Mike the Bloodwolf said
Well I was told that unless you can connect it to a world, you were not allow to be anything. Besides all he has is Dragon wings and dragon fire, it's not like he can become a dragon or take on dragon form. Even the dragon would only last for about half of the rp anyway.

ColorMeEvil said is very similar to that of a very young spoiled, selfish child, in that he retains no form of compassion or remorse for any of his actions. Furthermore, due to his selfish and capricious personality and mind-set, he is incapable of developing empathy and comprehending the nature of his actions. King is also, like a child, very unpredictable in his behavior and actions, sometimes randomly falling asleep during battle, or acting like a monkey by banging his chest with his fists.

Wayward said
I have my reservations about the dragon aspects of the character... well, particularly that he is essentially half dragon. I just don't see that aspect of him as validated within the KH canon; not through Land of Dragons anyways, as, even with dragons themselves existent within that world and its source, my recollection is that no such hybrids have existed and probably wouldn't exist. Having dragon-like abilities, such as exhaling fire and such is fine, but literally being half-dragon just doesn't seem feasible within the given context. Maybe it's not as big a problem as Kurai and myself want it to be, but we are a bit unsettled by the fact that this snippet has apparently been directly copy-pasted from a that is, by any good guess, not your own work.

ColorMeEvil said
Yep got it directly from Kidd buu, Is there a rule that we can't use something already existent? while looking up photos i ran across kidd buu so i decided to re-read his background and it hit directly for the type of character i'd like to portray. Would you like me to re-word it? Re-type it in my own words? You ever seen something that's so perfect that you can't even say it using your own words, that's what prompted me to use it. but i'm sure you can tell everything else i wrote.

Kurai said
Alright, just a couple more issues impeding us from starting.Bloodwolf, two things. First off, your sheet still says your character can fly. That needs to be removed; if they aren't part-dragon then they shouldn't have wings. Secondly, your dragonfire ability is accepted, but it should start out in a weak state, akin to or slightly more powerful than a tier one spell in Kingdom Hearts.ColorMeEvil, we're still waiting on that personality re-write. Also, we'd like you to define the starting point of your abilities. You say that Ceaser King won't have access to them at full power right away, but you don't mention how powerful they start out. Once these changes are made we'll be ready to launch the RP.