The Patriarch

Titans Together!

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That's not a good thing.

@SilverDawn

You a Naruto hater? I don't watch anime anymore, but Naruto was great

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*looks over cs*

And so he does. Alright then.

@Scarifar

I based him off of Deadpool who duel wields two swords and most of the badass mercenaries in DC have swords. Just imagine a sword charged with electricity? Very painful cut and makes me think of Naruto

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edited my previous post

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Bolt was hacking through several aliens when he saw that most of the aliens were disappearing into portals. What a bunch of cowards, he thought to himself as he sheathed his swords. Bolt was now bored and wondered what to do next. He had fought a hero earlier and killed several aliens, he wanted to up his game and become even more infamous. He watched some of the other heroes do their work and he laughed at them going around helping people. If they had powers then why waste it on the weak? It made no sense to him.

"Now what should I do?" he said to himself and thought for moment. He could go do some more stealing or he could go fight some more heroes. Bolt wasn't sure about what to do and then it popped into his head. When you can't think of anything to do with your time then there was one thing to do.

"I'll go get some vodka" he exclaimed and then hoped onto his surfboard to take off for a bar. He could use a good drink especially after being hurt by the hero in his fight and also since he felt a little tired from using so much power to kill a lot of aliens. He would love it when his mouth would get filled by the life-nectar of his mother Russia.

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There's so much going on I can't reply to one thing, so i'll try to get on the things that most of you are talking about.

1)It is ridiculous that you had a seven million car to begin with. Finding a random, unnamed, super powered mechanic is even more so. That's the same as if one of the hero characters decided to find a sidekick and started rping like that.

2)Yes it is just a car, so let it go, if you really want to take care of a care that badly join a racing RP. I think I saw an interest check for one earlier. Your guy rides around on a board anyways.

3)Your character has been using his powers all day but he's not at all fatigued, make it so he's tired. I imagine trying to blast everything in sight is taking it's toll on him.

If you guys really want to argue some more, we can take it into the pms, but I would like for this to stop now.

@KriticalKrab

it hasn't seemed like it's been hours, it seems like it's only been half an hour at max in the rp. I didn't read anything that seemed like a lot of time had passed in the rp.

The Outsiders (DC comics based OC Superhero RP)

Adam smiled when he saw the hailstorm of light balls head towards them and he quickly got in front of his team and focused his energy construct creation to craft a massive weapon. He created a giant mounted heavy machine-gun with a large gun-shield. The gun-shield was big enough to cover the entire team from the front and the spheres of light bounced off of the shield. The shield was almost totally transparent to allow his teammates to still see what was happening on the other side of the weapon. Adam had crafted the weapon so that it had a normal-sized handle and trigger.

He pulled the trigger and began firing off a massive amount of energy bullets. This time the rounds were very hot and would hit with a concussive force. he was going to give Twilight a taste of her own medicine and maybe get rid of her arrogant attitude. He then began to sweep over the opposing team with his weapon's gunfire and thanks to it being lighter than ordinary weapons he was able to move the massive gun, but it took a good amount of effort. Unless they made some incredible evasive action Twilight's team would be hit by a hailstorm of energy bullets.

Adam wasn't expecting to have to go this far with his powers, but he saw no choice, he was in it to win this game of capture the flag. He was hoping that this attack would distract the other team so that it would give his team an opening to hit them hard and fast.

"When Twilight stops her attack I want you all to attack as quickly as possible, I'll hold fire to give you more room to move. Remember to watch each others' back" he ordered his team.

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I have mentioned surviving an explosive laser bolt to the chest without any significant injuries, if any, as well as releasing huge waves of electricity without becoming even remotely tired.

@Scarifar

I did at least have him take the hit and he clearly made the exclamation of being hurt, but I can post next with him feeling the injury. Also in my character sheet I clearly stated that he can release enough electricity to combust his enemies. He has huge reserves of electricity

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1. That's just life. Sometimes people shoot space junk and total 7 million dollar cars and that's okay. You just gotta move on.

2. That's the issue, it's too convenient and borderline cheating to have a super-powered guy down the road who can fix your stuff almost immediately, and that's me ignoring the actual form of damage the car's sustained.

3. I don't get this one.

4. This one is sort of irrelevant. It's just the fact that your essentially making your character a mini-mary-sue by having all these advantages available to you at the flick of a wrist.

5. This one's down to KriticalKrab, but I'm pretty sure the answer to this would be no, since the whole adolescent thing is in play.

Anyway, that's just my series of opinions since I feel as though I should get involved in these discussions more. I feel so social right now.

So social

@Ostarion

but it's just a car, it's mot like he repaired some insanely powerful weapon the guy. I feel like your problems would be more reasonable under a different circumstance. Also how is he a Mary-sue? He's done nothing OP.

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Really, @The Patriarch? I didn't want to be the one to say this, but your posting style is... how do I describe it... convenient. Probably not the best word to describe it, but perhaps I should explain my reasoning.

The first thing I started disliking was when Bolt was shot by a security guard, but you weren't too badly injured due to a bulletproof vest. However, I was willing to forgive that since I myself have no experience dealing with bulletproof vests and shouldn't be one to judge about that.

Then Bolt was able to dodge Press' laser that targeted Bolt's bag of money. In that post you claimed that he "noticed the hero." How? Press and Bolt weren't exactly next to each other or even in front of each other when it happened. Still, I was willing to forgive that too, since there weren't exactly precise details about their locations.

Then on to the subject of getting shot by Press' laser. Bolt was hit by a laser bolt that explodes upon impact. And I mean EXPLODES. Bolt just shrugged it off like it was nothing. Bulletproof vest or no, intense training by the Shadows or no, Bolt does not have toughened skin or anything like that, so it shouldn't be possible for Bolt to not at least feel some lingering pain from that.

Finally, your latest post. Lifting a car, even if it is a completely totaled car, and your surfboard using electromagnetism? A guy that repairs a car in a minute? For a car that's practically been sliced into two? It sounds just far too perfect. Seriously, intense training by these so-called Shadows or not, He's still an adolescent. He's already been releasing massive amounts of electricity, and I highly doubt this car mechanic was right around the corner. Even if he was, repairing that kind of damage in merely a minute is quite outrageous. If it were that easy for anyone to do, Press could have done it himself.

What I'm trying to say is that you seem to be trying to make your character as unbeatable and as perfect as possible while barely staying under the radar of Mary Sue detection. You use this whole "Shadows" story as an excuse to have your character be stronger than an average adolescent. Thing is, our characters are still adolescents. They still have things to learn. You seem to have had Bolt learn everything but restraint. Frankly, it's quite too much.

@Scarifar

first of all you guys destroyed my character's car, which I could have complained as being a dick move, but I didn't. Also the machanic has superpowers and can repair any form of machinery, it's his powers. Also he's a villain and has been trained for a long time to harness his powers. He's not a member of the titans. Also to say that English is not my first language is very rude of you.

I don't see why you guys are complaining about him getting his car fixed, it's not like I killed your characters. Again HE'S A VILLAIN, he's suppose to be fairly powerful and lifting a totaled car with electromagnetism is easy, it's not like he is exerting any kind of physical strength. I'll agree that the grammar may not have been that great, but I have busy schedule and don't want to fall behind.

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Bolt got even more angry when more debris totaled his car and he released a massive blast of electricity which blew away several vehicles and killed a few people. Great now he had a totaled car that pissed him off.

"GOD FUCKING DAMNIT! That was my favorite car!" he shouted out loud and then grunted in pain from the laser wound he had received earlier from Press. He took out his medieval swords and looked around for more aliens to kill and he began to hack into them furiously.