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Well... really it just makes the Northmen look strait up incompetent.
I understand the wish to make your men be badasses but there are better ways to show that than just having you and your men carve through guards who don't appear to be able to fight back in any way. I know you will win, and I understand you have the drop on them, but it seems odd that you don't lose even one man, and that you manage to keep 30 roudy iron islanders, experienced Raiders or not, to keep fighting quiet enough for 0 alarms to be sounded. Like... there's no fight AR ALL, it's just you and your men murdering incompetent guards. Like, this

"He opened one man's throat with his own knife, and drove his axe into the skull of two more"

Like... we're ALL three either asleep or half wits? Murder makes noise, and three dudes all of whom are trained night guards can't all be asleep or stupid. I just feel like there would be a fight... it would make the post WAY cooler as well...

That's just my two cents


Ah, this is where I feel like my writing leads to misinterpretations. Like, in the example given above, in my mind these three guards are far, far apart. These men are scattered around the battlements of a motte. But that quite clearly doesn't come across in my writing, and that's entirely my fault.

In terms of the guards... I mean, in the GoT world, household guards have never exactly been competent. It's not like these are the soldiers, but just household guards. The one example that springs to mind is Eddard Stark's guards and Jory Cassel. I mean, they were there, but the second they ended up against the city watch they were absolutely massacred. Jory went up against a superior fighter (admittedly it was Jaime Lannister... nowhere near a fair match up) and the fight didn't last 10 seconds. I felt like Ironborn warriors would make fairly short work of household guards. But, you have raised the point that I totally overlooked the Mormont soldier garrison on the Island. And that most definitely needs to be addressed.

Ok, I have a question. What rendition of events are we running in here? I'm just curious since I've been pulling a lot of my information from the ASOIAF book rendition, but it was said earlier that Theon made the journey to Torrhen's square with one ship, which is the show version of events. In the books, Theon sends Dagmer Cleftjaw with all but one of his ships to Torrhen's Square while he sails one to Winterfell. My information that it would not take so long to make the journey, but obviously it's different for different renditions. it would be worth noting that in this version of events, Theon's Ironborn destroys the Wild Hares, a group of Northern lancers, at Torrhen's Square, and also slays Benfred Tallhart.

@agentmanatee you mentioned earlier that you didn't like the Bear Island slaughter. Do you mind telling me what about it you didn't like? I am not particularly happy with the writing in that post, and criticism is more than welcome in order to help improve my writing. If it's the way it was done that you don't like, then I have done my job. It was not meant to be glorious or honourable, it was meant to be swift and brutal. The Mormonts were caught off-guard and severely outnumbered; there wouldn't have been a whole lot they could have done differently. Still, comments are more than welcome and I am happy to change my post to suit what people want.

One a side note, I found out last night that there are two Valyrian steel swords in the Iron Islands. Nightfall is in the possession of House Harlaw, while Red Rain is in the possession of House Drumm. Who would have thought, eh? But it raised the question, what about the other Valyrian Steel weapons in Westeros that have been lost? Is there any chance of them having been found in the last 200 years? I mean, swords like Brightroar, Truth, Vigilance, Dark Sister and Lamentation have been lost for a long time, but it's not entirely impossible that they could have been found in the last 200 years.
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Simple: Guerilla tactics. Jakkon's mission led him up miles of river, deep into the North territory. That's miles of possible obstructions, sandbars, and enemy territory. That means you're sailing/rowing ships, one after another, AGAINST a current, and likely with little wind to work with. All the rangers had to do was stay a few hundred feet infront of you at any time, causing problems all the while. Dump felled trees into the river and let them float down, blocking your ships. Constant archer sniping on the people on the deck, or if none is visible, tar and fire arrows into the ship itself or the sails. Ropes tied across the riverbank, causing ships to lag and whack into each other. Take your pick of possible ways a group of organized people could slow down ships from sailing upriver.

While this is going on, riders are sent to warn ahead to Torren Square to warn them. Because... like you said, those are some pretty decent sized ships. People are going to notice. That means the fleet is prepared and ready well in advanced, and waiting for you. Did you bring all the food necessary for this voyage, forward in back? Or does it seem more likely that the Ironborn would hunt/forage/raid for additional supplies along the river as they traveled.

