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Shine City II: The Next Season

@IrishAngelQueen welcome back darling, all approved!

@Dynamo Frokane

Happy faces.

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@IrishAngelQueen
That's a badass motorcycle you got there.
Welcome aboard!

@Obscurus

Thank you. it was the only one I could find that didn't suck.
Also-How to jump in?

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Avery Castle/Hephaestus

Avery Castle

"Gonna go and get me a shot
Gonna knock it back forget all my blues
Yeah that really hits the spot
I'm feeling pretty fierce in my dancin' shoes." -Shady, Adam Lambert

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Personal Information

Name:
Avery Esme Castle

Nickname:
Aves, Castle

Birth Date:
Nov. 28

Age:
19

Gender:
Female

Sexuality:
Bisexual

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In The Mirror

In Depth Appearance:
Avery is slim, curvy, five-foot, and four and a half. Her body is lithe from all the dancing she likes to do-a healthy meal of ballroom, with a side or contemporary and jazz, hold the ballet. Her creamy skin and the dark auburn-brown hair inheirited from her irish mother, set off her amber eyes, which glow in the dark sometimes. Her skin is unmarked, except for the tattoo that winds across her left shoulder.

Clothing Style:
Avery likes to wear regular t-shirts, and sometimes halter tops for when it's hot. She mainly wears jeans and lightweight combat boots for regular use, and you'll never see her without her leather jacket. Her type of style is mostly whatever's comfortable, band shirts, and she really likes the steampunk styles.

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Delving Deeper

Likes:

• Dancing: Cha-cha and tango, to be precise.
• Playing with fire.
• Panic! At The Disco-A band.
• Building things.
• Pranks.

Dislikes:

• Spiders.
• Anything pink, except for flowers.
• Snotty girls with high pitched voices.
• Don't call her Aves, she'll kill you.
• Being sassed by thirteen year-olds.
• Crying and what it entails.

Fears:

• Losing control of her powers and dying and/or killing her loved ones.
• Being suffocated, i.e, drowning.
• Has a fear of being grabbed her ankle and dragged down someplace dark and horrifying.

Habits:

• Humming lyrics while she works.
• Occasionally uses dance footwork to worm her way through crowded spaces.
• Draws on her hands and arms.

Personality:

♦ Fierce ♦ Playful ♦ Creative ♦ Protective

Avery can be fierce and sometimes scary, a trick inherited from her mother, but is usually playful and relaxed. Although some people see her as never taking anything serious, she actually is just trying to laugh because she prefers it to crying. She is creative with how she pulls her pranks, as well as new improvements made to weapons and other items, and is very protective of herself and others when threatened, verbally or physically. She usually has many friends, but only a few are close to her, because she has had issues trusting people in the past.

Avery might be able to play with fire, but that doesn't mean she's always bright like one-she was bullied in school, and it fucked her head up. She has self esteem issues, and she tend to lash out sometimes, because she feels so bitter and lonely. But she will realize her mistake and try to make up for it, even if there's no possible way she'll ever be able to.

Background:
Avery lived in Englewood, New Jersey until she was ten years old, when she moved to New York because her mother wanted a change of scenery (or at least, that's what she said), and had a job offer to be a tattooist. She helped her mother with tattoo ideas, and was allowed to go to her workplace after school. Her mom's boss saw no harm in letting her learn how to be a tattooist, and when she turned sixteen she was allowed to work there.

In 2005, Avery discovered a lifelong favorite band-Panic! At The Disco, when they released their first album, A Fever You Can't Sweat Out.She fell in love with their music and idolized them. She's been a fan for years, observing the ways in which the music matured and developed. When she was younger, she was having a rough time at school, and had thoughts of suicide; the popular girls bullied her everyday. Physically and emotionally, but when she listened to Panic! At The Disco, she could feel herself pulling away from depression. It shaped how she processes things and works through her problems. Not to mention her clothing style-she watched I Write Sins Not Tragedies and The Ballad Of Mona Lisa, and she thought, Hey, that's badass lookin'.

