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We'll see what's the best option. For the time being, we are still technically accepting new players, though.


Open the floodgates!
Hey, what's up all? Gonna be joining soon, seeing what's up
Sounds like butt fuck insanity. I like it.
Anyon


"Why can't this place sell better fucking appas? They aren't that hard to grow."


Time of Day: Morning
Location: ???, Priestella


The tall woman took another bite of her appa, despite her complaints. It sucks having to eat something that was so sour, but hey, she already bought it and she wasn't one to waste her money just cause of preference. Though an appa was hardly filling enough for a woman of size and stature. In her pack, there was a bit of bread and 2 legs of chicken as well, both wrapped up in cloth. Thankfully, she at least knew that those two were much better than the 3 sad excuses for fruit she still had on her, including the one that already had her bitemark in it. There was plenty of comottion from the others around her, whether it be merchant work or recruiting others for knight work. Another ordinary day for this country huh? Peaceful life is soothing, but oh so boring.

Her and Mirt had only gotten there a few days ago, hadn't they? It was supposed to be a pretty relaxed time after the hell of traveling over to this huge ass city, but you'd expect more to do. Instead, to kill some time, Anyon found herself exploring the city, trying to get a good handle on her surroundings. After all, there was no telling how long they might be here for, so getting familiarized made sense. The streets here, despite them being rather packed were also home to some pretty good merchant stands, though not the best she's encountered. By a long shot. No, that would go to that one country that was a bit south west from here, though she couldn't remember the name. Some of the best food and weaponry she's ever seen...bar none. She gave a glance towards the staff on her back. As much as she loved her staff, what with it being with her for years now, she always regreted not buying that Whiplash. Incredibly flexible...extendable...could basically be a functional whip...God was it pricey though. They would've been broke the whole time there if she bought it then. Still...

As her coins juggled in her pack, she glanced around. Despite it's seeming peacefulness, she could easily spot the adventurers and warriors that filled the streets. It wasn't like they were experts in disguising it after all. It at least meant that if they needed cash, they could probably find it pretty easily. Now that she kept looking though, she noticed there were more people looking at her than she realized...Actually quite a few people. Idiots. "I don't care if you jackasses have never seen a fucking tall person before! The staring shit is getting annoying!" She said in her low, booming voice. The ones who were staring very quickly turned away and a few others took a glance towards the yelling woman. In minutes though, every simply went back to their business, outside of a few.

Despite her usually being used to heat like this, for some reason, the sun felt particularly hot today. Maybe it was just her, but it felt as if the rays were practically raining down on her. "God damn...Why is today so bad for me?" She said with a slight pant. However, she soon noticed something that might just be helpful. There was an old building within distance of her and seemingly a few shaded areas outside of it. With a smile, she walked over, leaning down on a nearby tree. The monk garbs were opened up a bit to let her breathe a bit better and her bandaged chest was a bit more noticeable. Well, bandaged to someone who might not know what a sarashi is. Despite this, she was still overwhelmingly hot. She took a glance towards the building. Maybe it might be better to just go inside and rest a bit...

Getting up, she walked over to the building, lying on a wall of it. She could hear noises though from it...Men from the sound of it? Probably some knights or other such people discussing a quest or something, who cares? However, unbeknownst to her, the wall she was lying on was less of a wall, and more of a door. Even worse, there seemed to be foot steps coming towards said door from the inside of the building. All she did instead was air herself out as she took another bite of her not-quite-that-good appa. "Ugh...Fuck it, I'm eating the chicken after this. I'll see if Mirt wants the other appas."

@FamishedPants @Letter Bee @Cu Chulainn


Christ that took forever

Edit: I know how to use image but for the life of me the links weren't working with it. Also she is not a white clothed Holy woman despite clothes and title. She isn't that powerful. Nor can she predict the future
@ZekariVoblis

Even though we are full, I was willing to give your character a chance because two people seemed like they wanted you in. However, this character falls far below my standards for a few reasons.

She does not really offer anything that isn't already in the RP. we already have a psycho archetype. I'll spare explaining all the reasons why I'm very cautious about accepting such characters, but this already makes "happy psycho" an even harder pass for me. Her fighting style is one that is taken by at least two other characters in the RP. But the biggest reason why the character isn't up to snuff is because of how similar they are to a certain other Re:Zero character. Not just her face claim, but aspects of her personality and fighting style. Surely you can understand how this comes across as an embarrassingly lazy character submission?

I'm going to declare Mikayla rejected. She could work, but would require a massive overhaul to the point where she no longer represented the character you have just presented.

I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and say this character was made in haste to get into the RP as fast as possible, rather than the work of a hack RPer. You may try again, but I strongly recommend looking at the characters already in the RP so that you can fill a nich that isn't already filled. Also, getting creative and not ripping characters directly from Re: Zero will greatly increase your chances of being accepted.


Understood, I'll start working on a new character instead of Mikayla. There were a few things I didn't quite realize when making said character so I must not have been paying as much attention as I should have.
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Fuck, it closed up already? Was thinking about making an app
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