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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dedonus
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Captain Jordan said
It magically teleports to the current speaker. It's the speaker cube!


I hope you guys don't mind me changing the last line so that Mario hands it over just to keep continuity. I just replaced a six-seven word sentence with my paragraph.
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Dedonus said
I hope you guys don't mind me changing the last line so that Mario hands it over just to keep continuity. I just replaced a six-seven word sentence with my paragraph.


I'm cool with it.
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I'm cool with it.


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Dedonus said
Wait, doesn't Mario have the cube right now? Because at the end, it says that Clay hands it over.


In the last post I made, Clay snatches it from Mario to ask Nierefiem about it. Trying to start the Lancer-Leader friendly rivalry off early, although Mario handing it to the war-prince makes more sense seeing as he's the leader, so it's all good.
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DeadBeatWalking said
In the last post I made, Clay snatches it from Mario to ask Nierefiem about it.


Oh...I must have overlooked that...thanks for point that out.
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There, I changed it so Mario snatches it back. My bad for overlooking that. For some strange reason, I thought Mario still had the cube.
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No worries, Mario giving it to Nierefiem makes more sense anyway, seeing as he is the leader. If you want, I'll add a bit to the beginning of the collab for Mario to take it back from Clay so it all goes smoothly.

EDIT: Nevermind, didn't see your post. Everything's all as planned, yay!
Excited for everything to get started once we leave the construction yard. Definitely got some stuff in mind.
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DeadBeatWalking said
No worries, Mario giving it to Nierefiem makes more sense anyway, seeing as he the leader. If you want, I'll add a bit to the beginning of the collab for Mario to take it back from Clay so it all goes smoothly.


Sure. If you do that, you can delete the part at the end where Mario takes the cube back.

Edit: So what I have is okay?
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Hey, Terminal, I edited Max's last line, too (not an excuse to try --> no excuse not to try), so you may want to edit accordingly. =)
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I added in some more Theo, and if no one minds I posed some more drama at the end of the post. Should I take it out or does anyone want to continue?
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No, leave it - Theo makes too good a point.

Proposal: Either everyone will follow Iikka with varying degrees of reluctance, or else Clay or Mario might try to take the Morphing Cube back away from Iika before he runs - and if they do that, their hands can get glued to he Morphing Cube until we have our dramatic powerup scene (which can just occur afterwards anyway if everyone decides to follow).

Also, Metroid.
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I put up Mario's reaction. I only had him speaking so that the others can make their voices heard before Mario (or Clay or both) do(es) anything.
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I'm kind of feeling like we need Vivid's input now. I know Theo's got nothing, he's itching to get out of there but there's no way he's following Iikka's lead (yay, teen angst drama!). Max might have something to say, but after that it's up to our resident, blue-furred War Prince.
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I'm kind of feeling like we need Vivid's input now. I know Theo's got nothing, he's itching to get out of there but there's no way he's following Iikka's lead (yay, teen angst drama!). Max might have something to say, but after that it's up to our resident, blue-furred War Prince.


I second this. We'll just have to wait until Vivid gets back from her (is that correct?) trip.
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Captain Jordan said
I'm kind of feeling like we need Vivid's input now. I know Theo's got nothing, he's itching to get out of there but there's no way he's following Iikka's lead (yay, teen angst drama!). Max might have something to say, but after that it's up to our resident, blue-furred War Prince.


Nah, I was going to say the same thing. She's only going to say she wants to say, and then they'll just be arguing in circles, which whatshisface would have cut off already anyway.
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Hey team! Sorry for the wait, I literally just got back to civilization. I'll work on my addition today or tomorrow! Thank y'all for your patience and work on the collab! :)
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Welcome back, Vivid. How was the move-in?
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The move in has been EXTREMELY hectic, to say the least. I just made a small addition to the collab. It's not a lot, but enough to get things moving. I'm still pretty busy, but I'll start checking back pretty often so that we can hopefully get the collab finished soon.

Again, I am really sorry for this delay on my part, and thank you all for your dedication and patience!
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Aright, added a big chunk of Max action. Y'all feel free to break it up as you see fit.

Terminal, I predict a lot of tension between Max and Iikka, so if you want to have him not give her the thingy, that's fine. She'll hit him. It'll be fun. =D
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Well, no one made a move, so I did.
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