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7 yrs ago
had my allergic reaction to dog hair used against me in a judo tourney. fine line between preparing for your opponent's weakness and whatever this was
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7 yrs ago
something witty and likeable
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8 yrs ago
"Better to be a warrior in a garden than a gardener in a war."
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**EDITED**

@t2wave@Zarkun
What if I were to adapt on your first idea? Maybe in the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was betrayed (killed) and his family was banished? Still illustrious and really adds to the 'vengeful' part of him whilst keeping to RP canon. Would that work?
@Zarkun@t2wave
Hmmm, yeah guess without the support of dragons, like the Kingdom of Dragonof, it would have been difficult for another large kingdom to have existed as well with dragons reigning supreme. How would you edit it to fit so?
**EDITED**

@t2wave
Well he's gonna have to do so at first but what's a king without his subjects and supporters?^

@Zarkun
Fixed the first part but I'm sorry to say that I'm not quite sure what you want me to fix on the backstory, I mean I did mention Acnologia's rise in the Dragon King Festival soooo?
@KatherinWinter@RinOkumara@Arya10108909

Lobo warily eyes the girl who just hugged, being more uncomfortable than he would like to be with the first act of affection since.. though he would never admit it. His attention snaps back to the annoying blonde who grew more and more annoying by the minute, "Call me 'fireball' again and let's just see what happens when I shove one down your throat," he growled losing his remarkably short patience. He turns back to the old man, "Good luck with getting everyone to play nice with each other," he shoots a glance off at Sven, "Also.. monsters?"
Appearance:

Name: Lobo Herrero

Age: 17

Gem: Obsidian

Power: Fire - Though he is able to produce his own fire, it tires himself out faster than manipulating already existing sources of fire so he carries his own zippo lighter around. He can control flames with ease whilst also being subject to extremely high temperature without harm. Lobo is able to form constructs with his fire; fireballs, tornadoes and even quasi-sentient beings of fire.
Lava - With the scarcity of lava above the Earth's crust Lobo is completely unaware of this power. However with this he can even survive within an active volcano without worry, something that would have been impossible with his control over fire alone.

Bio: Lobo was born to a family of eight, even for a child he could always be found with a bright smile on his face. That was until tragedy struck when the Herrero household, save Lobo and his younger sister Clara, died in a horrible car crash. Having no other relatives to turn the two had ended up in the system and to make matter even worse Lobo and Clara were separated into different foster homes.

Lobo, the smiling child was no more and the years of suffering abuse from foster parents, expulsions from school and getting into fights have taken a toll; changing him into indifferent and cold runaway who's prone to violence.

A month ago he found a piece of obsidian lodged right above his heart, visible on his chest. Ever since then he has been experimenting with his newfound powers, finding them quite useful during his late night escapades. Fast forward to the present and Lobo has his interest piqued by the email, with claims of knowledge on the mysterious gem.

"Oh you're unconscious?" The white-haired teen drops the comatose soldier, "That was boring.. eh?" The sudden strong winds catching his attention, the strong gusts making him pause and blink. Sol watches, off from a distance, at the scenes that were unfolding; the looters, HYDRA soldiers, classmates who were right now schooling the two groups and not to mention the burning buildings, speaking of which..

With a wave of his hand the pyrokinetic torches up the nearest structure on fire: a modest-looking apartment complex, with the much hotter cosmic flames eating up the source of oxygen, the regular ol' plain fires had little time before they were snuffed out with the lack of fuel to burn. Satisfied with his work he disperses his own flames, leaving the apartment somewhat charred but no longer on fire. "Neat." Sol murmurs to himself before flying off to other burning buildings to the same.

@Mistress Dizzy@KatherinWinter
**EDITED**

Just addressing some points made^

@Zarkun
I didn't quite get your critique on the Tattoo Magic or maybe it's just that I didn't clarify it (which soon become all too common). The magic allows him to create/erase tattoos on himself and this just goes hand in hand with his runes. So yeah guess it's my bad on that one.

The thing on 'nigh-unbreakable' bones I get sorta but I mean there's always impalement and internal damage, also if something were strong enough to break his bones then I reckon it would result in something much more worse than a broken arm or leg.

The unicorn blood part.. yeah I just wanted to insert an interesting tidbit in with everything.

Uhh our reflexes depend on how fast signals transmit from our body to the brain, no? I'm not an expert in the field so I might be horribly wrong but I thought that was the general consensus. Also note to Rune of Strength's faster muscles. Did tone the increase down through, being faster than a trained speed magic user is over the top.

The Imperial Eye, first off: thanks for noticing the amount of effort I put into^ Very heartening, I was brainstorming for a good hour or so and the mechanics of it^ Forgot to include the last part of Sacred Commandment, whoops. Thought an hour would be enough at first but then realised just how ridiculous that was, so I changed it to a day and completely spent like you advised to.

Aaaand the backstory.. yeah I didn't spend enough time with it as I should have. Once again: my bad.

@Crimson Raven
Just wanted to say: you didn't seem so harsh at all, I completely got where you came from and grateful for not jumping the gun there with Nico.

Swore I edited the age to early 20s or so. Now I've done so. Addressed the unicorn blood part, didn't really go for the 'pure of heart' but it's misleading, so removed.

Downgraded the Barrier and y'know I always thought Abyss Break as building buster tier with Fairy Law a selective army buster and Etherion being a solid island buster. Thanks for clearing that up with me, did not know.

The teleportation seemed great at first, I was sorta basing my Runes off of Narutoverse seals and other stuff so that ability seemed to key in. Guess I needed someone to tell me that would be overpowered on top of everything else.

Nico's impulsive and confident for good reason, ego being his most prominent personality trait. And he would like his throne back, as he was raised to desire the one thing he was taken in for. The guy's a magic Vegeta or Namor, an anti-hero coming from a royal background with too much pride and ego.

Sorry, slipped my mind to name the sword from the Transcendant Blade.

Okay this part really confused me and it may just be me. I looked over the character section there was a few S classes here and there. So with his pre-edited powerset I didn't see fit to call him an A class and it was my mistake to not have it clarified before.

Edited parts of the backstory you mentioned, while keeping true to what it was originally.

Yeah sooo.. thanks for the constructive criticism, was very helpful^ Eager to join y'all^
@Caits@Burthstone

Eh my bad, seems I glossed over a lot. I didn't know I had to talk with Caits about my character. Apologise for this and I'll be sure to edit everything you all mentioned.
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