I'm posting all of my previous CSs, including my third one. Feedback is appreciated, and I'll update the older characters in case updates are really needed.

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"The coldest heart and an unpredictable path of cruelty... What more would you want from that cold bastard?"

Macbeth

Age: Unknown

Species: Demon

Role and Kingdom: Demon Warrior, Lucifer's Kingdom

Demon Abilities**: Cold Flux - Macbeth affects temperature and blood pressure around him at a small radius. The more he sticks around a human being or an angel, the colder his body becomes. The cold around him can drop anyone's blood pressure (regardless of species, including demons).

Witch Hunt (Secondary Ability) - If there are three or more people within his Cold Flux radius, Macbeth will have slightly increased resistance against magic spells. Note that his Cold Flux radius is deceivingly large and small. Demons cannot fulfill the requirements of this secondary ability.

Backstory/Biography: Deep within hell were the more isolated and unknown lands. While many of Lucifer's demons were found within the kingdom, Macbeth was found trapped within an eternally cold prison in a vast underworld far away from the mainland. Two of the underworld's soldiers spotted his frozen form behind a broken pillar of ice, where his body was taken to the kingdom. Even when his frozen tomb was within the kingdom's reach, it refused to melt without the use of excessive heat. He was quickly, and primitively, nicknamed the "Ice Man."

The Ice Man was equipped with heavy armor, and a sword pierced through his face beneath his lifeless helmet. Even before the tomb was brought to the kingdom, the sword glowed and oozed of demonic energy, though it was rare magic even among demonkind. The very existence of the unknown victim disturbed many who witnessed its presence. Claimed to be a far too dangerous for its mystic background, the Ice Man and his malevolent sword were buried under one of the most isolated and empty prison cells. His underground cell was placed slightly near the kingdom.

For centuries, rumors spread amongst demons that the Ice Man may be brought to subject from the kingdom's royal officials. He, however, was never mentioned. Time allowed the corrupted denizens of Lucifer's kingdom to forget about the once fearful Ice Man.

But not everything was meant to be frozen forever.

One fateful day, like any other malicious day a demon would enjoy, the sword began to pour out massive waves of energy out of itself. It was quite the hungry cannibal, for it did not thirst for any kind of blood; it demanded the blood of demons. With an enraged impatience, the cold, yet hot-blooded weapon called upon the Ice Man, who was coincidentally its final victim. It was time for the demonic weapon to finally take over a host's body. Using up the last of its energy, the Sacrificial Rite managed to awaken the frozen man beneath the ice.

A substantial amount of time was given to the Ice Man to break out of his frozen tomb. He no longer wore a simple battle helmet, but a more royal, yet broken helmet of a hardened warrior. Wielding the Sacrificial Rite in his hands, the Ice Man crawled and found his way out of the prison his own kind placed him in. He was terrifyingly angered by the demons' refusal to help him, their own kind, in getting out of his dreadfully cold grave. While he was angry, however, he also noticed that he knew nothing of what he was doing, who he worked for, or where he even was. It was then, while on the way to Lucifer's Kingdom, that the sword answered his questions.

"You are special," it told him with a soothingly sinful voice. "Nothing can bind you in any sorts of chains, for I am here to guide you."

The Ice Man wondered what the malevolent weapon wanted to help him with.

"Your answers will be given when the time calls for it," the sword claimed with its energy continuing to preserve the Ice Man's newfound strength and will. "But for now, I crave for what is rightfully mine. You, Macbeth, will serve me."

"Submit yourself as a loyal servant of Lucifer, Macbeth. Serve him, but definitely not with all of your heart. Trust him to make him trust you, but you must remember that he is not gullible."

"Kill him, but that will be for later."

Still confused by his creator's words, the now cold-hearted shell and servant of the Sacrificial Rite proceeded on to enter the kingdom of Lucifer. There, he will become known as Macbeth, the servant who spread agony through the cold.

