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Duck, baby, if a fleet of warships that maybe constitutes to, idunno, several dozen ships, all fire at once with every single weapon, three measly ships can't be THAT strong enough to shrug them all off.

I mean that many ships firing could amount to thousands of slugs, torpedos, missiles, plasma bursts, etc. which really should be able to do more than shield wear and minor hull damage, your ships can't be that invincible.
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Duck, baby, if a fleet of warships that maybe constitutes to, idunno, several dozen ships, all fire at once with every single weapon, three measly ships can't be THAT strong enough to shrug them all off.I mean that many ships firing could amount to thousands of slugs, torpedos, missiles, plasma bursts, etc. which really be able to do more than shield wear and minor hull damage, your ships can't be invincible.


Wait how many ships do you have? I thought it was only a few.

Although shrugging off Dark Energy and Anti-Protons like there nothing is a bit more bullcrapish,
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Wait how many ships do you have? I thought it was only a few.Although shrugging off Dark Energy and Anti-Protons like there nothing is a bit more bullcrapish,


A Sazkarjhit warfleet consists of one cruiser, two dozen frigates, a dozen destroyers and 6-8 specialized ships (EW ships, supercarriers, corvettes, etc.)

And I was trying to compensate for the fact that your ships managed to withstand an awful lot of fire.
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A Sazkarjhit warfleet consists of one cruiser, two dozen frigates, a dozen destroyers and 6-8 specialized ships (EW ships, supercarriers, corvettes, etc.)And I was trying to compensate for the fact that your ships managed to withstand an awful lot of fire.


I don't know why I thought you only had four, just let me edit my post really quick. You should edit yours after I get mines edited
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Its edited.
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Hey guys, it's jello_pudding from the original RP, and I'm back from the internet-dead to RP some more. I think I should start on a clean slate because 1. Probably no one remembers and 2. RoS was going nowhere. So here it is, my new app: *note: this app will change for better (or worse) offen.*

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Hay guys, it's jello_pudding from the original, and I'm back from the internet-dead to RP some more. I think I should start on a clean slate because 1. Probably no one remembers and 2. RoS was going nowhere. So here it is, my new app:


This app is just really low quality, with spelling and grammar mistakes everywhere.
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duck55223 said
This app is just really low quality, with spelling and grammar mistakes everywhere.Denied


Ok, ill see what I can do if you have any specific points you want fixed or changed I'd be glad to hear about it. thanks for your feedback! (in hindsight I should have someone proof read other than me)
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I will let Darkwolf do that, he can give you some better pointers.
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Well, for a start there has been no Russia, No Soviet Union and No Cold War, unless your people have been in space for somewhere around 52 thousand years. These latest "Humans" who have come up from the stone age didn't come up from Earth.
Secondly, its just too short and has a couple of grammar and spelling errors
Three, there isn't really a "galactic pace" to be keeping up with, everyone is at different points.
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Well, for a start there has been no Russia, No Soviet Union and No Cold War, unless your people have been in space for somewhere around 52 thousand years. These latest "Humans" who have come up from the stone age didn't come up from Earth. Secondly, its just too short and has a couple of grammar and spelling errorsThree, there isn't really a "galactic pace" to be keeping up with, everyone is at different points.


thanks, I love when people actually give good criticisms, Ill work on my app and post when i update it, and as I'm looking at other peoples work I now see some spots where my quality writing outright died, hopefully I can hit the spot. and again, thanks for the feedback.
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Ok. I updated the app, if it's not "at standard" just tell me what I could do better. Thanks!
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Wait... What convergence point? Anyone want to fill me in on what exactly is being attacked?
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I thought a few of these were ships that were across from each other. I guess I was confused by it.

I was trying to make a point that Sylve was still a problem in Equestrian space.
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Well, there is a Delphan (I think?) ship and an equestrian ship, though no Collective ship and the Collective isn't speaking lol
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Oh whoops (/._.)/
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Duck how did you find the Sylva base???
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---snip--- double post
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Duck how did you find the Sylva base???


Paranoid Equestrians
Its extremely difficult to hide a station within Equestrian space, there constant patrols and a lot of detection systems.
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