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  • Old Guild Username: ZayZe
  • Joined: 11 yrs ago
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3 yrs ago
Current Merry Christmas and Happy New Years! Enjoy the holidays.
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5 yrs ago
Year long hiatuses are fun! ... Sorry to the one or two friends I've got left on here! :)
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6 yrs ago
Gotta say, I'm gonna miss this long weekend.
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6 yrs ago
I can't access the discord server.. can someone send a invite link?
6 yrs ago
Oof getting drunk on Christmas with your best buds is a good time. Enjoy your nights... drink some water and make sure you stay alive lol
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Bio

Updated: April 13, 2018
𝓗𝓮𝓵𝓵𝓸!
Roleplaying Status: Moderately Active



Nice to meet you. I've been here since before the guild fall.

I'm not really looking for anybody in particular, but I am looking for somebody who can write very immersive stories, especially in the Medieval Fantasy genre. It doesn't have to be that genre specifically. I just have a slow start in RPs sometimes due to immersion difficulties. I basically like to do 'improv' world building as we go along with our posts. We don't have to have every little detail fleshed out. It makes it harder to get started in my opinion.

Somewhat active at the moment, but I'm in the U.S. Military. So there may be some times where I won't be able to respond other than hiatus reasons. I hope to be around more in the future. I always have my days where I just like to write and think of something to write about. Sadly I don't always have a creative mind, but it's a work in progress.

If there is something else I should add, let me know!

Most Recent Posts

So I've been thinking about buying a powerful laptop, and I was wondering if anyone had personal experience with them. I'm in the military and I'll be in need of something more portable than my gaming desktop that I currently have. I don't trust people around my belongings, and just because you may serve the country, they still are thieves and other things.. haha. Also I was wondering if it was worth it to get a SLI laptop? (Dual graphics card)

Give me some thoughts and feedback!!
@Terminal

Thank you. I'll try to put what you said into place. It seems I need to spend more time proof-reading, instead of just checking for grammatical errors, which I'm still poor at doing. Writing is hard.

I do like your revised prologue.

That being said, I just have to grow as a writer in all areas.
Chapter 001
Scene 001

Just another day of training. CPT Levi Ross scratched his head as some tanks rolled by. Soldiers were marching, doing physical training. Everything was a little more intensified though. People were much more focused. The incident at Pearl Harbor yesterday put the Americans on edge, a new level of will and determination. They were no longer eluding the war they had hoped to avoid. People like CPT Ross had been ready for a fight since the Germans had invaded France. It was only a matter of time before the United States joined the rest of the world in war. England had been struggling to keep air control from Germany.

His thoughts were broken up, "Sir!" The master sergeant saluted him briefly, "The Major needs you to report to him as soon as possible." CPT Ross hopped down from the ledge he was sitting on, saluting back, "Okay. I'll be on my way." He looked around for a second, finding a sergeant. "Hey find me some transport so I can make way to the Major's office." The sergeant saluted and ran from distance. After a few minutes he came back into view with a Willys MB. CPT Ross jogged to meet him and hopped inside the vehicle. The sergeant started driving. Every so often he'd glance over at the captain, finally asking, "Sir, If you don't mind my asking, why are you heading over to the Major's office?" CPT Ross looked over to the driving sergeant, "I'm not quite sure myself." He paused for a moment looking outside his side of the vehicle, "It seemed pretty urgent though." He trailed off as he looked out the window at the passing scenery.

About 5 minutes later they approached the building that the major was stationed in. "Stay here till I come back." CPT Ross told the sergeant as he got out of the vehicle. "Yes sir!" CPT Ross headed inside the building. The major worked in a communications building. He most likely got some orders from the commanding officers. Walking up the stairs he passed some lieutenants, people just going about their daily business. Eventually the captain reached the Majors door. He knocked alerting the major that he was here. The major glanced up and motioned him inside. He stood up and walked over to the radio, turning it on. "There's going to be a presidential broadcast within the next few minutes. Afterwards I have pending orders for you." The captain nodded his head acknowledging him. There was some static as the major found the station. Shortly afterwards, the president's voice emerged.


As the president finished up his speech, the major turned off the radio and returned back to his chair. "The United States is gearing up for war." He paused for a moment, "You're to be sent to Hawaii. They are preparing an invasion of the Pacific. You're going to be in command of a company, headstrong in the invasion." The major finished up what he was saying and pulled out some papers, probably more orders for other people. "I assume I don't have any say in this matter sir?" CPT Ross joked. The major peeked his eyes up, "No. God speed to you son, I hope you the best." He paused for a moment, looking down at his papers. "You're dismissed." CPT Ross executed a quick salute, "Yes sir." He headed toward the doorway and left the building.
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Day of Infamy Speech
December 8, 1941. Time: 1230
(GM to the World)

Whether it be your mom, girlfriend, wife, child, boyfriend or husband. There will be some kind of activity or outside force to draw you near a radio. You listen to the radio as it comes on, eagerly waiting for the President to make his appearance. Shortly after a time, the President of the United States voice emerges. He begins his 'Day of Infamy Speech'.

Feel free to post anything before the radio comes on, leading up to the actual event!
Table of Contents



Death Welcomes Everyone

Story Information
Genre
Alternative History, WW2, War, Adventure, Action, Romance, and Mystery








Roleplay Information
I am currently world building as the story goes along. The idea behind this madness is so that I don't overwhelm myself or others from wanting to join the Story/RP. Collaborating with someone to world build always seems more intriguing than making everything up myself.




@pugbutter

Thank you. It seems I have a problem with run-ons. I'll continue to try to correct these mistakes as I go further into writing.

Thanks again for providing the corrections so I can see the correct format.
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