Hey sorry I didn't see you respond till just now.

Alright this all seems like rather simple stuff.

1. I'm not exactly sure about what Gunships exist :/ if you guys could give some suggestions it would be much appreciated.

2. I completely forgot the time line when I was making Finch so he will be earthborn, that was my bad and I apologies.

3. Turian name is changed to Brutus Novos. That better I hope?

4. I didn't intend to control Aria. I just wanted Finch to know her in some way. Makes him fit my mental image of him better.

Well there is the A-61 Mantis gunship, a fairly generic one available galaxy wide and the one shown in all the Mass Effect Games. There are no other known classes, so really all I would ask is to specify which races design principles they follow. Hell, they could even be Volus gunships - it is a little known fact that the Volus airforce is a rather scary and effective force, and I imagine they'd have some unique designs. But I digress. I just wanted to let you know that your gunships would not be the ones you see all the time in the games. The other option is to use Fighters, as they are FTL capable, if you'd prefer not to have 'generic gunship design.'
This really is me nitpicking though so don't worry yourself over it.

Everyone seems to be making that mistake these days, its all good.

That is a wonderful Turian name.

And yeah I was just making sure on that count. My goal is for fairly minimal canon character inclusion, and what you intend seems fine to me with that clarification. No changes needed on it.

Your sheet is quite good, you know when the only issues I find are so simple that you've done it all right :D

Rtron:

Minor thing really but still bugs me. Humans have only been in the galactic community for less than thirty years, and since the Legion is far older than that, the name of its founder cannot've been suggested by a human before Tevura arrived, as humans were still busy colonising and fighting over America.... (roughly).
It is somewhat amusing that you make this (common) mistake despite one of your characters later fully accounting for the fact...

Also, Asari not only live longer than humans but take a little longer to mature I believe, though the wiki is annoyingly lacking in specifics and its been a while since I've chatted to Liara... Anyway, the point, Morinth was discovered to be Ardat Yakshi at the age of 40. I think 16 is slightly more like a child for an Asari, and adding a few years onto her age before her experimenting might be a good idea...
Aside from this, this is a remarkably well crafted Ardat Yakshi character. You do yourself credit Rtron.

My only issue with Tasi is why exactly there would be a mutiny on a Quarian ship. Sure, they have disagreements, but those disagreements are almost never solved with violence, as Quarians tend towards solving things through debate instead of killing, more so now that their population is so limited.
Other possibilities to replicate that situation could include the ship being attacked from outside, though I leave it to you as to the specifics.

Kalros is interesting. My issue with her is again in the early part of her life, in that Tuchanka doesn't actually have a spaceport per-se. The place Shepard lands is merely the silo entrance to Urdnots settlement, not an official spaceport, as Tuchanka isn't exactly a hot destination for trade or tourism. Plenty of Krogan do leave their homeworld though so I assume there are a few spots that could be considered analagous to a spaceport, likely the more well established clan settlements. So i guess not so much of an issue as clarification, she'd've had to go to another clan most likely, and been very lucky.

Dave seems mostly alright. I like how he was utterly annihilated by the Turian fleet. They tend to do that.
I don't think he'd be the most famous... Terminus is large and has a lot of pirates after all, though some fame is alright.

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Your sheet is quite good, you know when the only issues I find can be so simple that you've done it all right :D
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Yay! :D

Never tried the trafficking buisness in an rp before. Should be pretty fun... and Incredibly evil >:P

Gotta make dat moneh!

Edit: *Whispers* I'll switch to fighters because that's probably a better escort anyway, can I have half Turian and half Human fighters? Provided they both have FTL capabilities of course.

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Yay! :DNever tried the trafficking buisness in an rp before. Should be pretty fun... and Incredibly evil >:PGotta make dat moneh!

Halios could probably make use of that service. :P No reason not to have multiple suppliers.

^^^ Hehehe What are you in the market for? Why don't we go pm and we can get a contract ratified?

Halios Consortium has an off the books research department that usually purchases living people as test subjects for new medicines and therapy treatments that basically says "lol ethics" with the mindset that progress is made by risk and sacrifice, so they're able to develop new and effective medical breakthroughs at the cost of quite a few bodies (on the plus side, the incinerator saves on heating bills!). After proving it's safe they bullshit a few journals and doctor a few documents and boom! Here comes the income.

The fact that Halios admires the Collectors' business practice should tell you he's not a good man.

Haha love it and Helix would be very happy to provide you with 'Willing' test participants. We will need to obviously work a couple things out first thought.

Just thought of something. If a spectre is ever sent after Helix it's going to end up being Taken 3 "I will find you in the vast depths of space... and I will kill you!"

God, two was bad enough. But a third?

I should also point out that Echo hasn't actually accepted you yet, if you thought as much. He just said no issues with your sheet, tomorrow(for me) late tomorrow (for him as he is in NZ) he is going to select sheets to accept.

Sheepland exists in its own temporal pocket of existence that the rest of the world can't comprehend.

Wales isn't that bad Dervish...

Wales may have lots of sheep, but NZ literally has more sheep than people.

Which is to say the odds of Sunny D really being a sheep instead of a person are exceedingly high.

He's also from space.

Spacesheep.

I know I'm not accepted yet I was just preparing for if I am, also it can't hurt my app to already have made arrangements with other people :D

Oh no it can't. I was just checking :P

Excellent :P perhaps you'd be interested in securing a contract with Helix?

Why? I might buy the odd exotic animal but I have no use for slaves. They don't make good eyes and ears. Gotta remember that I also deal in information. I know everything that goes on on my Casino. I can't trust slaves not to make their own bargains for their freedom. I do however have an arena that can be hired out for gladiator matches or sales.

Well there are a number of ways a slave could serve in your line of work and most slaves are trained into servitude before they are sold so as not to fight for their freedom.
Slaves could serve any purpose really Maid/manservant, stripper/escort, Casino Dealer, Barhand etc... You could use them for many purposes really. Although I would suggest you do not put them in ranking positions they nay not understand. The process taken for loyalty training is not always healthy for the IQ.

Still, unlike employees where I do the whole "respect and good pay" thing and get to know them so I know who needs to be where I cannot trust slaves, I cannot trust that you have programmed them to a certain degree. If I bought actual slaves from you it would be as a Gladiator or it would be exceptionally good stock with no indoctrination whom I would simply free and then enter the hero complex.

Don't worry though, like everyone else you can come visit and spend all your money aboard. As what is the fun going to an NPC Casino? Come to the Lonely Spacer and run into PCs!

Will be interesting if different merc groups are aboard at the same time :P

Very well. I'm sure Finch will pay a visit at some point. He does love to spend his money, and what better way then to gamble it :D

We've got Blackjack! And Hookers!

and Gladiators! I also plan to use unused maintenance corridors into a swoop race track!

The more ways to make money the better, and don't forget the useful fact that the boss is also a bit of an information nut. Buys and sells information.