.
Knitting
Highly skilled in Form I: Shii-Cho
Adept in Form III: Soresu

Force capabilities:

Tutaminis (basic)
Precognition
Mind Trick
Breath Control
Revitalise
Animal Friendship
Force Stun

Biography:

Andri was born on Panatha in the Outer Rim Territories, but not long after her birth her parents moved further into the known galaxy, to Denon, for work opportunities. It was due to this that she was picked up at a very early age by the Jedi Order, and whisked away to the Jedi Academy on Alaris Prime.

She doesn’t remember much of her parents, being just a toddler when she was taken away from them, and so grew into the Jedi way of life very quickly and easily. Her childhood was one of joy and laughter, enjoying her time playing with the other younglings and learning new things. She struggled to learn the lightsaber combat forms however, showing a much higher natural aptitude for the ways of the Force instead. She was a natural speaker, diffusing arguments and organising activities within the children’s play time and using keen eyes to assess a situation and come up with a plan, and was soon guided towards the lifestyle of a Consular and diplomat.

She became a Padawan at the age of 10, apprenticing under Jedi Master Ral Shodon, and travelled with him around the galaxy he visited other Academies and plied his skills as a diplomat and healer. Master Shodon was a stern taskmaster, focusing more on Andri’s prowess in the way of the Jedi than on allowing her to socialise with her agemates. Due to her own lack of natural combative skills, he only focused on bringing them up to acceptable levels before switching to intense training in the way of the Force. She herself showed no aptitude for the healing arts, instead learning the basics of field first aid. Alongside this, he trained her in the basics of diplomacy and the history of the Republic and the Order. He slowly worked on her natural naivety and gullibleness as well, but didn’t make much headway until they were six years into her training.

When she was 16, Master Shodon took Andri on a four year training trip to the Republic Elite’s Resort World of Alassa Major, to mingle with the politicians and elite of the galaxy. Her time spent on Alassa Major was anything but relaxing, as she was forced to rub elbows with the richest and most affluent of society. She was forced to leave behind her childish naivety and gullibleness very quickly, as he intensified her training in the diplomatic and political arenas, whilst not allowing her combat or Force skills to deteriorate. They ended up staying a year longer than Master Shodon expected, as it took extra time for him to train her to think things through more instead of instantly believing what everybody says.

Andri’s Master declared her ready for Knighthood at the age of 21, eleven years after she entered his apprenticeship. She was Knighted traditionally, barely passing her Trial of Skill, but making up for it with her skill in the Trial of Insight. The next fifteen years of her life were spent bouncing between diplomatic missions and being a spokesperson between the Jedi Council and the Republic, as Master Shodon had trained her to do, bouncing between her childhood Academy on Alaris Prime in her downtime and other Mid and Inner Rim planets .

When she felt her Master's death, Andri was shocked and has spent what time she can spare between political missions searching for information on the death of her Master and his apprentice at the time. She is determined to confront the person who killed her Master and either arrest them (in the case of non-Force sensitives) or kill them (in the case of Sith) to prevent any further deaths of those dedicated to peace.

She was in between missions at the time of the Sacking of Coruscant, readying herself for another trip around the Mid Rim worlds.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Optimistic and calm, she is always smiling and believes that everything will get better, you just have to believe and keep hope alive.
If judgement is not carried out on those who have betrayed her or the galaxy, she will be irritated. If a chance comes later for her to take them out, she will take the opportunity. If they have been redeemed between when she last saw them and the next, she will not attack immediately. She will be disapproving and distrustful, always waiting for the moment when they slip back into the darkness.

Player’s long term goals:

Keeping morale up for the captive Jedi, have fun! She works closely with the Republic, trying to unify the galaxy under one overall banner.

Light Side: A harsher, less forgiving view on the Sith, giving them only one chance to redeem themselves. In the case of already redeemed Sith, she will treat them suspiciously regardless of whether they were redeemed on the first chance or not, and any slipping will result in her ‘accidentally’ crossing paths with them and killing them for the good of the galaxy. She will still work towards unity, but will prescribe to the tough love mind set.

Dark Side: She will fall, and fall hard, twisting her views completely as she changes every aspect of herself, going from a ‘brighter tomorrow, good of the many person’, to a selfish, present-only person. She will seek to unite the galaxy through pain and equality through the Dark Side, not trusting anyone and seeing threats wherever she looks. She will never take on an apprentice, not wanting someone so close to her and learning her secrets.

Relations:

Jedi Master Ral Shodon - Master. She felt his death two months ago, and has been searching for clues on who killed him since.
Lea Rahn - current apprentice of Master Shodon. Andri has met her multiple times but never developed any friendship with the younger girl. She believes the young girl to be deceased due to being with Master Shodon at the time of his death.

Final Point - Secrets:

Next round is initiation, but we were waiting on getting two new players since Against and Kilt have been offline for a week and haven't replied to any pms asking their whereabouts.
@Ellri

...No idea where I got Alyssa from then. So you suggest making her a trainee of a different Academy rather than the Coruscant Temple? Okay.

I realised she would probably know of her Master's death when I woke up this morning, but then wasn't sure exactly how long before the Sacking it happened. And also Lea.

