Name: Miyazaki Koyoru

Age: 19

Appearance: Her hair is white because of Albinism.

Ranger color: Blue

Weapon: Bo-staff

Personality: Quiet and Analytical. Sees things in a pessimistic view. She doesn't expect things turn out well, in order to avoid disappointment or despair. She is a loner, because she is shy and unsure of herself. She can be quite distant when her confidence reaches an all time low. Despite her pessimistic views, she does do her best at whatever she has to do. She is a kind person, who will be there for her friends.

Bio: Koyoru was born into a rich family, but it was anything but warm and loving. Her mother was constantly absent, and her father was inattentive and uncaring. The times when her father did pay attention to Koyoru was to verbally abuse her. During her childhood, she was able to make friends, but she found out later that they only wanted to be her friend, so they could take advantage of her family's wealth. They honestly thought she was a freak because of her albinism. When she turned fifteen, she left the family and lived on her own.
She is now working as an appraiser for Zerplus.

Raineh Daze said
It was a joke, based on appearance and weapon. XD

Oh... but still. I would like to politely ask you to use a different color if that's alright with you.

It isn't. : |

Well then I guess you can keep the color.

Since we're all here and we all have CS's up, I guess we can start now!

Well, I guess I'm not joining after all then.

It's not like I responded to that PM saying I was still interested and just trying to work things out or anything. But eh, someone else has taken blue, so I'd need to start over from scratch anyway.

Sorry about this... I hope I can get you enlisted when I start my Kamen Rider RP!

pyroman said
Sorry about this... I hope I can get you enlisted when I start my Kamen Rider RP!

... wouldn't the fair thing to do be to take back accepting someone else?

I suppose that it would, but everyone other than you showed their interest in the IntCheck, and even if I were to take back my acceptance to a character, I wouldn't know which one to remove from the RP. I won't be removing somebody just so that someone else could have their spot.

pyroman said
I suppose that it would, but everyone other than you showed their interest in the IntCheck, and even if I were to take back my acceptance to a character, I wouldn't know which one to remove from the RP. I won't be removing somebody just so that someone else could have their spot.

I'm willing to give them my spot as the Auxillery ranger.

Wait, wouldn't Tachi be able to join anyways? I've counted the number of CS's and we only have five rangers.

EDIT: Never mind, I found my answer. ^^" Sorry about that.

The only remaining spot wouldn't join until midway through the RP. Which was presumably not why he got sent a PM asking if he was still interested, since a character that doesn't even initially need to be in the RP wouldn't be that urgent.

Also, he was going to be blue. :/

I see. Thanks for answering my question. ^^"

First post is up!

Koyoru has drained all my desire to post in this roleplay. They are, bluntly, a Mary Sue. NPC's are being created solely to show how awesome they are, which is a bad start. But her 'part-time' job? Extensive chemical analysis on her own, which would require skills to obtain that she'd only get either through extensive experience otherwise (implausible at 19) or... through the very same degree that she's studying for. Oh, and the NPC's have to be easily cowed because that makes her look better.

And her backstory... orphan (woo), learned martial arts from an old master, and is a miko. These last two are in the same place, despite 'shinto shrine' being completely unrelated to 'martial arts dojo' except that they both happen to come from Japan. Meanwhile, personality is 'misunderstood loner' with no actual character flaws except a little doubt, which would simply facilitate having other characters reassure her about her own awesomeness So... orphan, excessively intelligent, basically the best fighter in the RP by default, and a personality that is nothing but warning signs. :/

Finally: white hair. Naturally white hair, no mention of albinism or anything of the like? I am somewhat guilty here because I didn't recolour the eyes there.

I have to agree with you. I was just hoping that the character would be toned down quite a bit during this roleplay, but things do need to be cut from her CS to make her a passable character.

If Koyoru can be changed, then I please ask that you do so to make her a balanced character.

I will change her. I apologize.

Assumed by the lack of response from Tachi, he has fully withdrawn from this.

I really am sorry that I had invited two people even though there was only one vacant spot left in this.

Hopefully Kamen Rider will be a bit more open, and I don't have to put a restriction on how many people we have.

Sorry.

Is anyone else ready to post?