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Current I think I'm ready to come back to this platform. I need something new in my life.
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Tse Hyu-lin is good to put in the character tab. Just keep the thing I said about strong poisons (see: poisons specifically made to kill martial artists) requiring a more active procedure in mind. I'll probably say something about it if it ever comes up, so it's not actually that important to remember.




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The character fits in better. I will say that you don't have to just completely 180. The big issue with your initial character was that he was effectively a murder hobo that had his motivations run opposite of everyone else. If you would like an example of a violent character that would work in this setting: The Fist Demon of Mount Hua (another manhwa) follows effectively a dude that kills a lot of people. However, his violence is generally aimed at people who he feels deserve it (attacks him first, attacks others, etc) and the protagonist of that series has no real reason to kill random people.

Misc changes and fixes:

Body enhancements are meant to be your passives. Since he activates his healing and strength/speed using a qi technique, you should probably just remove the two lines there and leave the body enhancement section blank.

Why do his memories give him energy? It feels a bit odd under any energy system. It would probably make more sense that his memories give him the willpower to refine his unorganized, unspecific qi. That's probably a small edit.

For his techniques, you could probably elaborate on his martial arts a bit. Is he an untrained monkey man? Does he have some background in some kind of fighting? etc etc.

Besides that, the big thing is editing. I'm not the biggest stickler for things, but give your posts a few checks to make sure everything looks good. There are some things here that feel like they would make things rough.


Awesome. Will do. Reading through the IC to catch up.
@oWo I think I am done. Let me know.
In Hello 2 yrs ago Forum: Introduce Yourself
@Wei Wuxian Welcome! Also, I love your username!


Thank you. One of my favorite shows, The Untamed, and one of my favorite characters in the show. It just fits. :)
I think he's done now [EDIT - 7/16 12:57]
I'm interested. The concept is engaging.
OMG so I am a huge fan of Wuxia and would love to know if there is room available.
In Hello 2 yrs ago Forum: Introduce Yourself
@Wei Wuxian
welcome


Thank you. :)
In Hello 2 yrs ago Forum: Introduce Yourself
Hi Everyone.

My name is Jeimseu, I am an LGBTQ Novelist and Activist and in my spare time, I love to partake in story-building on various roleplaying sites. I love watching various dramas, but my favorite genre is BL (Boy's Love) and I am currently watching Cutie Pie and KinnPorche. I hope that one of my soon-to-be-released books will become a television show, but even still you can find some of my fanfics on Wattpad. I love music and I listen to a lot of various artists, including KPOP, CPOP, TPOP, and others. Let's just say I have a very eclectic taste for music around the world. I hope to make friends here and build beautiful stories together.
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