Personality: Macbeth's sword does some of the talking and cutting, while Macbeth carries the sword. While the two of them do synchronize well in terms of power and authority, the weapon tends to stay asleep for long periods of time. Macbeth learns through what he does and what others tell him, and he never draws his sword on others first. He cannot bring himself to strike down royal figures (such as kings and princesses) without his sword's permission.

Macbeth's weapon is slowly losing control of itself, which is the reason why it wants to bask itself in the blood of demons, return back to its original form, and kill Macbeth before things go completely out of hand.

Macbeth rarely talks.

Additional Information: None.

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"Sir" Prize said "A lass with a code of honor! A woman with, uh, style! Too bad she finds my neck astonishing to cut through with her sandal-phony."

Artemis Idrian

Age: 20

Species: Blessed Human

Role and Kingdom: Human Warrior, Kingdom of Michael

Abilities: Pantheon - Artemis calls upon the power of the legendary angelic figure, Metatron, and temporarily empowers any weapon she carries. The empowered item puts more pressure against cursed and blessed weapons, making it more powerful in breaking defensive stances, but it does not deal any extra damage to humans and angels themselves. Increased damage against demons is rare, but could occasionally occur.

Biography: Artemis devoted her life to giving her parents the love they needed in her childhood. She lived the normal life of a civilized denizen in the kingdom of Michael, for her mother and father made sure that she was uninformed of the disasters occurring outside of the house she stayed in. The girl never went outside because her parents took care of her every day. When they went out to work, she would roll around and pretend that she was her mother, cooking up small plants and water as a poor, but amusing imitation.

When Michael's king and queen were assassinated, Artemis' parents mourned and grieved over the loss of their rulers, for they were heavily devoted to them. It was one of the few times where the blonde saw her parents being sad. But all of their sorrow quickly vanished when she came up to them with open arms, a wide smile across her face. She would love them to cure even the strongest of sadness, and her parents got over the downfall of Michael relatively quickly.

One day, her father died.

He was apparently killed in a riot that occurred within the kingdom. While the rioters were apprehended, he lost his life when a man unintentionally slashed at his head with a cursed weapon. The man who killed her father was executed on spot, and his weapon was confiscated and stored hidden from the public. Artemis and her mother, who was going to have a baby boy, held a funeral by themselves, the ashes of his burned body stored within a small container the blonde made. She was very sad, for now she only had her mother left. She was also scared of what lied outside of the small house within the mountain nearby a city that killed one of her parents.

When she became 19 years old, Artemis then had a little brother, who died a year afterward. In fact, her mother also died at the same date. That day, a rogue warrior burst into the family's house with a demonic sword in hand. It was a hellish, fiery warrior that belonged to none other than the kingdom of Lucifer. Her mother was no weak woman, however. She beheaded the demon with a single slash of a rusty sword.

The demon was not the thing that killed her. No, it was the other demon that immediately stabbed her that ironically came from the heavens.

Frightened as she saw her mother die as well, Artemis quickly took her brother and ran out of the house, which had begun to burn violently. The blonde girl continued to run, unaware of what lied ahead of her, unknowing of what roamed even the smallest of forests around her tiny house. She never ran before, but her legs carried her as quick as the wind.

But the demon was not the wind, but rather, a haunting tornado. He stretched his ragged wings and flung himself toward the children. The monster reached out and managed to snatch Artemis' brother, who was a year old at this time. She cried, blood and dust flowing down her face, as she hopelessly attempted to reclaim what was left of her family.

The last of her family died within the demon's stomach.

It was no ordinary demon, that was for sure. But some demons would not just eat a newborn child like a snack after dinner. Artemis felt absolute rage within her; but yet, she was scared. She did not want to die; her parents told her that dying was a terrible thing to experience. Unlike them, she was not prepared to face the consequences of death.

