I might have... but you should still fix it, after all, I can't edit your half of the OP. Anywho, it's not that big of an issue, it just kinda gives you something to do on here while we wait for the others.
Lugia said
Well, waiting on others.
ZombieMagikarp said
My description isn't based on Breen's perspective. It's more-so a narration coming from my own words. Meaning, of course I'm gonna compare something that WE know to something that doesn't exist in this world. I write in third person, not first. "More impatient. This line of Pokemon in front of him? He'd have better luck at the Department of friggin' Motor Vehicles."psst, hey, notice I used the word "he" and never said "I". And of course that's not breaking the fourth wall! You'd know when I'd be friggin' breakin' it. And, that's making a comparison to something we know to make an example of what kind of situation Breen's in. I write my shit in third person, guys. Think, wouljda?
Sumable said
Kabling said change it, so change it.
ZombieMagikarp said
First of all, he never said that. Second of all, are you friggin' daft or just plain stupid?
Sumable said
It doesn't make sense in the rp, even if it is third person or from your PoV.
Lugia said
That one pronoun may have changed my opinion on this.