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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by ChibiYuki
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>Cough, Cough< >Cough, Cough<

I tried not to be op :( but im not sure how bad i did on trying

(Btw I also know about the appearance thing which i got a picture for but i will do that once everyone is done xD)
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Am I accepted?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Monster
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DragonBeastMode said
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Please Revise

Hey there DragonBeastMode, your character idea was very original and different, fun to read. However, there were a few instances where your character seemed a little OP: otherwise, Ms. Mathews was beautifully done. See what I did there?
Sorry, I'm horrible, I know.
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Charlie said
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Please Revise

Bonjour Charlie, I like the way you put the biotic a into play. There is one thing that you will need to adjust in order to be accepted. You will find it below.
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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Yog Sothoth
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Is Ralph good to go?
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[quote=ChibiYuki]
Currently Being Reviewed
Before I go any deeper into your CS, I would like for you to take a gander at the rules. I swear to you that it's nothing bad, but I'd recommend it.

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Monster said
Before I go any deeper into your CS, I would like for you to take a gander at the rules. I swear to you that it's nothing bad, but I'd recommend it.
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All goodie xD sorry for making it so complicated for the two of you. And I will review the rules again (Because i think i was suppose to write something lol) and also take your time while reviewing my CS so I dont mind waiting ^.^

((Edit: Found it lol XD))
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@Yog Sothoth:
Please Revise
You did a good job with Ralph altogether, though there is something that needs to be edited.

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ChibiYuki said
All goodie xD sorry for making it so complicated for the two of you. And I will review the rules again (Because i think i was suppose to write something lol) and also take your time while reviewing my CS so I dont mind waiting ^.^((Edit: Found it lol XD))


Thank you, Chibi!

Your patience is noted, and very much appreciated. There's no need to apologize for your CS, datadogie and I will work on reviewing together tomorrow, as of now however, rest is very much required. I'll check up on this first thing when I wake up.

SIDE NOTE: If anyone has questions involving the story, setting, or anything you can think of, feel free to ask. If you don't want to ask me on the thread, send a PM my way. Have a good night/day everyone.
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Monster said
@Yog Sothoth: You did a good job with Ralph altogether, though there is something that needs to be edited.


is everything good now?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by ChibiYuki
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Good Night Monster!!!! Dont let the bugs bite lol xD
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@Yog Sothoth:
ACCEPTED
Congratulations, you are now officially a member of Heroes Among Us!

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@Chibi, thank you. I'll try not to!
Alright, I'm heading off. I'll see all of you tomorrow, I hope.
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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Yog Sothoth
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Monster said
@Yog Sothoth: Congratulations, you are now officially a member of Heroes Among Us!


thank you :)
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Uhm. I'm sorry, but are we supposed to email you our character sheets for review first, or just put them on here? I'm a little bit confused on the matter.
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Monster said
Hey there DragonBeastMode, your character idea was very original and different, fun to read. However, there were a few instances where your character seemed a little OP: otherwise, Ms. Mathews was done. See what I did there? Sorry, I'm horrible, I know. Bonjour Charlie, I like the way you put the biotic a into play. There is one thing that you will need to adjust in order to be accepted. You will find it below.


Ok I'll take that out, what if I just fixed and say that the person as to be willing to be controlled, would that be better or still to op, and what if Instead of leader role, she would be more of co leader, not wanting to have to much responsibility, but not wanting to be the back up plan or something like that, if that makes since.
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Suzy is done now.
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malmshodes said
Uhm. I'm sorry, but are we supposed to email you our character sheets for review first, or just put them on here? I'm a little bit confused on the matter.


no we post them here
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malmshodes said
Uhm. I'm sorry, but are we supposed to email you our character sheets for review first, or just put them on here? I'm a little bit confused on the matter.


You post your CS here to be reviewed.
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Another question. Why is a city taking in 'heros' as a protective scheme? Is the government trying something out in this city before doing the same for the rest? Has a third-party managed to get permission to establish their own paramilitary force but replaced the mercenaries with heros? Working on a AI character but don't want to imply somthing within the bio that is in fact false.
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Charter said
Another question. Why is a city taking in 'heros' as a protective scheme? Is the government trying something out in this city before doing the same for the rest? Has a third-party managed to get permission to establish their own paramilitary force but replaced the mercenaries with heros? Working on a AI character but don't want to imply somthing within the bio that is in fact false.


Think about Spiderman. The government didn't really ask him to be a hero. He just came and started to be a hero.
That's kind of like what this team is. They came, banded together, and began to be a hero team. Think about Avengers Assemble. Except they weren't asked to do it.
The characters can start having already saved people, but nothing major. The heroes can't have saved the city from something, say, a nuclear bomb. That's a bit much. The most I'd be willing to allow would be the hero saving a small hostage situation, unless otherwise said by Monster. The heroes can't already be known for saving the world from devastation.
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