I will read them tomorrow after I finish my app, that was a massive few hours of work for me, so I like to play some games to enjoy myself for a bit.
Although Im going to be interested to see how the Hau and Lancians react to each other, due to there similiar ideals.

I've to as of yet read the updated Sheets. When I do I will add additional comments to the same review post. It's linked in the original post and I'll relink it once the comments are posted too.

As for the human propagation concept, I'm fine with it if it's something everyone else wants. My human sub faction can operate independently.
Speaking of which @serp we need to work on something xD I just need to edit it to mention the sphere as an origin somehow and why it's separate. Most likely wanting autonomous capital control free of the AI seeing as how it's essentially a conglomerated company-nation.

I am making the Slaver Empire. A central race of AIs that was created by a long-died-out race with two commands: Defend the race, and defend their home system. Since the people died, they eliminated that command and decided that the best way to defend the home system was to conquer everything else.

I haven't made any updates to mine for probably 20 hours so I was more meaning did you think I needed a drastic bit more of just the few polishing touches I had planned?

Also did you want a history at all? Full-blown or quick synopsis or anything?

Oh and Darkmatter, have I ever mentioned that you're a master of irony?

Darkmatter said
• With regards to standards. This is an advanced RP as such I expect high quality grammar and syntax. Vocabulary doesn’t bother me too much, I’d prefer a will written post with limited vocab over one sprinkled with an unnecessary abundance of synonyms

Hey, Darkmatter, I have a question

The Slaver Empire I'm making is, to say the least, big, and powerful. However, they are overconfident from years of easy conquest, the four subspecies have technology on par with people who may just be a couple centuries into the stars, while the AI ships, which are all clustered in the middle of the empire, are insanely powerful [except when you use 4 sublight antimatter/40-megaton missiles in one spot in less than a second, in which you can slip two more in through the energy shield's gap less than a second after it's broken open to cause irrepairable, irreversable damage, which would cause the ship AI commander to self-destruct, for fear of someone gaining the technology]

Can I send it to you by PM as a side-threat? One that a major Region power or a Quandrant power would have some trouble with, but less so if you're intuitive and catch them by surprise. I will give you the strengths and weaknesses, so that you can see that it is a strange sort of balanced.

WilsonTurner said
I am making the Slaver Empire. A central race of AIs that was created by a long-died-out race with two commands: Defend the race, and defend their home system. Since the people died, they eliminated that command and decided that the best way to defend the home system was to conquer everything else.

Ah, a suspiciously similar foil and shadow archetype for the Sphere to fight for all eternity, wonderful.

@Darkmatter: I'll send you a PM to a private chat to set down in stone the human problem

Darkmatter, a suggestion.
You should put the accepted sheets into hiders in the op.
Also tell us when you get those additional comments up.

duck55223 said
Darkmatter, a suggestion.You should put the accepted sheets into hiders in the op.Also tell us when you get those additional comments up.

I'd suggest using a NS Dump instead, if you tried to put mine in a hider it'd screw up all the formatting I have myself.

Kangaroo said
I'd suggest using a NS Dump instead, if you tried to put mine in a hider it'd screw up all the formatting I have myself.

Also they'd break the character limit.

Just attach links to the permalinks for each NS post.

And the image limit.

Yeah permalink are the best option.

I have a little more to get done on mine. Might make their appearance more mystical and alien, but I can't really find any good images for what I want. Also need to work on technology levels and flesh that out, and re-work their history so as to have their conflict with the Crayvens (If that was still a thing we would work on).

But other than that, it is nearly done, with some minor tweaks to certain things.

I'm pretty sure I'm done on mine, unless you really want a history.

I need to finish my histry and a few other details. And I hope to get the bloody image of my flag up. Made the dam thing on Open office paint and now I have no idea how to put the image up.

Ollumhammersong said
I need to finish my histry and a few other details. And I hope to get the bloody image of my flag up. Made the dam thing on Open office paint and now I have no idea how to put the image up.

If it is in a regular file like .Bmp or .Jpeg etc, you can use the site https://imageshack.com. I use that place

it's not a regular file. Open office seems to work differently in that regard. it saves it as a .odg and I fon;t have the option to save it as anything else.

that's quite odd. so it wont open with paint or anything. how funky.

https://forum.openoffice.org/en/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=36817

Thanks for that. That was starting to bother the hell out of me. I'll post it when I update the rest of my sheet. Hopefully late today.

Ollumhammersong said
Thanks for that. That was starting to bother the hell out of me. I'll post it when I update the rest of my sheet. Hopefully late today.

You're welcome! Looking forward to your updated ns.

@kangaroo Wow. I feel like hiding in a corner now. *changes 'i' to 'e' in agonising self torment.
As for the NS, actual length isn't hugely important but the more you want to tell us the better. Just do what you feel you want to.

@everyone permalinks in OP is the method I'm opting for.
Also there seems to be an endless stream of PM's and what not. I will be on this chatzy from 20:00-02:00 GMT to try answer as much as I can as quickly as I can http://us20.chatzy.com/14332470603402

I will tell you all when I've had the time to add additional reviews and comments.

Darkmatter said
@kangaroo Wow. I feel like hiding in a corner now. *changes 'i' to 'e' in agonising self torment.As for the NS, actual length isn't hugely important but the more you want to tell us the better. Just do what you feel you want to.@everyone permalinks in OP is the method I'm opting for.Also there seems to be an endless stream of PM's and what not. I will be on this chatzy from 20:00-02:00 GMT to try answer as much as I can as quickly as I can http://us20.chatzy.com/14332470603402I will tell you all when I've had the time to add additional reviews and comments.

I loved the irony of it more than anything. Ah okay I'll fire up something brief for history then it's done :)