Extra:
She has a two year old Doberman named Bellezza that she raised from seven weeks old by hand.
hephaestus helped her create a motorcycle that can fly through the air.
Her Theme
Basically, he's singing about the side of him that fucks everything up, and the side that tries to pick up the slack.

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Godly Information

Godly Parent:
Hephaestus

Relationship With Godly Parent:
Mutual interest in motorcycles, and mutual respect for one another.

Godly Abilities:
-Can fix any broken vehicle (chariots, cars, motorcycles, etc.).
-Manipulate fire: she can control fire that is already lit easily, but creating a small ball in the palm of each hand requires concentration. She can turn the fire into missiles, and use them as little balls of searchlights, but creating huge constructs is beyond her.
-Impervious to high temperatures (high summer doesn't affect her like most people), but eighthundred is way to hot for even her to stand.
-Fire Eyes; the ability to make her eyes glow like flames to see in the dark. She can see things up to five yards away. To turn it on, she imagines that her eyes are balls of fire that are being kindled by wood or gasoline, and to turn it off, she imagines something that fire cannot survive in, like water.

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Looks good to me. You may post her in the Chars Tab. :)

@Altered Tundra

YUS

Shine City II: The Next Season

Ryva Silverstone

Ryva is tall and willowy, and her skin is a honey-colored tan from spending so much time playing her guitar outside. Dhe's light on her feet, and in great health because of all the dancing and running she does.

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Age
24

Height
5'9

Weight
129 lbs

Likes
-Coffee
-Scotch
-Guitar
-Argentine Tango
-Playing guitar with Moose (her dog)

Dislikes
-People who pretend to be something they are not
-People who think it is okay to hit children, women, and animals
-Being cold
-Broccoli
-Men who just want sex

Party Trick
Ryva may know formal dances, but she also knows how to dance dirty.

Profession
Ryva is a Professional Guitarist and Dancer at Club Lush, and does solos with her guitar sometimes.

Personality
Ryva is calm and relaxed most of the time, but if you hurt her or her dog, she will make you regret it. She is artistic, random, and loves to joke around, sometimes she'll pick a random partner, and show them the basic of Argentine Tango, or waltz, and dance around with them. She might have had a bit of a rough childhood, and though it may show from time to time when she forget's her house key and has to pick the lock, she is generally a good person to be around.

Bio
Ryva was only eight when her father left her and her pregnant mother, Zita, for another, younger woman. She cried for weeks, wondering if she did or said something to leave her. Before he left, her father had been really close to Ryva, so it came as a hard blow when he went away, without even a goodbye or a last glance. Zita was only three months pregnant, so she was still able to wait tables at the restaurant where she worked. A few months before Ryva's ninth birthday in October, Zita brought Ryva to work with her. Ryva sat at the counter and practiced on her small guitar, until a man sat besides her on one of the stools. Ryva looked up. He had dark blue eyes, raven black hair that brushed his collar, and a kind smile on his face.

"You practicing your guitar?" the stranger asked with a deep, gentle voice. Ryva nodded, and began talking to him. She liked him. He grew fond of Ryva and her mother, and began dating Zita. When they had been dating for six months, he proposed, and Zita said yes. Ryva was the flower girl at their wedding, and couldn't be happier. her new father was better than the last one, and he never once showed any signs of going away.

His name was Layel Silverstone.

Her Theme

Side Characters

Rixon McCay

Rixon likest to dye his hair every once in a while, and even though he smokes, he's in great health (He only smokes one cigarette every three days, unless he's stressed).

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Age
26

Height
6'4

Weight
214 lbs

Likes
-Playing with Fourbidden City
-Shine City
-Lucca-his sweetheart
-the Beach
-his drums.