You might have rowers, but you don't have the wind, and you don't have maneuverability. You attacked a lake, not the open ocean. Any idea how long it takes to turn a ship, let alone turn it around? Balls slow. Or the arc of travel necessary? Impossible to do on a river. The moment you entered that lake, you bottlenecked yourselves: impossible to retreat, and the leading ships getting smashed to bits by the navy already waiting. Ironwood Ships with trireme rams installed vs Ironborn Longships? Said Ironwood ships only needing to sail in one direction to do their damage?

Let's maybe also look at it from two scenarios: If you made a bolt for Torren Square, NO stopping.... you're tiring your rowers out. We know those aren't thralls, because thralls "toil at tasks such as agriculture and mining, which the ironborn despise." No mention is ever made of them as rowers. So, by the time you get to Torren Square, your fighters are demoralized, tired, and haggard from a guerilla fight. If they stop to rest, they're picked off at night by rangers who know the rivers and woods better than they do. See also, demoralized, tired, and frayed nerves. Ontop of that, theyre fighting a bunch of DEFENDING Northmen who are fresh and rosy-cheeked for this fight.

That journey of yours took weeks when you consider speeds and distance travel. More than enough time run you down into the ground.

And, well, I DID say Jakkon and his better warriors weren't on the ship. Every Ironborn isn't a uber fearsome warrior, just like every Northmen of the One-Hearth isn't a talented fighter (Tormin got hit by friendly fire for crying out loud). But Tormin's rangers are the badasses of the group and he had them to take the ship. That's not saying the North didn't take casualties. We just had more room to play with than you.

Also, if it isn't clear... Tormin ain't exactly a tame wolf. Won't matter if you're armored, when he bezerks, bai~

Greyjoys: 1
Starks: 1


Ok. The first part about wearing down the fleet as they approach, fair enough. Well played.

1. In your writing you wrote it out as the small Longships were smashed to splinters straight up. Except they're not smaller, and they don't have standard hulls. The Ironborn have the strongest navy for a reason. That's not to say a ram wouldn't smash them, but you literally wrote it as bang, that's it entire fleet totally smashed. That would not happen.

2. Actually, we do have maneuverability. Do you have any idea what an Ironborn Longship is? Let me tell you. The sails normally serve a more decorative than functional purpose. Longships are not galleys, their movement comes from their rowers, and thus they have full movement capability even without the wind. Secondly, they are made symmetrically. Both ends of the ship are bows. They don't have to turn around, they can literally just row the other way, with the exact same functionality.

3. Sailors are not warriors, warriors are not sailors. Just because the rowers have been working hard that doesn't mean the Ironborn warriors are worn out, since there are very few of them doing the rowing. Why would they be demoralised if they're off to do exactly what they believe they were born to do?

4. Your journey time seems horribly estimated. You're coming up with a time that suits you best. Theon Greyjoy is te only character who's made that journey that we are told of. He is a captain of little experience and a crew that doesn't support him, yet in the sequence of events it seems he makes the journey in about a week, give or take a few days. The chances of you doing as much damage as you assume you would have in that period of time is very small.

5. Lets consider this. One Ironborn soldier, against one Northman. The North have only had a navy for the last couple of hundred years. The Northern navy has seen very little action I would assume since they don't carry out raids or go to war. Yet he is up against an Ironborn soldier. He doesn't have to be a terrific warrior; he has a few raids under his belt, he's fought ship-to-ship before. He has every advantage possible in a one-on-one situation. Yet the Northmen, with little experience at ship-to-ship combat, destroys the Ironborn fleet. These are ships of the Iron Fleet. These are veterans, hardened raiders and soldiers, not run of the mill Ironborn pirates. Yet the Northmen destroy them without trouble anyway.

