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@EliteCommander
Thanks for clearing that up. Might bring Radda there..
Also I'm working on a post, for those of you waiting. It's not much but its a start.
@Zarkun

Paradise is a club right?
Conda stays watching the rodent leave for a sec, wondering if he could find someone else to take on his task, then turns back to his work in a cloud of smoke.
@Searat

"So than I recommend signing up on the owners wanted poster outside.. maybe speakings not required.." Conda trails off.
@BKburke

The facehugger spins around violently in its containment. The bright light makes it reeling away from it all. But despite it all, it can feel a presence similar to its own. So it reaches out telepathically to the bigger creature.. where ever it was- somewhere close it felt. The facehugger sends a message to help it and the others.
@Sep Here you go.

@Zarkun

Haha k, good call.
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First nitpick, Empire has only fallen a few months prior to the start of the RP.
Edited, assuming I fixed the thing you were referring to.

Second; the tracking thing. It's kinda...vague. How does he track a target through a city scape, especially if say, this person has been on the run for awhile and has gotten good at blending in.
Are you talking about the point I made in the strength section? Can that not be something I make an example of IC?

Also there's the vision thing, I can't say it granting him foresight is OK...since you say it lets him see his opponent's moves before they make them.
That part I left over from my first draft that you saw, true, I shouldn't have left it in. He's not a force user anymore, so I changed it up.

@Searat

Conda looks at the creature for a second, then at the glowing embers of his pipe, then back at the creature for a moment.

"well..." He says sitting forward a little. "There is that help wanted poster hanging outside from the owner. I believe you just sign your name and the owner will brief you with a task."

"...Or, there may be something you could do for me, a small task. You see I'm having a chest plate of armor made by one very skilled and stubborn blacksmith located in a city called Orn. I have an amulet here I would like to have embedded in the armor piece, but I know that this particular blacksmith will be adverse to adding it to my piece. I could use someone who won't give up and can use persuasion to get the job done. Maybe this person is you, maybe not. The only thing is you don't speak, that is unfortunate.. really a shame. Is there really no way you can speak?"
@Searat

"So you don't speak, and you want something to write on? Well luckily for you I have pen and paper out right now." Conda says casually enough.

"Please, sit." He extends a long arm across the table, palm up, motioning to the seat opposite him.

Conda pulls out a fresh sheet of papyrus paper and dips his fountain pen into the ink well, and lays it all out opposite him.

"There, we, go- ahh! Ready when you are- but write SMALL... this is unbelievably rare papyrus paper from Egypt, of Earth!"

Conda, for the most part has taken on an almost trance-like state as he procures pen and paper for the rodent creature. His eye's gloss over, covering all natural emotion but complete zealotry for the task at hand. "What fun!"
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