Dislikes
-Women with absolutely no morals
-Drunk assholes
-Drunk assholes that are rude to women
-grabby hands
-Rap, but he thinks Eminem is okay

Party Trick
Rixon speaks Gaelic, Hungarian, Russian, Italian, and French.

Profession
Bass Guitarist in Fourbidden city, and has a part time job teaching foreign languages at the school.

Personality
Calm, relaxed-until you piss him off by touching his butt when he's already taken, or if someone he cares for very deeply is hurt or insulted. You wouldn't think it, but he's sarcastic, and has a kitty named Bella.

Bio
Rixon was twelve when Ryva and her family moved next door to him and his dad. Their parents were friends, and since neither kid knew anyone else in that nieghborhood, they became fast friends, and were inseprable. Then a few years after Ryva moved next door, tow other boys moved across from them, Jem and Salem. They all practiced one form of instument or another, and they'd have jam sessions. then as teens, they formed their band and moved to Shine City to do freelance work.

Bella-Likes to lay across Rixon's shoulders

Rixon's Theme

Moose Silverstone

Age
1 year

Likes
-Cats
-Long walks
-The beach
-listening to Ryva sing and play guitar
-swimming
-Pop Rocks (got into some one time. He'll hold his mouth open and listen to them pop)
-Arty

Dislikes
-Big crowds
-Mean smelling people
-People who hurt his people
-Drunks
-Cold feet
-Carrots

Party Trick
He does this thing where Ryva says "Gargoyle mode," and he sits where she tells him to-ears pricked, face serious, not moving a muscle.

Profession
Being Ryva's furry little baby, and guarding her.

Personality
Happy, bright, and clever, Moose sometimes lives up to his name when he almost knocks people over by leaning against them, or herding them with his head. But hurt his momma, and you might get bit-unless Ryva tells him to stop "Moosing around."

Bio
Ryva found him on the side of the road when he was only about a month old. he was shivering in th icy wind, skinny, and dirty. She just had to have him. She insisted that Rixon get out from the passenger side and to go "Get that damn puppy in here right now, or I'll leave you on the side of the road." Rixon had no choice. He brought him back to the van and fed him bits of meat, until Moose fell asleep. the rest is history.

ReBoot Anime Dating City RP (Shine City) (High Casual-Low Advanced)

can i bring my charries back?

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@Altered Tundra
Anything else?

Avery castle/Hephaestus

Avery Castle

"Gonna go and get me a shot
Gonna knock it back forget all my blues
Yeah that really hits the spot
I'm feeling pretty fierce in my dancin' shoes." -Shady, Adam Lambert

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Personal Information

Name:
Avery Esme Castle

Nickname:
Aves, Castle

Birth Date:
Nov. 28

Age:
19

Gender:
Female

Sexuality:
Bisexual

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In The Mirror

In Depth Appearance:
Avery is slim, curvy, five-foot, and four and a half. Her body is lithe from all the dancing she likes to do-a healthy meal of ballroom, with a side or contemporary and jazz, hold the ballet. Her creamy skin and the dark auburn-brown hair inheirited from her irish mother, set off her amber eyes, which glow in the dark sometimes. Her skin is unmarked, except for the tattoo that winds across her left shoulder.

Clothing Style:
Avery likes to wear regular t-shirts, and sometimes halter tops for when it's hot. She mainly wears jeans and lightweight combat boots for regular use, and you'll never see her without her leather jacket. Her type of style is mostly whatever's comfortable, band shirts, and she really likes the steampunk styles.

---

Delving Deeper

Likes:

• Dancing: Cha-cha and tango, to be precise.
• Playing with fire.
• Panic! At The Disco-A band.
• Building things.
• Pranks.

Dislikes:

• Spiders.
• Anything pink, except for flowers.
• Snotty girls with high pitched voices.
• Don't call her Aves, she'll kill you.
• Being sassed by thirteen year-olds.
• Crying and what it entails.

Fears:

• Losing control of her powers and dying and/or killing her loved ones.
• Being suffocated, i.e, drowning.
• Has a fear of being grabbed her ankle and dragged down someplace dark and horrifying.

