Welp, I'm an uncultured American and I don't know these things XD
Added two more paragraphs to describe her years at the Academy, adding and then subtracting her first love as well. Might as well put in a little life experience while I'm at it ^^
Woo! I like it so far, I'm proud of that sheet. I REALLY need to see these other CSes though, after some short glances before I straddled the 'Write and get interrupted train' and they were pretty interesting.
Also I assume your colleague is providing art for the characters? I only ask because of the part about not bringing photos meant other than specifically for the character.
That more meant "if you are an artist yourself", or "If you have a friend who's an artist and willing to oblige." Whether Companion makes pictures for any other character is totally her choice.