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lol yeah, I decided against Thermo-kinesis

Name: Marvin 'Spectre' Cook
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Magic Power: Marvin can turn invisible whenever he wants...unless he isn't restrained, unable to focus or not fully with it.. While he's invisible he can be heard, even his footsteps or breathing. But he can be quite silent if he holds his breath and tip toes past people. He can't be noticed, unless people throw flour or something along thos elines at him, which would reveal him until he washed it off. He can't stay invisble for too long, he can do it for like 10 minutes until he suddenly turns visible again until he can go back to his invisible state. Anything he's touching turns invisible at the same time with him, but it requires some strain to keep it invisible.
How he/she became insane: He was always ignored by his family, nobody ever talked to him at school and eventually fell into a great depression since people would pretend he was dead or invisible. One day he decided to confront his family and he got pushed down the stairs, where he finally snapped.
Insanity Traits: He has an obsession with paintings, he loves to go on huge rants about paintings that many would say were manic and scary. He's pretty jumpy and fast, hardly ever stops to take breaths when he's talking about Paintings.
Country of origin: Ireland
Backstory/History: Marvin was born in a family of sport athletes. His brother was a master of Football and his sister was a great gymnast. He had no interest in Sport from a very young age when his dad tried to make him do something sporty. His parents began shouting at him and becoming abusive trying to make him realise his potential. But he really had no potential, and he knew he never would. He got used to his family but then they grew quiet...and ignored him. Never talked to him or anything. People at school stopped bullying him at the age of 10..... and he never got talked to by anyone, he tried to talk to people he considered his friends but they wouldn't. He turned to painting, the only place where he could be rid of the ignroance and be at peace with himself. But still everyone else pretended he wass a ghost. This bugged him straight to the point when he turned 16. He couldn't take it, he was like a ghost to everyone. He went on a trip to London, even there nobody talked to him, the hotel staff said hi but that was it. When he got home from London, he pursued his father who started shouting and pushed him down the stairs.
Personality: He's shy, scaredy-cat and goes really hyper about paintings...
How long has your character been in Smile Asylum?: Just joined.
Trinkets: A little plastic paint brush.
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Inuyasha may I just point out that it is impossible to kill a person with playing cards. A card can sink only about a half a centimeter into ballistic gel. If one was aiming to kill someone, they would have to aim for the neck. They would have to get through about an inch of a man's Adam's apple. Then it would have to sever his windpipe. This would be highly unrealistic. The killer would have to be hit a man's back, and it would have to make contact with it's corner to the skin. Don't ask how I know this, just trust me. XD
I mean this is an rp, so realism isn't exactly a priority. I'd just thought I'd let you know.
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@DaDrummer676: hurr ;-; oh yeah? I never specified what TYPE of cards they were. Razor tipped huh how you like them apples
@Scallop: I'll approve it but I must know, what the hell do paintings have anything to do with Marvin?
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Inuyasha said
@DaDrummer676: hurr ;-; oh yeah? I never specified what TYPE of cards they were. Razor tipped huh how you like them apples@Scallop: I'll approve it but I must know, what the hell do paintings have anything to do with Marvin?


Well, maybe he looked to piantings as a way to escape the ignorance. Or maybe I ran out of ideas and just plopped that in.
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Scallop said
Well, maybe he looked to piantings as a way to escape the ignorance. Or maybe I ran out of ideas and just plopped that in.


XD just plop that in somehwere on the CS

the part about looking to escape ignorance.
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Done!
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Inuyasha said
@Shiinen: No matter how many times I read over your power I can't understand it. Could you explain it to me? From what I can understand, it's overpowered. You can summon creautres, essentially go anywhere you want, and lock people away into the shadow zone? Maybe I just understood it wrong.


Oh ah. Alright, essentially, it's the concept to take hallucinations out of the mind and bring them into real life. It's limited to her only being able to use this ability on a single door at a time, and the whole "portal" thing is limited to anywhere that has a door -- though I can take it out just as easily if wanted. It's supposed to make doors a direct bridge to things she thinks up -- but not anything can fit through them. So, something humanoid could fit through, but not a hug godzilla or kaiju thing, and it can also be put onto a limitation as well. The whole shadow zone thing was...well, it's pretty much like:
Shove person into door -> Person is stuck in there until the next time the ability is used, which makes them fall out when she opens up any door at all.

I can put any limits on it that you'd like or want, or just completely revamp it if you want. I just wanted to be unique, Senpai. ;w;
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@Shiinen: Okay so she can open up doors to nowhere... and conjure up hallucinations.... and go to anywhere?
I don't know, I'd appreciate it if you just revamped the power, sorry for the inconvenience. ;-;
@Scallop: Approved
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Yayz!
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Pretty soon gonna cut off applications so hurry up and finish them.
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Edited mine with a different concept. Hopefully pieced it together. I'm a bit sleepy so I hope I made sense ;;
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Yay! Another brawling, punchy type. I bet her and Barry will get along fabulously..! In between fits of punching things and being grouchy of course!
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Yay! Another brawling, punchy type. I bet her and Barry will get along fabulously..! In between fits of punching things and being grouchy of course!


She'll be a perfect conversation partner until she gets too upset. D:

...T~T I liked the original concept too much to take out the Enderman references.
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Cleaned it up, but Grammar is not my forte. I apologize but can someone pm me what needs to be cleaned up in that regard?
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@DaDrummer676: hurr ;-; oh yeah? I never specified what TYPE of cards they were. Razor tipped huh how you like them apples@Scallop: I'll approve it but I must know, what the hell do paintings have anything to do with Marvin?


Then I suggest you clarify. XD
But how would one attach razors to a playing car whilst still being able to throw then efficiently. One on each corner would not work and would weigh it down and make it fold in in itself.
I am still editing my CS by the way.
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I thought razor-tipped meant the edges were especially sharp (and the entire card was made of something other than what they normally use to make cards), not that they had actual razor blades attached.
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That would make a lot more sense.... My brain is amazing. XD
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If Rose can't interact with people, but can interact with physical objects, does that mean that they could still attack you if they had a weapon?
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Where my changes to specification?
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@nonsequiter: You would be correct. That's what Joker from Batman did anyways. ;O;
@demntedgrin: Your CS is up to snuff now. I'll approve it.
@Shiinen: Eiika is approved. (>'-')> <('-'<) ^(' - ')^ <('-'<) (>'-')>
@WatermelonTango: I've actually been toying around with that part, and I've changed it. Might want to check it again. Finished my CS entirely actually.
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