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So I spent like three hours trying to draw something for my character. In the end the lines were decent enough, but I had literally no idea how to color it decently and I wasn't going to use it without color. I decided to opt out of drawing it on my own and just found a picture online that was close to what I had drawn.

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Rena Sato looks good. Accepted!

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Woo! Thanks for accepting me!

Are we going to start fairly soon?
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I had a bunch of ideas for what I want to do for Rena and his backstory, but I'm not sure if I should wait a while to deal with it or just edit and add it to my app now. I guess it'd be logical to wait until after a while once the RP starts. What I will do however, is just to some edits on how some things are written in my app. Some things are bothering me and I want to change them into things that are more character-building and/or hinting towards his hidden past. Which isn't exactly too amazing and important, but it's better than nothing.

Anyway, yeah, I edited my app a bit. I didn't change anything too important; I just wanted to change the wording and structure to represent him a bit better.
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That's fine, @Sen.

And yeah, probably tomorrow or the day after. xD
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If you're still accepting, hopefully this is fine. I made another girl, so I apologize in advance for keeping the ratio slanted.
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@Skybreaker

If you're worried about the boy/girl ratios I have plenty of males I could use instead of Lily?
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Look at all the neat characters! Hopefully Mai will get to make lots of friends. (:
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Chezka said
If you're still accepting, hopefully this is fine. I made another girl, so I apologize in advance for keeping the ratio slanted.


Accepted! This will only close when the squads are already formed. While I was concerned about the M/F ratio a little while ago, that was because there were no male characters. This, of course, has been fixed. Aside from that, the personalities are vastly different, so it won't be much of an issue. So currently we have ten characters. Before arranging squads, I'll wait to see if we can bump it up to twelve so we can divide everyone equally.
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ok so i edited it my character
i added some things to make it a bit more wholesome and expanded on others and fixed some mistake

please accept me
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I think if you cleaned up your grammar and sentence structure a bit it would be a big benefit to you! (This is supposed to be high-casual after all!) I don't think OP wants you to be perfect, but just wants it a little bit more readable :)
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my character is bad at writing so that explains it Xd
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1Charak2 said
my character is bad at writing so that explains it Xd


Yes but since this is high casual adept spelling and grammar is expected. As such your CS did not meet the standard. All your IC posts will be expected to meet the standard. Your CS did not do this.
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Fair warning for if this starts tomorrow: I'm in London all day for an Anime expo and it's like a 3 hour drive and I won't be back till late, so I won't be on at all tomorrow :)
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Well once we reach the quota (or tomorrow comes) we'll start. Whichever comes first. And I'm fine with people being gone for a short period as long as they can post at least like once every three days.
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*dances to Samba de Amigo*
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Was my character overlooked, by any chance?
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@Ekirei: I believe you're in the accepted list. :D
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Accepted: Rainer, Regan, and Hao. Don't worry, there is plenty of room still. (Though when people start high-tailing it out of here, we'll see who really commits. <.< >.>)Right, well I guess I'll start my CS making now. Anything else I need to add to the OP?

Nah, you're good Ekirei
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