@BigPapaBelial I'd like you to flesh out her personality a bit more. What does she like? What pisses her off? How does she view surface folk in comparison to the institute. Also the formatting of the backstory was a bit difficult to read. I would recommend shifting it to the left instead of having it centered.
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Engineer role is now closed!
@Timemaster Accepted, glad to have another utility character on the team! Post her in the character tab.
Sorry, last PSA for today:
Weapons Expert and Infiltrator roles are closed.
@Sifter
You're fine since you already had a sheet started.
Weapons Expert and Infiltrator roles are closed.
@Sifter
You're fine since you already had a sheet started.
@Andreyich
Make it an unsilenced sniper rifle and we have a deal. You still have a lot of stealth capabilities with the stealthboys
Make it an unsilenced sniper rifle and we have a deal. You still have a lot of stealth capabilities with the stealthboys
Also, PSA:
I will cap the player list at 7. Don't worry, I'll give everyone a reasonable amount of time to finish but if we're close to cap and I find your sheet lacking, someone else might get the slot.
EDIT: 7 + myself, so 8 total
I will cap the player list at 7. Don't worry, I'll give everyone a reasonable amount of time to finish but if we're close to cap and I find your sheet lacking, someone else might get the slot.
EDIT: 7 + myself, so 8 total
@Andreyich
The sheet is fine but you'll need to choose a different primary weapon, Anti Material Rifle is too powerful.
@Sad Ogo
Accepted! Post him in the character tab
@Sifter
Looks good so far, but remember the lore about ghouls going feral. The backstory will be the clincher.
@Timemaster
I have a number of questions. How did Alexis learn how to link her brain to mechanical arms? Certainly not by messing with contraptions left by caravans. The only group even remotely capable of that knowledge in the commonwealth is the institute.
How did she get from Boston to California and how long did it take her? Why did she leave the east coast in the first place?
Finally, Having two extra arms, a powerful shotgun, a power fist, and NVG eyepatch is too much. If you can properly explain the arms in the backstory, I will let you keep them as well as the eyepatch but you'll have to settle for a weaker weapon and weaker armor.
The sheet is fine but you'll need to choose a different primary weapon, Anti Material Rifle is too powerful.
@Sad Ogo
Accepted! Post him in the character tab
@Sifter
Looks good so far, but remember the lore about ghouls going feral. The backstory will be the clincher.
@Timemaster
I have a number of questions. How did Alexis learn how to link her brain to mechanical arms? Certainly not by messing with contraptions left by caravans. The only group even remotely capable of that knowledge in the commonwealth is the institute.
How did she get from Boston to California and how long did it take her? Why did she leave the east coast in the first place?
Finally, Having two extra arms, a powerful shotgun, a power fist, and NVG eyepatch is too much. If you can properly explain the arms in the backstory, I will let you keep them as well as the eyepatch but you'll have to settle for a weaker weapon and weaker armor.
@Kale19 So I have a few questions. How is Webster a ghoul and his parents weren't? What killed his parents? How is it they survived the bombs but didn't turn into ghouls?
If he doesn't wear clothes, wear does he keep the ammo for his shotgun? How does he carry his grenades? How did he learn how to make bombs? As far as Webster going feral, the only in game evidence to why this happens is an extraordinary amount of radiation for a prolonged amount of time that causes the brain to deteriorate. If Webster was constantly traveling, how is he more exposed than the average ghoul?
@Sifter
The above is also something to keep in mind for your character as well.
If he doesn't wear clothes, wear does he keep the ammo for his shotgun? How does he carry his grenades? How did he learn how to make bombs? As far as Webster going feral, the only in game evidence to why this happens is an extraordinary amount of radiation for a prolonged amount of time that causes the brain to deteriorate. If Webster was constantly traveling, how is he more exposed than the average ghoul?
@Sifter
The above is also something to keep in mind for your character as well.
@psych0pomp Top notch character sheet, glad to have you aboard! Go ahead and post her in the characters tab.
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