But miraculously, a single beam of light flew by, piercing the demon by its stomach. It howled and attempted to take the light out of its body. And the demon did, but at the price of letting it vertically slash upward like butter. His body partially sliced in half, the monster fell, his body dissolving into particles of light, before it turned into nothingness.

Tired and depressed, Artemis' body finally gave in. As her eyes closed, however, she saw the figure of an archangel. He hovered his right hand over her as he quietly chanted,

"I, Metatron, shall bless you. I, Metatron, shall bless you..."

"I shall deliver you from the hands of evil, and I shall make sure that you leave this corrupted place for good. I, Metatron, shall bless you..."

"Believe in me..."

Artemis did. For an entire year, she remained unconscious, yet alive, under a protection spell made by the archangel. As time continued to march on, a knight who had finally begun to serve the kingdom of Gabriel surprisingly found her body in a wasteland. Seeing that she was no threat at all, and rather quite an innocent-looking woman, the warrior decided that doing her justice would be the best option; and this justice was to send her to the nearest shelter.

"I, Sir Prize," he yelled incoherently as he began to run toward the middle of nowhere, "shall help this lady out! Wait, where the hell am I?"

The lost warrior, who was stupendously separated from his patrol group back at the kingdom of Gabriel, brought Artemis to a nearby inn. She woke up, only to find that someone left his or her belongings gathered on a table. For some reason, Artemis felt curiosity. Metatron had blessed her, granting her not only the wisdom she would need soon, but also the mindset of an analytic fighter. She knew what to do, for he guided her path with utmost success.

Step-by-step, Artemis grew up and, eventually, became a royal knight of Michael. While she lost her innocence and familiar love she always shared with her parents, she gained the ability to fight and protect. She would protect her king and queen with her heart, and she would treasure the life she was given for the people who paid the ultimate sacrifice.

She was no longer lost.

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"The first time I saw him, he ran toward a cliff with his pants off while screaming 'PRAISE THE SUN!!!'"

Name: "Sir" Prize Batt

Age: 25

Species: Human

Role and Kingdom: Warrior, Gabriel's Kingdom

Ability: Inverse Law of Perception - Sir Prize has a surprisingly flexible body, allowing him to make maneuvers impossible for an ordinary armored knight to make.

Short Biography: When he was a young boy, Prize always dreamed of being a farmer.

Well, look how easy that was.

Jokes aside, he loved being a farmer. The boy always loved poking at the scarecrow that looked so similar to his father, and his angelic mother (though she wasn't really an angel) gave him the motherly love he constantly needed. He was a happy boy, and he remained happy. His father would cook up some weird stuff he did not care about at all, and they would all spend time being regular old farmers.

But were they regular farmers?

In fact, they were far from regular farmers. His father was actually not a farmer, but a warrior that served the kingdom of Gabriel. While his father was a man primarily against some of the kingdom's motives, his mother was actually a healer who tended wounded warriors from battles.

Then, Prize realized that he was not a farmer at all, but rather, the son of a warrior and a healer! In fact, he actually learned what a farmer was when he hit puberty! "An idiot I am!" Prize exclaimed like the doofus he was.

His naivety continued to stay with his ever-growing maturity, which winded him up in having a funny condition. He was eventually trained to become a warrior like his father, and he liked it. But whenever his mother patched him up after a sparring session, he felt pathetic in terms of strength. It was not that he disliked her motherly love; he just hated having no pride of his own. So what did he do?

Well, he decided to make himself more flexible to prevent further injuries, and he broke his back twice by putting ten iron bars on his back at once.

Up to this day, no one knew why the baffoon decided to hurt himself to become flexible. But what was more surprising was the fact that Prize grew up to be a dark horse within the army of Gabriel. He was a valiant warrior; a man who cared for his allies! Though his name is small and overshadowed by the more famed knights and warriors, he finally learned that humility was far harder to achieve than such selfish desires as pride. And as much pride as he might have within, there is far more humility in the warrior of Gabriel that now goes by "Sir Prize Batt."