6) Why on earth would Jakkon not be on the Windbreaker? Where on earth would he be if not on his own ship when the fighting starts? I mean, Jakkon vs Tormin on the decks of the Windbreaker? Jakkon would cleave Tormin in half. Tormin is a ranger, not a sailor. He's used to patrolling the land and fighting with guerrilla tactics. Yet suddenly he's thrown on a ship and he's like the next Arthur Dayne. He can go as berserk as he wants, fighting on a ship is totally different. There's no space for him to scurry around and use agility to his advantage, he's locked in extreme close quarters fighting in a battle of brute strength. And he is up against veteran opposition. And among them, Jakkon Greyjoy. Jakkon is easily one of if not the most formidable Ironborn warrior alive. He's in his natural environment on the deck of his ship, fighting in a way he's only too used to. Tormin would not, quite frankly, stand a chance. I'm not sure if you're aware, but fighting on a ship is totally different to fighting on land. You couldn't fill a ship with standard soldiers and set them against hardened sea-going warriors and expect them to just wreck them. Because they would not.
@Dawnscroll I have to admit, while your post is well written, I'm a little confused about what exactly is going on. I mean, the very first part... why on earth would there be Ironborn raiders on the riverbank if they're making a bolt for Torrhen's Square? Following that, how did the Ironborn Fleet of forty ships get magically reduced to twenty by the time they reached Torrhen's Square? And I mean, probably my main issue... you made the Ironborn fleet seem like a bunch of total amateurs. I mean, Ironborn longships are not small at all; they're 100 oars and stand up to Westerosi Galleys. The Ironborn raiders are renowned for their skills in ship-to-ship combat, they're talented and fearsome warriors - in your post you had a crew of Northmen cut through them like farmboys.

I know that by this point this probably seems like I'm just picking holes in absolutely everything. I would like to clarify that this is not the case, it's just that there are some parts of this particular post that don't quite add up, in my eyes at least. I did ask that Jakkon's fleet isn't totally wrecked... (yes I know I said decimated in my actual post, I didn't know decimated meant 10%, but you got the general idea of what I was asking).
@Vhagar Calm man.

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Who knows?


The tone of that last post was childish and quite frankly rude, as if I'd gone out of my way to offend with my writing, and now I'm going to be punished by capturing and torturing one of my central characters.
Yeah, funny thing about trying to sail a navy inland: there's plenty of Riverside to hide in. Jakkon is going to pay for every river he crosses. You're on my turf now.

I also don't recall signing the Mormonts up to be completely eradicated and raped. Line: completely wiped except for the Starks. I believe my exact words were "hostage situation".

But, these things happen in war I guess. Just like prisoners.


Now hang on. I made it perfectly clear what my intentions were for Bear Island in my opening post, that Valorion was going there to completely destroy their House and force the Starks to act or suffer for not doing so. I double checked with you before I began writing, since you had taken over the mantle of the North since that post, that you were OK with this and you gave me the green light. At no point did you even mention a hostage situation. If you don't like it, then tell me. I can change it. But that was what I said would happen, and that is what you agreed would happen. I haven't done anything that I didn't wholeheartedly believe you were aware of and on board with.
Also, for how long have the Iron Islands been a sovereign kingdom? Was this granted to them by a predecessor of Aegon X, or, did they declare their freedom, so to speak, and no one has bothered to bring them to heel yet?


The latter. We used the chaos of Danaerys' crossing to Westeros to declare freedom and no one has really challenged it.

Also, I've given Torrhen's Square a lot of thought and I have realised something. If Jakkon sailed 40 ships up there and found a considerable naval force docked their... well, these are Ironborn raiders. They would just steal as manq ships as possible, torch the rest and run the fuck away. I can't see any reason why they'd do anything else. I also don't recall signing Jakkon up for capture...
Hey @Vhagar! Sorry if you felt out posts about you were disrespectful in any way, I never meant it like that.


Nah I totally understand. It's frustrating as hell when one person holds it all up. I'm not normally that guy, but I'm sorry that this time I was. It shall not happen again.
@Vhagar No problem, it was worth the wait in my opinion. Also, damn that was brutal, just like Theon capturing Winterfell.


Why thank you. I kinda brushed over a lot of it since I was almost at 20k characters, desperate to get the post up and quickly becoming tired. But hey, it's up. I might redo the drownings, though. I feel like they are kind of lackluster.
Sorry it took me so long to get my post up. And I'm sorry that the letter to Rhaenyra isn't actually attached (I just went full-on block out mode and couldn't think for shit) but the summary would be that Talron pledged his support for her claim, and asked that she recognize and do all the can as rightful heir to the Iron throne to protect Talron's sovereignty of the Iron Islands, and in exchange he'll do all he can to get her on the Throne.
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