Habits:

• Humming lyrics while she works.
• Occasionally uses dance footwork to worm her way through crowded spaces.
• Draws on her hands and arms.

Personality:

♦ Fierce ♦ Playful ♦ Creative ♦ Protective

Avery can be fierce and sometimes scary, a trick inherited from her mother, but is usually playful and relaxed. Although some people see her as never taking anything serious, she actually is just trying to laugh because she prefers it to crying. She is creative with how she pulls her pranks, as well as new improvements made to weapons and other items, and is very protective of herself and others when threatened, verbally or physically. She usually has many friends, but only a few are close to her, because she has had issues trusting people in the past.

Avery might be able to play with fire, but that doesn't mean she's always bright like one-she was bullied in school, and it fucked her head up. She has self esteem issues, and she tend to lash out sometimes, because she feels so bitter and lonely. But she will realize her mistake and try to make up for it, even if there's no possible way she'll ever be able to.

Background:
Avery lived in Englewood, New Jersey until she was ten years old, when she moved to New York because her mother wanted a change of scenery (or at least, that's what she said), and had a job offer to be a tattooist. She helped her mother with tattoo ideas, and was allowed to go to her workplace after school. Her mom's boss saw no harm in letting her learn how to be a tattooist, and when she turned sixteen she was allowed to work there.

In 2005, Avery discovered a lifelong favorite band-Panic! At The Disco, when they released their first album, A Fever You Can't Sweat Out.She fell in love with their music and idolized them. She's been a fan for years, observing the ways in which the music matured and developed. When she was younger, she was having a rough time at school, and had thoughts of suicide; the popular girls bullied her everyday. Physically and emotionally, but when she listened to Panic! At The Disco, she could feel herself pulling away from depression. It shaped how she processes things and works through her problems. Not to mention her clothing style-she watched I Write Sins Not Tragedies and The Ballad Of Mona Lisa, and she thought, Hey, that's badass lookin'.

Extra:
She has a two year old Doberman named Bellezza that she raised from seven weeks old by hand.
hephaestus helped her create a motorcycle that can fly through the air.
Her Theme
Basically, he's singing about the side of him that fucks everything up, and the side that tries to pick up the slack.

---

Godly Information

Godly Parent:
Hephaestus

Relationship With Godly Parent:
Mutual interest in motorcycles, and mutual respect for one another.

Godly Abilities:
-Can fix any broken vehicle (chariots, cars, motorcycles, etc.).
-Manipulate fire: she can control fire that is already lit easily, but creating a small ball in the palm of each hand requires concentration. She can turn the fire into missiles, and use them as little balls of searchlights, but creating huge constructs is beyond her.
-Impervious to high temperatures (high summer doesn't affect her like most people), but eighthundred is way to hot for even her to stand.
-Fire Eyes; the ability to make her eyes glow like flames to see in the dark. She can see things up to five yards away. To turn it on, she imagines that her eyes are balls of fire that are being kindled by wood or gasoline, and to turn it off, she imagines something that fire cannot survive in, like water.

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<Snipped quote by IrishAngelQueen>

Not bad overall, but a couple of things:

-More detail on the following sections:

• Personality
  
  • If you could, explain some more about how she is with each trait. Or at least extend it to 1-2 more paragraphs.
• Bio
  
  • Same for powers here, but just explain her life out a bit more. The bio section needs to be two paragraphs, anyways.
• Godly powers
  
  • For the powers, I want it to have some explanation of what she can or can't do. Like, how much fire can she manipulate? How much control does she have over it? Can she create fire or can she only manipulate already existing fire? What can she manipulate it in to? Like, can she form blasts, constructs and the like? If so, how large/small are they and how long can they stay active until time takes its toll?
  • For the high temperatures ability, I need a range of how hot is too hot for her. I get that she's Hephaestus' daughter, but there must be a temperature where it's just too hot for her. Even if nothing, I need some kind of explanation there.
  • As for the fire eyes, how far in the dark can she see? Is there a limit of how far ahead of her she can see? Also, can she make out things that are naturally invisible in the dark, such as a chameleon or those with the power of invisibility? Also, I need a decent explanation of how she turns it on/off.

