@RomanAriaNot meaning any offense or anything, and it's great that you guys can write so much!
But as you said, the vast majority of this post isn't relating to anyone else besides your two characters and their NPCs. Maybe... wanna finish it up or something? I'm not a GM or anything, but a twenty-page post with only two pages (or less) of information that'd be relevant to other characters/players (as in, directly or indirectly interacting with) is sorta... unneeded?
Again, not to be rude or anything, just that you guys are saying that you have a really big post of just you two guys talking. And I'm sure it's all very relevant to you two, but... well.
See my point?
And GM, if you tell me to shut up, I will.
EDITed in:
In all honesty, I'm probably not going to read it, or do anything more than quickly skim. If GM don't care and you guys are just writing it because you can, then, well, go for it. Just that, I wouldn't want to roleplay with someone, and flood them with comparatively irrelevant information in a massive post, you know?
EDIT:
Oh shit look I'm a co-GM.
When'd that happen?
I vaguely remember this.
o.o