VeyrinDay

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Can I use 1st person Pov with present tense?

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Alright, my CS is now filled and fluffed. I added the detail in her dark impulse and revelry so that it might be coherent in the play. I also added some details in ability to ease the future technicalities.

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wait, I'd like to reassign the actions. I've just read the source book and find the ones more in line with my imagined style

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This CS is incomplete

Baganaria the Apostate

Name: (Her Alluring Eminence) Baganaria the Apostate, Grand Priestess of Iziza, Abbess-Queen of the Order of Eternal Temptation
Race: Succubus, Agratim subrace
Appearance:
Her Alluring Eminence is almost human-like in appearance except for her strangely pale alabaster skin, dim purple iris, and dark aura. Her dress reveals some areas of her abdomen from her lower bosoms to around a double-inches below her navel, allowing the necessary parts of her body to be unobstructed for her magic to take effect. Long white hairs hang on her head, adorned with spiked crown.

Image

Personality:
Her Alluring Eminence demands respect and devotion from others. She's aesthetically radical, appreciating beauty in all its manifestations, beyond traditionally accepted concept and form of the beauty itself.

Calling: Zealot
Dark Impulse: Obsessed
Revelry: Occult
Vile Friend: Unknown
Defenses:

Seductive Vestements:(Against Caught Lying) The Grand Priestess of Iziza is adorned with a desire-captivating robe that is able to render any awareness toward even simple lies useless.

0 / 6 Stress || 0 / 9 Wicked XP || 0 / 3 Reckless XP || 0 / 2 Dark Hearts

B R A I N S

[ ★ ] [ ★ ] [ - ] SCAN / perceptively
[ ★ ] [ - ] [ - ] TINKER / cleverly
[ ★ ] [ ★ ] [ ★ ] TRICK / slyly

M U S C L E S

[ - ] [ - ] [ - ] FINESSE / precisely
[ ★ ] [ - ] [ - ] SKULK / sneakily
[ - ] [ - ] [ - ] SMASH / powerfully

G U T S

[ - ] [ - ] [ - ] BANTER / affably
[ ★ ] [ ★ ] [ - ] INVOKE / magically
[ - ] [ - ] [ - ] THREATEN / forcefully

Abilities:

0 / 3 Defiler's Clock

Racial - Alluring: : You can spend stress to turn on the charm, TRICKing victims into coming closer to you.
Weakness - Holy: : You have a weakness to the Light's power.
Defiler: 0/4 Tick this clock once each time you defile something sacred or beautiful that is antithetical to your god’s domains. When the clock is full, a tier 2 ritual immediately manifests in that location and you start a new clock.

Inventory:

1 / 3 Gold || 2 / 2 Supply

Gear: All your stuff goes here.

Vestments of the Great Temptress (Edge: Light): (Defense Gear) Fluff pending
Ceremonial Dagger: Muscle Action related gear, Fluff pending
Blink Boots (Contraption): Fluff pending

Supplies: Everything else.

@VeyrinDay

I've attempted to complete my defense and gears, is this acceptable, especially for the gears?

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@Mae
I still don't get about weakness and why do my character has to have one in the abilities example you provided.

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@VeyrinDay

Page 111 in the book as an example of your items a zealot might have. Specifically they mention: ceremonial dagger, unholy symbol, vestments, simple sickle, scripture, golden bell, blessed wine, box of incense, quill & parchment, torture tools, anointing oil, and wax candles. Basically notably things that you think your character would have that is useful. Perhaps she wears a perfume that's makes humans intoxicated around her. Or maybe she wears a very seductive nun outfit that does the same. Perhaps her holy symbol looks like one for a god of light, but is actually one for your dark god and also a knife.

Your defense comes from said items. For example if you ever flub a roll to talk someone into falling for your lies, perhaps you have an item that protects you from that failure in a way that makes sense. Using the previously mentioned example, you have that intoxicating perfume. You try talking to an adventurer to trick him into thinking you're an innocent woman kidnapped by monsters but he see's through your lies. You can then invoke your defensive item i.e. the perfume and say something like it's scent makes the adventurer forget his doubts and thinks you're telling the truth, this time at least.

That's just an example of course. Page 53 has more specific information about what defenses are so you could pick and choose your defense from there. You just need to make sure you have an item that could facilitate that defense happening. Specific examples of defenses are the following: minion mistakes, detection, magic, being caught lying, wounds, enemy movement, or containment. Though I imagine that you can choose based off your abilities as well. Dark Cloud for example is going to have a Defense due to his naturally small size that gives him a better chance of defending himself against ranged attacks.