And he is ready to learn so much more.

Personality: He is a loyal servant to nearly anyone that is not his enemy. In fact, if he is tricked even by what could be the dumbest of lies, he might start helping everyone in the world. Prize tends to pop out of nowhere, attack people from nowhere, and start talking with people from nowhere. He also tends to tear apart a woopie cushion whenever he gets extremely angry, and he has some dense sense. Prize is efficient when it comes to defending others, and he is surprisingly willing to do tasks that no one else would be willing to do. He is prideful about his "virgin lifestyle," or at least, that's how he likes to call it.

Fudge cakes :)) I only saw the post at the old OOC just now XD Dang me and my lurking skills. Anyway, transferring my CS. I shall be working up a post tomorrow :)) I promiseeeeeee

"Men and Princess Ani seem to have a love/hate relationship. As in the Princess hates male approaches and men love to approach her!"
Aninesse "Ani" Fedall
24|| human
Princess of Gabriel
Princess Ani was always a feisty child. She was forced (by her parents) to study things that ladies should know. Ani hated the lessons and so, after them, she would run outside and play swords with the children of the servants. Ani, although a princess, always was a troublemaker. She would pull pranks on the mean servants that mistreated the younger servants. Her parents, when she was 10, died of illness. Soon, her unbecoming and evil uncle and aunt took the throne. They couldn't have children, so they kept Ani as a means to have some sort of an heir. They forced Ani into her studies and neglected her for most of her life. When Ani turned 16, they brought suitor after suitor for her and she rejected them all. As she grew older, they grew anxious for her to gain a husband and produce an heir for the kingdom. Ani, being the feisty girl she is, stood for herself and continued to refuse them, saying "I will only give my hand and heir to the one I give my heart!" Now, she has been forced to do the work of the kingdom instead of the "king and queen". She is now nicknamed the "Princess of Challenge".

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"She's the angellic slave of Lucifer, right?"
Celeste
20||angel
Maid of Lucifer
(ability is undiscovered but) She is a healer. She can only heal if she uses her own life source.
Celeste was kidnapped when she was 6, so she has no recollection of her past life. All she remembers is becoming a slave to the people of the Kingdom of Lucifer. She can't say for sure if she was the daughter of a general, but she remembers that she was part of the Kingdom of Micheal. She always wanted to know what happened there. All she knows are the rumors that there is a new queen and king.

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"The Queen of Lucifer? She's not what people would think. She's really kind and it's quite humorous to see her and the king together."
Queen Furnia
Age~ 23
Species~ Cursed human
Role and Kingdom~ Queen of Lucifer
Ability~ She is able to send her soul out and travel without her body. If her soul is hit, she develops the bruise on her body. She can bring her soul back by opening her eyes, but her soul is otherwise invisible. Like a ghost.
Small biography
Furnia doesn't seem like one of those girls who would fall for such an evil man. She is kind and feisty and incredibly smart. She has a feirce temper and she likes things to be great for everyone. One day, when the king was still a prince, he found her and cursed her. She was forced to stay with him and they ended up falling in love. When Furnia met the former king, she was instantly well liked because Furnia forced her lover to behave appropriately. She was accepted into the family as the soon-to-be Queen. When the prince became king, Furnia was coronated into her Queen-dom. Though young, Furnia has helped lead the kingdom.

I wonder where everyone else went... Aye u_u~

I think Pyramid Head found them all.

On another note, I think they all ran away to Brazil or something, I dunno (don't ask me).

