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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dingo
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CommissarRanden said
POSTED! Good or Bad? Interesting or Boring?


Looks good, man! There's only one thing that I would change (which means you don't have to) is;

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Chrislann was traveling in in his normal attire but with sunglasses as he didn't want anybody to know it was him.


That would help maintain the flow of your post by keeping it in third person(?) perspective instead of suddenly switching to first person.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Asuras
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Finally something for MC to PAWNCH.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by CommissarRanden
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Oh shit! Oh my god, Newbie writers mistake. That is my one flaw in writing shit. Damn IT!
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CommissarRanden said
Oh shit! Oh my god, Newbie writers mistake. That is my one flaw in writing shit. Damn IT!


I wouldn't beat yourself up over it :D If you'll notice all of my IC posts, they're all edited because of all the typos I notice later on :P
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Oh yeah guys, I kinda lost interest in this RP and I'm going to drop out.

kthxbai
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by MrDidact
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Randen, You may regret assaulting someone in full view of a large police force :P

Allen J, That's too bad and I wish you luck in your other endeavors.

But now Swarmqueen is mine muahahahahaha

Also come on people, post. This is the first time this thread has been so slow in the past week :P
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Posted, just had to figure out the madness inside Maroni's.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by CommissarRanden
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Its a demon though!
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Dingo
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MrDidact said
This is the first time this thread has been so slow in the past week :P


I put it down to friday nights.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by CommissarRanden
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Hopefully we don't have that thing where we wait for one person to update for ages and people just leave because of it.
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I think we're moving fast enough. Slow means that I need to wait for a single post for over 24 hours. At the mo, I see people posting every 4 to 5 hours, which is all good for me.

That said, I'm writing a post at the mo'. Should be able to be pretty active this weekend, as I don't have anything planned beyond a single Match Show for this weekend.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by An Outsider
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Wait, did you attack Joe, CommissarRanden?
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BlackSam3091 said
Wait, did you attack Joe, CommissarRanden?


Bible dude saw your zambie and seems to have gone Holy Crusade on yo' ass. So much for an easy job, huh? :P
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Yeah, I did. He looks like a demon okay!
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Badly written post is badly written. *shuffles off to draw a bit more*
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by CommissarRanden
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I think that not reading up to date on the current story makes my characters cluelessness in everything more believable
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A heads up to everyone; I may or may not be able to post over the next 24-hours. I have a full day ahead with a massive cattle round up on my in-laws ranch, so my day is going to involve herding and sorting cattle and separating & holding calves for branding, ear marking, tagging, immunizing and castrating. Coupled with pain-in-my-ass sleep problems, I'm going to being doing this on three hours of sleep, so I may be too wiped to post if the posting round is finished.
Figured I'd let people know so they weren't wondering where I was :)
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Have fun :3
Let's see if I can churn out a post.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by An Outsider
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Joe doesn't fight. He schemes. And cheats.
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CommissarRanden said
I think that not reading up to date on the current story makes my characters cluelessness in everything more believable


I wonder how he'll react to MC then, considering MC is an energy being, and i'm sure that looks more demonic than a zombie.
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