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Okay, sorry it's taken so long for me to respond, long story short, been stressed out about some things, so...yeah. Anyway...

@TheUnknowable: I still don't really get the logic behind his problems with the school, but...whatever. Moving on, he couldn't have transferred from an American contractor school because, as I said in the OP, Covenant's meant to be unique in that regard. Also, I figure I should just throw this out there, because I really didn't explain it very well in the first post, but despite its location and how the grades/clubs work, the academy is an independent nation, separate from Japan.

In addition, this kind of bugged me before, but I figured there were more important things to comment on, the dwarf's personality seems extremely basic. A bit too one note for my liking, to be honest. Also, a freshman having the money to travel to and from Italy seems a little odd to me.

@Art: Looks good for the most part. My only issue is that the contracted being's powers should go under summon, the "powers" bit is for passive abilities granted to the contractor.
Um, since my character doesn't really sit well with some of the additions to the setting, I think I'm going to try to work out a replacement, rather than finishing that profile. ^^;
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Sorry to hear that.
Alex Quilldrake stood by the school's front gate, gazing back towards the school. While far from the worst work he'd done with the security team, keeping watch for anyone starting a fight like this was...well, boring. Sure, occasionally, one of his friends or classmates would come up and chat for a minute before heading home but soon enough, the boy was back to watching absolutely nothing happen.

Then Roland made his entrance.

A small smirk worked its way onto Alex's face as he raced towards the other boy's location. Sure, it happened every other week, but he wasn't going to risk a brawl breaking out this time. The fact that it meant getting away from watching nothing happen by the front gate? Definitely not part of the reason he was so keen to check the situation out. That would just be irresponsible. As he got close, a light began to form in the blond boy's right hand, which was quickly replaced by the legendary sword, Excalibur. It was better to be safe than sorry, right?

"Fool!" He exclaimed, pointing the (still-sheathed) weapon at the other boy. More for dramatic emphasis than any interest in fighting him. "What kind of hero goes around looking for fights?!"
@Raineh Daze: Accepted.
Sorry this took so long, been kind of distracted by other stuff lately. ^^;

@Guy: That seems alright with me.

@Sketcher: For the most part it seems good, the only thing I'm concerned about is the speed. Even without the reflexes to make quick turns/stops, it seems like a bit much for someone's base powers, especially coming from something not specifically known for speed.

@TheUnknowable: The academy's rules really aren't that strict or oppressive, to be honest. Trying to force anything overly strict on teenagers with super powers just seems like a bad idea.
Momoko stared in awe at the monster before her. A large dragon, easily fifty foot from head to tail, maybe more. The creature's body was covered in crimson scales, forming a natural suit of armour. Occasionally, the beast opened its gaping maw, revealing razor sharp teeth that could easily crush bones...well, when they weren't obscured by a large gout of flame, hot enough to cook a person alive in seconds. Of course, it didn't even look like it would need to use those, as its limbs each ended in a set of claws that seemed sharp enough to tear through flesh and armour with equal ease. The brunette swallowed hard. Someone had to defeat this monster, it had caused too much pain and suffering to be allowed to continue living, and she was the only one willing and able to do it.

To anyone looking her way, Momoko's current activity looked far less heroic. She was simply playing with a portable gaming device as she left the anime club's room and began on her way home. What might not be immediately obvious was just how little attention she was paying to her surroundings. Having taken basically the same way home each day since she started high school, she was more or less on auto-pilot. Generally, this wasn't an issue and she got back to her apartment with no problems. Today, however, there was an obstacle she wasn't expecting. Obliviously, she continued on a collision course with a certain guitarist.
Just wondering, what sort of theme are the Riders going to have?
@Dead Cruiser: I agree with what Vita said about it and honestly, I'd like an actual explanation of his strength. It's one thing to list off characters and a game designer (by the way, he worked on several games with normal human protagonists and I honestly don't know about putting the rest on the same level), but...I'd like to know what sort of stuff we can expect. Are they strong enough to throw cars around, uproot trees to use as clubs, suplex trains, that sort of thing.
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