Expllo- accepted; just be mindful of your syntax and grammar--there were a few run on sentences and grammar mishaps, and I can see (much like myself) you enjoy commas. I am the self-proclaimed comma whore, which has been a work in progress, but make sure you are proofreading your work.
ShadowedRaven- a few issues with the CS, which could be blamed on me as I didn't fully explain it in the blurb above. Lycans in this RP aren't born, they are created through bites. It's an infection, so unfortunately there is no blood-line of lycans....unless the parent lycan decides it wants to bite its child I suppose. Either way, the detail that she was born into Lycanthropy is not possible. All Lycans are technically part Mundane, so the half/half thing doesn't need to be stated since they still retain part of their human self (unlike vamps and whatnot that actually die and bleed out and reject the Mundane part of themselves). The not shifting thing won't work out either, since once you are infected you have to turn on the first full-moon, it's inevitable. Also, there are no epic battles between Lycans and Vampires, it's against the code of The Clave. They have a natural disdain for each other, but it's law that the peace remain between the Downworlders. There can be individual conflict and fights, but nothing involving the whole pack and clan...yet, at least. Anyways, these are pretty major things to be fixed, so patch up all that in your CS and let me know when you are done revising and I will reread it and go from there!