Halvtand said

Gender:
very male

Sexuality:
Dai appreciates strength, and he's found gender doesn't matter to him that much...

Other than that... I like the guy so far, but are you sure you don't want a few taijutsu-techniques? You're pretty weak right now.

Halvtand said Stuff about Pasta Sentinent's character

Halvtand said Stuff about Stranger's character

Halvtand said Stuff about Santhanas Rex' character

Sathanas Rex said
and whelp, if a gm tells me to strengthen my character, I suppose I'll throw in some taijutsu also! I might make something custom to go along with the kusarifukin.

Sathanas Rex said
if a gm tells me to strengthen my character

Sathanas Rex said
if a gm tells me

Sathanas Rex said
gm

Sathanas Rex said
GM

Halvtand said
I'm here to give feedback and fuck bitches.And I'm all out of bitches... So...

Pasta Sentient said
Name: World of the Sword Technique, Ken no sekai
Rank: B
Summary: With this technique, Ryuu uses his sword to cast a powerful genjutsu. The genjutsu places the victim in an illusionary world. In this world, numerous blades are strewn upon the ground making it impossible to take a step without slicing one's feet. The greater danger is in the air. Butterflies with blades for wings quite nearly suffuse the air as they flit about. This genjutsu makes the victim feel as if their body under attack from a meat grinder. It follows the same rules as other genjutsu in regards to breaking free and lack of real world damage aside from mental.

Pasta Sentient said
Also edited Ken no Sepido to add further details to the time limit.
Name: Sword Speed, Ken no supīdo
Rank: B
Summary: Ryuu uses his chakra control and natural ability to enhance his speed beyond even that of the Shunshin. Used in conjunction with his sword, this ability is able to keep up with speeds of low-level Jounin. This is only usable for short periods of time. In order to prevent damage to his body, Ryuu is only capable of using this technique for twenty seconds at a time. There is a one minute period he has to wait until he can use it again unless it is a suicide run.

Pasta Sentient said
And finally, I added an Experimental Jutsu section in the CS.
Experimental Jutsu
(These are jutsu that Ryuu is working on developing. A percentage is put showing how far he has to go until he is capable of using this jutsu in combat.)
Name: Blade of Wind, Kaze no Yaiba
Rank: A
Summary: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materializes it into an near invisible weapon that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind. 40%

Name: Blade of Hell, Jigoku no ha
Rank: A
Summary: This technique is the advanced form of Yoso Buredo (element blade). It adds both wind nature and fire nature to the blade which enhances the current attacking power immensely. This would also give the blade something of a ranged attack by using wind to force the fire off the blade. This would create intense blasts of fire when used to cover mid-close range. This technique has a long way to go as Ryuu has yet to even master Wind. 5%

Wind Mastery: Ryuu has been training the Wind element for a little over two months and is currently on the leaf cutting stage. He is currently able to cut a leaf about an eighth of the way through. Hence, most people will often seem him with a leaf in his hand if he is not doing more intensive training. He finds it frustrating that something is not coming easily to him for once. 10%

Sathanas Rex said
Oh, I see. That's rather neat.

I think though that Daiken is going to alternate between his normally positional and tactical combat style with absolutely insane and over the top taijutsu.

The Mad Hatter said
That is some serious genjutsu. I wouldn't want to be caught in that. I'd rather get strapped to a cross and stabbed by Itachi for 72 hours... *awesome face**ahem* Halvtand and I have discussed this (a lot) and got sidetraked a bit (a lot (bewbs were mentioned)), so sorry it took us so long. We're thinking that this technique is like a mini version of opening a Gate, except the drawback is not quite as high next to the effect. So... *sigh* we agreed that perhaps instead of making it a custom technique, you should just make it opening a gate. He might not know that that is what he is doing (since the Eight Gates are forbidden techniques and all that), but it seems more plausible that way.(Haruka lost her chakra enhanced strength to Halvtand's logic, as well... She's opening a gate, too)Umm... I'm not sure what to say, here. You say that he's only mastered the wind element by 10% and is still at the leaf cutting stage, yet he is almost halfway at training a technique that uterlizes the element of wind. How can he train a technique that he cannot perform? How can he perform a technique that he has not even mastered the element for, yet? It doesn't add up. Until he has mastered the element of wind, he cannot train the technique.

The Mad Hatter said
Your example is rather invalid, as Fire is his natural affinity. Ninja can use their natural element without mastering, simply because it comes natural to them to use it the way they do. Like... If you're naturally graceful, then it's easy to twirl around and look pretty, but the rest of us fall over our feet trying to do the same.Using an element that you do not have natural affinity for and have not yet mastered is very unwide, though I suppose it is not impossibel. It would not just be , but rather it would be dangerous. Mastering the element is sort of like "taming" it and making it follow your commands. If the element is not "tamed", it'll do what it'll do.Wind is also one of the most dangerous elements to play around with like that. Water would just puddle to the ground and be useless if not tamed. Fire would simply burn out (unlike what some might think, it would not explode). Earth would just not respond properly and would possibly just, you know, crumble. Lighting and wind, though, are both "sharp" elements that are used as "blades" when mastered. It'd be like throwing a bunch of knives into their air and hoping not to get hit.

The Mad Hatter said
Oh...I forgot to reply.Uhh... Yeah. Your character is accepted now..