Fix what I mentioned and she's accepted.

@Altered Tundra

okay.

ReBoot Anime Dating City RP (Shine City) (High Casual-Low Advanced)

Hell yeah! Also, gotaa watxch this. f'n hilarious.

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Finished!

Avery castle/Hephaestus

Avery Castle

"Gonna go and get me a shot
Gonna knock it back forget all my blues
Yeah that really hits the spot
I'm feeling pretty fierce in my dancin' shoes." -Shady, Adam Lambert

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Personal Information

Name:
Avery Esme Castle

Nickname:
Aves, Castle

Birth Date:
Nov. 28

Age:
19

Gender:
Female

Sexuality:
Bisexual

---

In The Mirror

In Depth Appearance:
Avery is slim, curvy, five-foot, and four and a half. Her body is lithe from all the dancing she likes to do-a healthy meal of ballroom, with a side or contemporary and jazz, hold the ballet. Her creamy skin and the dark auburn-brown hair inheirited from her irish mother, set off her amber eyes, which glow in the dark sometimes. Her skin is unmarked, except for the tattoo that winds across her left shoulder.

Clothing Style:
Avery likes to wear regular t-shirts, and sometimes halter tops for when it's hot. She mainly wears jeans and lightweight combat boots for regular use, and you'll never see her without her leather jacket. Her type of style is mostly whatever's comfortable, band shirts, and she really likes the steampunk styles.

---

Delving Deeper

Likes:

• Dancing: Cha-cha and tango, to be precise.
• Playing with fire.
• Panic! At The Disco-A band.
• Building things.
• Pranks.

Dislikes:

• Spiders.
• Anything pink, except for flowers.
• Snotty girls with high pitched voices.
• Don't call her Aves, she'll kill you.
• Being sassed by thirteen year-olds.
• Crying and what it entails.

Fears:

• Losing control of her powers and dying and/or killing her loved ones.
• Being suffocated, i.e, drowning.
• Has a fear of being grabbed her ankle and dragged down someplace dark and horrifying.

Habits:

• Humming lyrics while she works.
• Occasionally uses dance footwork to worm her way through crowded spaces.
• Draws on her hands and arms.

Personality:

♦ Fierce ♦ Playful ♦ Creative ♦ Protective

Avery can be fierce and sometimes scary, a trick inherited from her mother, but is usually playful and relaxed. Although some people see her as never taking anything serious, she actually is just trying to laugh because she prefers it to crying. She is creative with how she pulls her pranks, as well as new improvements made to weapons and other items, and is very protective of herself and others when threatened, verbally or physically. She usually has many friends, but only a few are close to her, because she has had issues trusting people in the past.

Background:
Avery lived in Englewood, New Jersey until she was ten years old, when she moved to New York because her mother wanted a change of scenery (or at least, that's what she said), and had a job offer to be a tattooist. She helped her mother with tattoo ideas, and was allowed to go to her workplace after school. Her mom's boss saw no harm in letting her learn how to be a tattooist, and when she turned sixteen she was allowed to work there.

Extra:
She has a two year old Doberman named Bellezza that she raised from seven weeks old by hand.
hephaestus helped her create a motorcycle that can fly through the air.
Her Theme

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Godly Information

Godly Parent:
Hephaestus

Relationship With Godly Parent:
Mutual interest in motorcycles, and mutual respect for one another.

Godly Abilities:
-Can fix any broken vehicle (chariots, cars, motorcycles, etc.).
-Manipulate fire.
-Impervious to high temperatures (high summer doesn't affect her like most people).
-Fire Eyes; the ability to make her eyes glow like flames to see in the dark.