I know the basics of SW history - mostly the official plotline of the KotOR games and the movies, but I'm always happy to read more.
@Rekaigan

I remembered literally just after you said that lol. I think my problem with the bra showing mostly stems from being female myself. I naturally shy away from female characters that specifically state that they are showing their underwear.

However, characters like Emerald who are wearing tops specifically designed to be revealing don't bother me.
In Mahz's Dev Journal 9 yrs ago Forum: News
Then there's the fact that some people are really petty and will just dislike something because someone they've clashed with in the past said it.

I know we're all pretty good here, but there's always the chance that that will happen.
Looking for two players due to player non-participation: the available initials are L or C. Thread can be found here. We're up to initiation, but would prefer the new characters to join before we continue on for the ease of fight scenes and team building.
Name: Andri Perrin
Species: Epicanthix
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Knight
Captive? Yes

Appearance:

At 193cm tall, Andri is shorter than average for her people but still taller than most humans. She has thick black hair usually tied back in a loose bun and dark brown eyes, a rounded face with a strong nose and a wide mouth and darkly tanned skin. Her build is lithe and wiry, with no real defining curves to show beneath her robes.


Notable Characteristics of Species:

Epicanthix are immune to Force-assisted mental trick, influence, domination and mind reading.
Epicanthix are identifiable by the epicanthic fold of their eyelids.

Flaws:

Often blinds herself to the flaws or darkness of others, wanting to believe the best in people. She gives chances to everyone, no matter how many times they have betrayed her or others in the past. Doesn’t think long term, living day to day.

Skills:

Basic field first aid (non-force powered)
Diplomacy, politics, history, basic tactics
Knitting
Highly skilled in Form I: Shii-Cho
Adept in Form III: Soresu

Force capabilities:

Tutaminis (basic)
Precognition
Mind Trick
Breath Control
Revitalise
Animal Friendship
Force Stun

Biography:

Andri was born on Panatha in the Outer Rim Territories, but not long after her birth her parents moved further into the known galaxy, to Denon. It was due to this that she was picked up at a very early age by the Jedi Order, and whisked away to the Jedi Academy on Alaris Prime.

She doesn’t remember much of her parents, being just a toddler when she was taken away from them, and so grew into the Jedi way of life very quickly and easily. Her childhood was one of joy and laughter, enjoying her time playing with the other younglings and learning new things. She struggled to learn the lightsaber combat forms however, showing a much higher natural aptitude for the ways of the Force instead, and was soon guided towards the lifestyle of a Consular and diplomat.

She became a Padawan at the age of 10, apprenticing under Jedi Master Ral Shodon. Master Shodon was a stern taskmaster, focusing more on Andri’s prowess in the way of the Jedi than on allowing her to socialise with her agemates. Though her combat abilities never truly grew above average, she learnt Force powers fairly quickly. She was intensely trained in diplomatic endeavours, slowly working out her gullibleness and replacing it with a calm optimism and permanent polite smile.

Master Shodon took Andri on a four year training trip to the Republic Elite’s Resort World of Alassa Major, to mingle with the politicians and elite of the galaxy. Her time spent on Alassa Major was anything but relaxing, as she rubbed elbows with the richest and most affluent of society, learning the ins and outs of public relations and politics, whilst still keeping up her rather stringent training in combat, the history of the republic and the Jedi, and ways of the Force. They ended up staying an extra year to work Andri through her naivety and gullibility, teaching the girl to think things through more instead of instantly believing what people say.

Andri’s Master declared her ready for Knighthood at the age of 21, eleven years after she entered his apprenticeship. She was Knighted traditionally. The next fifteen years of her life were spent bouncing between diplomatic missions and being a spokesperson between the Jedi Council and the Republic, as Master Shodon had trained her to do. When she felt her Master's death, Andri was shocked and has spent what time she can spare between political missions searching for information on the death of her Master and his apprentice at the time.

She was in between missions at the time of the Sacking of Coruscant, readying herself for another trip around the Mid Rim worlds.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Optimistic and calm, she is always smiling and believes that everything will get better, you just have to believe and keep hope alive. She takes each day as it comes, not really thinking beyond the here and now despite her Master’s attempts to instill some sort of long-term thought process.

Player’s long term goals:

Keeping morale up for the captive Jedi, have fun!

Relations:

Jedi Master Ral Shodon - Master. She felt his death two months ago, and has been searching for clues on who killed him since.
Lea Rahn - current apprentice of Master Shodon. Andri has met her multiple times but never developed any friendship with the younger girl. She believes the young girl to be deceased due to being with Master Shodon at the time of his death.

Final Point - Secrets:

Ah, the point that Phantom so inelegantly refers to is that your first submission was denied. Also, that outfit seems a bit...exposed. Is she wearing full length pants to go with it? And the undergarments (bra) showing seem a bit much, considering the only character who remotely shows that much skin is male.

The semblance is good, as I remember it from the wiki, and know that this is the updated version. I don't have a problem with it.

So, yeah. Layla as she is currently is denied, but you are free to submit her again, and we'll review the next version of her after the other submissions.
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