Drake, about Jason's dragon, it's a dragon for gods sake! I believe it will make the character seriously O.P. for the beginning, am I wrong? ( a dragon!)

Drake Baku said
ok, busy time:@Blue:basically he is much better now, just 1 small question I am curious about and one suggestion-The Question: what do you mean with Semi-small amount?-The Suggestion: as this is not an game, with the ice sword, would it not be better that the sword would slightly freeze on touch?as in, one hit might give a small scale freeze burn, the target can still move but has pain, more hits on different places would slow the target down and multiple hits on or near the same spot would truly freeze more and moreGives the sword a more real time effect that pure chance that we cant calculateanyway, aside the suggestion (that is yours to decide) and the question, he is accepted.For BlackCat and Jason hero.we have a small issue, ironically both have the same issue but in different context:-Human world and Eatherra world wallBoth you have a direct connection to both worlds while originally they are not supposed to be connected (aside the light that pulled the humans into Eatherra)Black, yours was cursed by a Mage, yet in the real human world, there are no real mages and curses that have ever been proven, so to have the curse while living in the human world is not possible.What you can do is that your char, due to the light event, got dropped away from the others for some reason and then met a witch or something and got cursed that wayJason, yours is have demon, and I have said that halve is fine, but Demons live in Eatherra as a known race, yet humans dont.With the wall between the 2 worlds, it should be impossible that the mother is human, she cant have been pulled from the human realm and the demon king cant have jumped to the human world either.I said this before I think, About what race would one of the parents be, it can be any sentient race (aside humans (might have forgotten to add that)Sorry for being stingy, but otherwise it will break the plot setting that was made

Fixed it

A semi-small amount is an amount that is not small, nor medium.

And about the sugestion. I kind of like it, maybe I'll add it in sometime soon.

I'll go post now.

No offense @Blue, but your post is kinda creepy...

I dunno what to post. Are the people in the group going to the ruins near where Ivette woke up?

Steel fist said
Drake, about Jason's dragon, it's a dragon for gods sake! I believe it will make the character seriously O.P. for the beginning, am I wrong? ( a dragon!)

A dragon?
I think I have read over something. Then
will reread his cs
also, jason, would the soul caliber have any powers or is it just a strong sword?

LowKey123 said
I dunno what to post. Are the people in the group going to the ruins near where Ivette woke up?

If she woke up in some ruins
then its likely
The group was going to some (important) ruines ib order to take shelter for the coming storm

And Akai will just wander into the group at some point.

Drake Baku said
If she woke up in some ruinsthen its likelyThe group was going to some (important) ruines ib order to take shelter for the coming storm

Oh.
I had her wake up in the middle of NOWHERE!
NOWHERE!
NOWHERE!
alone alone alone alone

But really, she woke up on some grass.

Let here find the ruins by pure chance

and Jason
I have indeed missed the part about your dragon
Before I would say no I need to know
what is the deal and planning with the dragon?

Well i srsly think the ruins,need some sort of guardian which attacks none humans(shar (hes a minotaur) death and bloody mary runa blue gaara) because. If it didnt it would be overrun with goblins or thieves

What's the problem with the ruins being populated with goblins and other weak monsters? We do need to fight something at some point (that's if any of the goblins will even show themselves after they smell a minotaur).
Besides, a guardian attacks everybody, what's the logic behind it attacking only none humans?

Because it protects the ruins from those unlawful to tale them but i like the idea with the goblins

Drake Baku said
A dragon? I think I have read over something. Thenwill reread his csalso, jason, would the soul caliber have any powers or is it just a strong sword?

Just a cool looking strong sword, and because I saw somebody was using soul edge xD.

But yeah, its Just a strong sword that looks cool. No powers.

The dragon is there because my character is actually rather weak compared to a minotaur, yeah he has telekinsis but that only works on things he can see, its not an ultimate defense sort of thing, and the telekinesis has a range of only being able to affect things ten feet away from him, and at that range he is lucky if he's able to knock over a human. At the closest he might be able to throw the human a bit but that's it. He wears no armor. The dragon levels the playing field.

Plus if she dies, Gaara lives but its like he lost a huge chunk of himself and is weaker than before. If Gaara takes damage or dies, so does she. That's my reasoning.

As for what I was planning, just the shock and awe factor of 'Holy shit! He's got a Dragon!' And I just wanted to exlore thier bond while facing down threats. Including bigger and stronger dragons, and bigger and stronger demons. Wasn't planning to be OP.

I can ditch the dragon if you want, just have Gaara's telekinsis be much stronger, like throwing boulders (max being about the same weight as a small car.) And slamming enemies into trees strong.

Charac, why would humans have the right to enter the ruins?
(I mean, let's look at this guardian like on a computer security program, does it forbids every being from entering the ruins like a firewall, or does it have a definition of creatures it needs to fight like an anti-virus? And if it's the last case, then why go through the trouble of defining and not just forbid everybody to enter?)

Drake, I have worked out some of Shar's development:
First artifact: will be a set of 2 magical axes, they will be made from an indestructible alloy(maybe developed by local alchemists) and will tie themselves to Shar, as he is the one who absorbed the "Minotaurus", basically they can't be lost or stollen because they'll just re-appear in Shars hands at his will.They also will cary the axe superior fighter ablities with them, those abilities will be absorbed by Shar the first time he touches the artifact.

The second artifact: will be about protection and defence, it will turn Shar's hide as hard as forged steel, and so it will turn his horns and hoofs as hard as forged steel, it will also give him the regeneration ability (his wounds will heal fast, and if he happens to lose a limb, it will regenerate over time).

On the third artifact I think of going towards the immunity to hostile magic ability, and we will see from there..

What do you think?

For the upgrade of shar and the dragon discussion I will respond next time (when I am on a real comp)
The souledge user was the old GM so he wont appear anymore

and the is a valid reason for the Guardian idea to not attack humans
2 even
One is the things hiden in these ruins are meant by legend for the humans
as humans dobt exist originally, the ones that would show up would be the rightfull owners/ hairs for the hidden stuff (if they would find it)
Second, the guardian would have to be immortal due ti the ages, so a golum would be a good option, but golums with a job like this needs to be 'programmed' and humans as a non existing presences would be a blind spot, something the golum would not even be able to see as a sentiant race

Drake, why would there be artifacts meant for humans if humans don't exist in this dimension? Who created them and put them in the ruins?
About the guardian, we can go either direction, but it has to be logical, if I wanted to protect an artifact, I'll just make the guardian warn and attack any trespasser.

well if it attacked everything it knew because it was programmed if it saw humans that would be a blind spot. but what about death and bloody mary since they never appear publicly

Steel:
Spoilers
I have something planned trough
might have some holes, might not have holes
I would say
when we get to a place we would be going towards after this
ask that again (as we are going anwser hunting xd)

charac:
I guess they would be blind then as well

also steel
as your char was human from base
the guardian might not see yours either, its kinda a 50/50 with him
(He is needed to open the damned door)

Charac, I'm not sure how the visions of golems work and how does it recognizes creatures ( I guess we can take the uncertainty and bend it to fit our goal in the game).
Drake, Shar is a human in a minotaurs body, he has a human mind and soul, so it really depends on how the golem gets information about the surrounding. If he has visual perception organs like ours, then he will see everybody including the humans and death and probably attack the trespassers. But if he feels the aura or something, then he will not know what's creating the human aura as he never saw such a thing before and he will also see Shar as a human, as Shar has a human aura (I think). Anyway, if Shar is strong enough to handle the golem and break the damn door then it doesn't really matters..