Touhoure said
I wonder where everyone else went... Aye u_u~

Nowhere, you never told us the new thread was up. I only found out about it because Savi made a post telling us about it in the old thread


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That's Dame Abel's kid? He looks like a monster

Name
Baron Abel

Age
21

Species
Cursed Human

Role and Kingdom
Knight of Gabriel

Abilities
Power of Blood-lust: Baron has more physical strength then normal humans, however this comes at a cost; he runs the risk of losing himself to blood-lust. The more strength he has, the closer he is to losing control

Small biography
The son of a Knight, young Baron grew up wanting to follow in his mother's footsteps. While his mother was very doting, she could also be a merciless task master when training him. While he and his mother weren't rich by any means, they were still very well off. However, Baron's carefree childhood came to and end one day when the demon Kazan attacked his home. During it's rampage, it slaughtered most of the villagers before it came across young Baron. But before it could touch him, his mother arrived and slew the demon. With his last dying breath, it sent it's soul out to Baron in an attempt to posses him. However he failed and instead left the young boy cursed. Unable to control his new powers, Baron lashed in a frenzy against the nearest living thing his mother. Unwilling to attack her own child, Roxanne "Roxy" Abel fell at the hands of her own son. When reinforcements arrived, all they found was young Baron crying into his mother's chest. Since that day, Baron has worked to get control of his powers as a Knight of the realm, with his mother's sword in hand...

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Look, it's the young prince, isn't he just adorable

Name
Arthur Fedall

Age
14

Species
Blessed Human

Role and Kingdom
Princes of Gabriel

Abilities
Myriad Truths: Arthur's eyes have been blessed with the power to pierce through lies and see the truth. However, since this can conflict with his other senses, he has a hard time using this ability

Small biography
When he was born, little Arthur was deathly ill and wasn't expected to make it. However, A dying angel came to the palace to warn them of a powerful demon called Kazan. The angel's name was Merlin, and he had been gravely wounded by the demon. When he saw the also dying baby, he used what little life he had left to save him, granting the child a fragment of his power. However, something went wrong; whether it was the illness or the angel's life force no one knew, but after a lengthy series of tests, they found Arthur would be unable to sire any children. As such, his older sister remained the heir of the kingdom

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Card Captor said
Nowhere, you never told us the new thread was up. I only found out about it because Savi made a post telling us about it in the old thread

1. Touhoure updated the first post with the new info and a "revised roleplay."

2. Touhoure's last post mentioned a "New OOC."

EDIT: Savi did do a good thing, though- everyone who didn't check that small message in the first post might've completely missed out.

You want to go talk to her with a knife in her hand? Are you wanting to part with a finger or are you just that stupid

Name: Kyalia Zaphiris
Age: 23
Species: Angel
Role and Kingdom: Queen of the Michael Kingdom
Abilities: She's wicked with a dagger and she can blend in with most anything
Small biography: Princess Kyalia was always someone who just didn't...fit. Instead of being the regal, sophisticated, Queen she was supposed to be, she was reserved and didn't talk to anybody really and if she did she had a humor that not a lot of people could really understand nor relate too, not to mention it's rumored she cut a man's finger off once. She was closest to her father though and after his death...she tried. She really did. She went to all the functions she was required to attend without to much prodding and threats, she was remotely social but she quickly fell back into her shadow. But of course she was named Queen, instead of her younger sister, no matter how much she protested. So now she spends her day trying to avoid the nobles while still not giving them real reason to complain.

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I also did mention a revision a few times -- but I understand if that wasn't exactly clear, or if a post I made ever mentioned this. Do forgive me about such.

Now to read these posts...

Um... Kaalee, the kingdom of Lucifer is not supposed to be known yet. And Ash is supposed to be a servant of the Kingdom of Gabriel.

Shoot, sorry I misread that completely and wouldn't they still be tales? She's slightly paranoid and superstitious.

Then it would be rumored, but Lucifer isn't supposed to be known. It has been BURIED for thousands of years by their anscestors. It wouldn't be a thought to even the most suspicious of them.

So, I just got my ice cream, and ready to do this.
I'd like to give thanks to Savi for mentioning these small things, but I shall carry this off with...

