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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Rekaigan
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She's not actually cold blooded, and she has venomous snake slit pupils. She doesn't have the extra skin layer that most reptiles have in their eye lid.

Her upper body clothing is very much like this. Sure it might be a little warm, but not to the point of overheating.
Yes, when I said sling box I meant sling ammunition bag that you mentioned.

I'll change up her backstory so that it's more suitable. Her symbol was actually unchanged from her first iteration and I forgot to change it.

I actually have a new idea for her weapon, which I'll post on the Original weapons forum in a while after I tinker about with it.

I'll be back with an update at some point today.

EDIT: Are there any problems with the Semblance? Or is it okay to leave it that way?
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You seem to have missed the point.
For now you are denied.
Feel free to submit another character, however we will be reviewing other submissions first.
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Could you please tell me what the point was? Rather than just telling me I missed it.
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'you are denied'
we were telling you the reasons for denying your character.
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Ah, the point that Phantom so inelegantly refers to is that your first submission was denied. Also, that outfit seems a bit...exposed. Is she wearing full length pants to go with it? And the undergarments (bra) showing seem a bit much, considering the only character who remotely shows that much skin is male.

The semblance is good, as I remember it from the wiki, and know that this is the updated version. I don't have a problem with it.

So, yeah. Layla as she is currently is denied, but you are free to submit her again, and we'll review the next version of her after the other submissions.
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So do I repost it or do I just edit the original character post?
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post new
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@SpiritedDream

If I may just comment on one of your points. Emerald's outfit is also quite revealing as well. If not more revealing than Layla's.
However, I understand that Emerald isn't showing an undergarment.
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@Rekaigan

I remembered literally just after you said that lol. I think my problem with the bra showing mostly stems from being female myself. I naturally shy away from female characters that specifically state that they are showing their underwear.

However, characters like Emerald who are wearing tops specifically designed to be revealing don't bother me.
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I can understand that myself, and I'm a guy. It's the difference between underwear and swimwear; intent. for example, a bra and panties are meant to be hidden beneath other clothing, whereas a bikini is designed to be worn openly.
they are similar in appearance and function in a fundamentally similar way, but they were meant for different uses.
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just a reminder to anyone who looks into the RP that we need a C and an L initial, also CNR guide can be found on my profile.
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I totally forgot to announce end round.
ah well, that's my fault. not counting the late post against you, mad.
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So what's this next round?
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sorry Phantom, I've been a bit busy with my job

since we're currently missing a member from each team how are we handling the forest?
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Next round is initiation, but we were waiting on getting two new players since Against and Kilt have been offline for a week and haven't replied to any pms asking their whereabouts.
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got it
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Are you still looking for a replacement character?
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two, I think
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We've got a couple possibles lined up, but you're welcome to submit a character.
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