@Lucius Cypher

I'll have one of your suggestion

Likely I'll take my time having to thoroughly read the rules for another time when there are no pressure in immediately starting the IC, lol

Now I still have to check the effects...

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I got my OC, is this acceptable? is there anything I should tweak? :)

The Black Lotus

Player Name:
@VeyrinDay

Primary Character:
The Black Lotus

Secret Identity:
Sophia Hannah Cantor

Age:
24

Usual Base of Operations:
Department of Archaeology, Miskatonic University

Day Job:
Research associate and doctoral candidate

Powers:
- Levitation
- Telekinesis
- 150% of top human ability (the best record normal human can achieve + some more)
- Super switch (She can choose to boost one attribute at a time. When she switches, her chosen attribute raises to 400% top human ability while her other attributes went down to only 90%):
--- Superhuman strength
--- Superhuman speed
--- Superhuman endurance
--- Superhuman acuity

Weaknesses:
She's basically human, so whatever can hurt or even kill a human has the same effect to her. However, a "kill switch" hidden in an ancient spell book written in unknown symbols of an unknown language spoken by unknown creatures that probably had different vocal organ, is able to nullify Sophia's powers and inflict her with a terrible pain in the process.

Skills:
- Analytical thinking:
She's an academic person, what else to expect?

- Gymnastics:
Sophia took gymnastics as an extracurricular activity during her school years. She won a championship as the first place winner. Some skills were retained during her time being a The Black Lotus.

- Amateur Dancing:
Knows ballet, latin, and jazz dance; Sophia took some courses as side activities during her college years. This kept her healthy and being in good shape.

Appearance:


BRIEF Bio:
Sophia got her power when she tried to analyze a strange tome that her colleague found deep in the underground archive. Since that moment, a strange figure visited Sophia in her dream on nightly basis. That figure, appeared as a woman, repeatedly said something that initially Sophia was not able to understand. It was after the same figure showed a sequence of symbols that Sophia began to see. The symbols was written at one part of the tome. As she matched the sounds and the symbols, Sophia was able to finally recite a complete line of that book. Little she knew that she had just activated an ancient magic.

Through that magic, Sophia awakened her power, but the process also flooded her brain with a stream of information about an imminent ritual sacrifice that would be conducted by a group of sentient creatures of the ancient world, currently in hibernation. When the stars come into their right place, a catastrophic event would begin in that mankind would be sacrificed for the coming of an ancient Eldritch Overlord. Sophia's utterance of the spell resulted in the early awakening of the creatures as their powers are still immature, allowing them to be stopped before the cataclysmic event begin.

Even so, the task of stopping the Eldritches fell into Sophia's hand, but their presence among human community is still unknown. However, there's a rumor about a cult that worships the Eldritches that the members are a cabal of mafia ringleaders. Sophia also felt obliged to put herself in their way. Sophia's dark attire gained her a moniker, The Black LOtus.

Supporting Characters:
- Prof. Malcolm Girondin (her doctoral advisor)
- Samuel Reyes (FBI officer)

Secondary Character:
N/A

Additional Notes:
N/A

@VeyrinDay

I think I'm gonna nerf her a bit. Her combined switch+telekinesis is potentially abused that she can snipe a target a mile away using an object as heavy as an elephant moving at 600 mph. I think she'll need a "charging time" after she use her switch power to take effect. During the charging, she'll be in Blank State, having her all attributes down to the 90% measures.

She can use her switch infinitely, but she can only use her super form for 4 hours limit in which she has to take a 2 hours resting to recharge. Excessively using her power beyond 4-hour limit will rip her out of her power and render her paralyzed under a debilitating pain sensation, albeit temporarily.

How do I add those in the CS?

Hi everyone

Hi, what kind of RP do you like?

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wait, I still can't figure about my defense and items; I'll check the book and links

this might take a while, but if any of you kind gentlemen could direct me to the relevant part, I might be able to have it quicker

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@VeyrinDay I like it I just don't like calling her Pansy. "The Black Flower" maybe? Rose, Lotus...?

I dig her though. It's different than Zatana or Fate. Come up with a different codename and she's accepted. I look forward to her interactions with our very Hellboy-ish Frankenstein.

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Working the last bit of the OOC into a document, then I'll get it posted in a bit! Can't wait to get into the IC tomorrow!

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@Omega Man

The Black Lotus, it is