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That's fine... I'm still trying to peg Ostus. Right now, he's far more responsible than I expected him to be, but this is fine. Hoping he'll do better with "heroics" in future action sequences. But yes, he and Kiara are a good match :) Now we gotta add more characters to stir things up a little before they get too far ahead of themselves, mwahaha...
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Hahaha another reason why I'm skipping. I'm afraid they'll get too close before they even get to Berinike xD

Luckily for us Kiara has a bad habit of treating people she likes terribly.
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Luckily! :p

Man... I wanted Ostus to ask her about that scar, but we gotta push the story along. Next time...
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He'll see it again I'm sure xD
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Oh also! the scar goes down her side, and the new cut went across her chest xD

Sorry if I made that confusing D: I think I put where the scar was when I very first mentioned it though.
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Nah, probably me and my laziness not to look it up :p

But I now know for next time, hehe
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Lol it's fine. I just thought I should mention it BEFORE he asks her xD Cause that would be awkward.

"What's that scar across your chest?"

"What scar...? You mean this one?" Kiara points to her side and remembers that Ostus is delusional.
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Possibly dumb question: What is it about Kiara's hair that she has to hide it? Reading the description on Berinike, they are darker-skinned but it mentioned nothing about the hair. I'm assuming red-heads are not a common sight to see around there.
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Yuppers. Mostly recessive genes in Astora and dominant in Berinike. Mostly brown and black hair. The occasional red head but not with her skin color especially.
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Okie dokie, so in my post I know I don't give all that much to respond to (for once) D:

So it's up to you if you wanna continue the night - in other words be as super introspective as Kiara always is - or move on to them arriving in the city. I'm cool with whatever is easiest for you.
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I'm gonna do both, actually, haha!

No, they won't be doing it :p Waaaay too soon for any of that. The introspection will be simple and it'll be sappy and it'll be mushy and it'll be glorious, lol.

Gotta finish up this homework, though, so it'll be a little bit before I respond.
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Bahahaha "doing it"

Sounds good to me. Your plan and your lame homework.
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Bah. Sorry for such a long wait for such a short post. Homework is done now, though. Freeeeedoooooooom!

I was going to do both closing scene and opening scene but decided it would be fair to give you a chance to respond to Ostus's apprehensions first. I'll start the new scene after your post :)
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No probs. I'm an insomniac who has 20 bajillion games. I get by xD

And awwwwwwwww poor guy D:
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MWAUAHAHAHA BE UNDONE OSTUS! BE UNDONE!

Also, her whole thing with the one night is not a reference to sex. Just thought I'd let ya know :D
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hehe, gotcha...

And oddly, I didn't see that one coming! *rubs hands together eagerly*

I've got the opening of the next post already written, so now I just have to respond to this as well, mwahaha... it'll more than make up for my last post :)
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Glad I could surprise you for once xD

If it makes you feel better, I didn't see him walking away coming. I was like YOU OAF WHAT ARE YOU DOING D:<
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Man... I'm having a hard time transitioning from one scene to the next... I don't know how to end this scene! Gah! Should I do it anyway, or do you want to squeeze another response in first?
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Nah you can end it, I got in her reaction and it was so satisfying lol. I'm sure you'll think of something :p
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WORST SCENE TRANSITION EVER! *cries*

You can interpret "Oh, fuck it," however you wish. I am under the impression that there'd be no sexytiemz, so I did not factor it in, unless you meant that "the act" (dun dun duuuuun) shouldn't be written out. In that case, worst fade to black ever, lol.

Anyway, the post. Baaaah. It's a post. Sorry again :p
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