Wisp said
>> There are so many ellipses, it's hard to focus. And run-on sentences. And parentheses.
>> Raphael's King called, not Gabriel's King - two totally different people
>> Kingdom of Gabriel killed her parents - they have the assassins and are the threat to the Kingdom of Michael.
>> Kingdom of Raphael wishes for peace, and has not harmed anyone.
>> Kingdom of Lucifer is naught but a bedtime story to frighten children into behaving - definitely not common knowledge or well-known.
>> There is no option, no choice, in the eldest rising to the throne. Adeline was never an option, since she has an elder sister.
>> To wish for death and leave with the intent is essentially treason - if she does not die from her little "mission", she will likely be hung.
>> Ash is not in the Kingdom of Michael, much less your character. Ash is Princess Ani's personal servant in the Kingdom of Gabriel.

So me and Wisp observed pretty much the same things, and these are pretty much it -- though I didn't recognize the sixth bullet's info until now. Even though Savi already mentioned such, I would still like to point out the second bullet along with bullets one, three, four, five, and the last one. Those are just my main burdens and the rest of the stuff is something I can suck up after an experience in... Free Role-play.

Yes, there are many ellipses, which makes it odd to read. I understand there are only two parentheses, and if that is part of your writing style then I cannot really deny you from such. There are also some run-on sentences, but maybe it's just the ellipses driving me crazy. Suppose this is just your writing style and maybe I am not one to judge. I too have a rather annoying writing style, or so I would assume... I seek no flattery however, and I will carry on with my points.
Yet, I am much caring for the information being presented in the role-play. You will have to revise and acknowledge that Raphael was calling for this meeting. A messenger would have come for her anyways, but I suppose whichever way or thing works for you is fine... I also cannot really tell where your character is, which completely threw me off when she was found behind Ash since he was in Ani's room and I was like -- what? I would assume naturally by knowing your character that she was in the Kingdom of Michael, but maybe, for some reason, I am wrong. While that, I suppose your character believing in myths and superstitions could be some form of justice towards thinking the Kingdom of Lucifer is real, but for the majority of the people the kingdom has been put to rest so long ago that there is no chance it's coming back ( or perhaps some other reason as to why they wouldn't believe it's active or existing, either or ). Another point I should make is that during the text...

Kaalee said Although...that hadn't worked out too well in the recent past...since she was having to make this decision in the first place although she knew her sister wouldn't have been a good Queen...

The word decision changes much about what is going on. I would understand if she felt cornered, like she couldn't trust her sister with having the throne, however the seat goes to the eldest in the royal family line. Maybe this is just your diction, but it does change the meaning of the sentence or how she was given a choice. If you cannot comply with the above, then you are free to leave. However, I trust that if you intend to stay you will change your post to the correct order or you will have to be removed. Forgive me for this post early in time -- it was necessary.

I am so, so, sorry, it is a little passed midnight here and I really should have waited until morning to reply to this but I can't fall asleep and I wanted to reply

First of all, I did edit to exclude Ash, that was just foolish on my part and I will edit for my blunder on the King of Raphael, and what I meant by decision is that she had contemplated suicide and she still is. Like I said, she has severe depression and other mental health issues.

Second, sorry about the ellipses, my writing is her thinking and I think in speech patterns(so I will usually talk to myself while writing these posts out) so I have a lot of pauses in it. I always use ellipses to show that. I will work on that, though. Sorry if I annoyed you with that.

Again, I am sorry, it's much to late for me to really be posting and I simply didn't double check. I will make the edits asap

Okay, I did edit. I'm afraid you haven't seen me in the best light with how much I've blundered with you but I assure you, I don't mean to. I simply have been rushing and I need to slow down and start paying attention. Again I apologize for my mistakes, hopefully after this first post they won't happen nearly as grievously or as much, if ever again.

Thank God for custom avatars.

By the way, is there going to be a king of Lucifer at all? I'm curious as to whether there will be a king for Gabriel, Michael, and Lucifer, actually.