duck55223 said
I put up a big of a longer post this time around, and to the more experienced writers here I like to ask for some advice.I feel as if I got setting the scene down quite solidly but to me my characters lack much depth, or emotion. They seem very in-personnel and a bit cold, im wondering if you guys had any suggestions on writing them?
So Boerd said
Grammar could use some work. There are some awkward sentences.
ASTA said
You might have a PM coming your way soon. :3
Kyelin said
I am at work atm, so I may have to wait until later tonight
Cale Tucker said
This duck person really seems to be abusing power. Is the OP still around? By the way, Kyelin, I am asking because I hope the first encounter with the Esurienti can be peaceful. They are built for war but war isn't their goal.
duck55223 said
Fighters are a bit pricey for what your using them for however, it be better to use a anti-missile system. Fighters cost a bit more, espically if your using living pilots that need years of training. Shields can add on to the price.My idea was to just build a ton of drones out of scrap metal/easy findable cheap metals with a thruster strapped on. They then be released in massive quantities from ships, easily blocking missiles and fire from weaker weapons. A lot cheaper to.
duck55223 said
So Boerd I did notice a issue with your app... Humans haven't left the Sol system yet, so you will probably need to remove that. Unless we go with some kinda of hidden interstellar ship crashes or something or weird ass time travel.
WilsonTurner said
Fighters can have shields or armor, and allow them to resist the weaker weapons that would shred a missile. You fire a missile, there is a much better chance of the missile being shot down than a larger fighter with a variety of weapons, with possibly anti-CD and the ability to independently make decisions. It'd be more efficient to send in a couple squadrons to take out the CD and shield clusters after you've broken down the shields, and then focus fire on gaps in the armor, where communications, exhaust, or other devices or parts are sticking through. Primarily using capital ship weapons would be less efficient, though it may have better survival rates for pilots.
Kyelin said
Not to my knowledge. Though it wouldn't be a bad idea me thinks
