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6 yrs ago
Current Writing like you ate a Thesaurus does not make you a better writer.
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7 yrs ago
After a full month I finally got Internet in my new appartment. And they say we germans are punctual :/
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7 yrs ago
Quit Work and enrolled in College. Strangely enough I got a lot more time for this site now.
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8 yrs ago
After some unintentional time off I am back.
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@NewShoesForever Y'all are making my Knights to incompetent/nice
You are not the only one who does that. The way I envision them, Heqets apartments were probably all burned and everyone he had a conversation longer than 5 minutes with had to undergo hourlong questionings by Inquisitors. No protege of him is still alive or living a public life.
@NewShoesForever No Clone, that would be against God. But perhaps he was found out and captured that would make sense.
@NewShoesForever Sure, but why would he do that?
@Shard Never played the game but the picture was fitting for what I had in mind.
@Dawnscroll Sure 1 or 2 more should still fit. Go for it!



Im back!

@RoccanIronclad A few problems. The first is that you reverence Djinn society. I don't think such a thing would be fitting for the setting since a species that is hunted every hour of the day could not really build a society. Also Djinns have parents? Another thing is that he would attack anyone that would disrespect his race, if that would be the case he would be dead within minutes considering every knight would call him an abomination from the pits of hell. I think you made him a bit too much like a human with some superpowers. The last thing is that the leader of The Knights is far too busy to deal with individual cases so you can just make up another lower ranking member of the Order as the man/woman who bound him. I hope I don't sound too harsh .

@Tass I really like your take on the Golem and honestly don't have any problem with the char! You can move her to the Character tab.

@Shard I like how active you are . I like the char but you have to consider he is a closeted gay, demonic boy in a organization that considers both to be abominations I also like the familiar also they both will have a hard time and not many freedoms. Accepted!

@T Risket I actually laughed at the part you wrote about him not being a missing link . I really enjoy the character and can see him fitting in quite well! Accepted!

@Loki Odinson Sure I am looking forward to your char!

@Yuria I really like the char. Definitely the darkest one yet. I am guessing Nahash is an ancient demon or spirit of sorts? Either way accepted!

@NewShoesForever This character fits much more! I am just not sure whether his background as a CEO would it. The Order does not let the members of the Judas Unit leave without permission so running a company would not be possibly or even allowed.

@everyone Did I miss something or anymore questions?
Lurking on my phone... Wont post much till monday.
@NewShoesForeverI have to agree with the previous post. It does not really fit in the setting.

@everyone I will be home for the weekend so im sorry to say that I will probably post again on monday.
@RoccanIroncladI would like to see your Char. Go try it.
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