huzzah, is there an OOC IC yet? I didn't see one in the OP

Psyga315 said
The Data Fields are there. It's just that they're not JTTM's Data Fields.

I believe I have them all there, as shown in the OP.

Even with the formatting done that way it seems kind of....off.

but I'm not the GM XD

Draconilian said
huzzah, is there an OOC IC yet? I didn't see one in the OP

There is.

Also, something occurred in my head. Gravity Ring's power falls within the banned powers list due to its Telekentic properties. My advice is to either disallow it from affecting people (since the banned powers list says only telekensis towards other people is banned).

Andion Isurand said
I believe I have them all there, as shown in the OP.

Ah. Okay, I'll look at it now.

The profile's pretty minimal. Personality's four words, backstory's just a sentence plus a link to a long character sheet. Powers are two classes that, to someone who doesn't play 3.5 Dungeons and Dragons (or Pathfinder), doesn't really explain much. I say expand the profile to about the size of... Hm... I'll link to my own profile for example.

I forgot to mention the four finisher rings aren't there anyway (Special Blizzard Lightning Grav) What if I just used it as it's actual purpose of increasing/decreasing gravity instead the the Telekinesis used in the show? I'll just remove it if I can't get a good compromise, no big loss.

Going to claim a second Character with Reimu Hakurei. App will be up soon.

After thinking on this a little bit, Reimu might be particularly a bad choice for the RP. I think I'll go with Sakura Oogami instead.

Alrighty, I added more to the CS for my character.

Draconilian said
I forgot to mention the four finisher rings aren't there anyway (Special Blizzard Lightning Grav) What if I just used it as it's actual purpose of increasing/decreasing gravity instead the the Telekinesis used in the show? I'll just remove it if I can't get a good compromise, no big loss.

That can work.

Andion Isurand said
Alrighty, I added more to the CS for my character.

The backstory is perfect. Powers is good, but could be better explained, at least in my mind. Personality is still barebones. Here's a tip: try writing a sentence for each of the words you used to describe the personality.

Figured I'd give this RP a try!

* Name: Parker West
* Age: 16
* Gender: Male
* Appearance: This
* Power: Midna's magic from The Legend of Zelda. With this power, Parker obtains a variety of abilities:
** Warping: Parker has the ability to warp himself and other objects/people from one point to another, regardless of size.
** Flight
** Shapeshifting: Parker can change his form(for the sake of definition, he can only turn into people or animals), and disintegrate, allowing him to travel through walls and other obstacles, or reside in the shadows of others.
** Hammerspace: Parker is capable of placing objects in a personal pocket dimension, which he can access at will.
** Hair: Parker can use his hair as an extra limb with far more strength than his normal arms.
** Energy Ball: Parker can create small balls of energy, capable of cutting through metal and other things of similar or lesser strength.
* Faction: Unaligned
* World of Origin: Normal Earth
* Personality: Parker believes, above all else, in the importance of politeness. Treating his friends and acquaintances with respect and his enemies with thinly veiled passive aggressiveness, it takes a lot to get Parker to snap, and such an achievement will supply a very violent reward. Parker is also very competitive, willing to go to any means necessary(without cheating) to win.
* Backstory: Parker... Doesn't really have anything particularly interesting in his past. He was born, got older, went to school, and developed an interest in Star Trek.
* Quote: "Are you okay?"

Hm... Alrighty, Accepted