Scarifar said
Legal Name: Michelle KineAlias(es): GrimRace: Cross between American and JapaneseGender: FemaleDate of Birth: May 7, 1987Supernormal Category: Transgenic Hybrid.History: (WIP)Legal Status: (WIP)Group Membership: (WIP)

you image url is malphormed.
also let me know when you're done working on this so I can check it over].
Also, american is not a race.

LokiLeo789 said
Legal Name: Lee CaspianAlias(es): Captain CaspianPhysical Appearance:Race: Hispanic HumanGender: MaleDate of Birth: 6/14/88Supernormal Category: Standard Deviation HumanPowers/Skills/Training: MetallomorphosisLee was trained by his father to use Metallomorphosis since he has that same power.Lee is naturally good at gambling, he almost always wins, but that doesn't mean he does not lose.Lee trained himself in how to use a knife, he is now skilled enough to take it to a gun fight.Equipment/Property: The clothes on his back.A large poker knife and 3 other throwing knifes.History: Legal Status: Lee has a crime record, he has been accused of assault and thievery, and is still wanted. Group Membership: Lee is part of a gang called the Pirate Spades, they are based in a bare call the Twiching Buccaneers. This gang specialized in thievery, and target killings.Other: This is a WIP, but please give me advice on my character so far, I need the help.

Still need height, weight, eye colour, hair colour.
Don't take a knife to a gun fight is a saying for a reason. don't blame me if you get shot.
Let me know once you've finished your history.
also if you want to make a new group you need to get at least two other players to join it first.

It's done. Fixed the race thing too.

the Forge said
Still need height, weight, eye colour, hair colour.Don't take a knife to a gun fight is a saying for a reason. don't blame me if you get shot.Let me know once you've finished your history.also if you want to make a new group you need to get at least two other players to join it first.

Ya you are right, It is still a WIP, I will fix it.

Indy said
Legal Name: Jack Pierre Kettering.Power/Skills/Training:Chronokinesis:Ability to create a bubble accelerated or decelerated time. Super-Metabolism:Process calories extremely quickly.Skills: Jack can prepare decent meals, stemming from times he has had to be a chef during his travels. He also has the capability to operate most communication technology, from telegraph keys to the very rudiments of quantum entanglement theory. He cans speak both English and French. Other skills include driving, basic markmanship with a rifle, decent handling of a pistol, a working knowledge of knife fighting, and proper maintenance of weapons.Training: About six years of training with his ability of Chronokinesis, which started once puberty set in. He went through training in the French Foreign Legion, and continued his training with his Chronokinesis in combat situations there. He also has trained in a unit designed to utilize his time manipulation abilities to their fullest.Equipment:Jack has a key for his apartment in New York, a holster for his pistol that is underneath his armpit, an electro blade kept on his shin, a cellphone, and his wallet. He wears a jacket reinforced with impact cloth. Appearance:Height: 188 cmWeight: 95 KilosBuild: Rather muscular, with a layer of fatEye Colour: Blue eyesHair Colour: Lightish BrownClothes:Wears a black jacket, with khaki pants. He usually wears boots of some sort.Date of Birth:3rd of October 1986Race/Gender:HumanMale History:Jack was born in Ann Arbor, Michigan to a rather wealthy family. He picked up a fondness for cooking at a young age, which was encouraged by his mother. He did decently in school, until he started showing signs of powers around the age of thirteen. His mother was, Kendra Kettering was a Gravitokinetic, and his father, Adrian Kettering, possessed a super intellect and the ability to copy other psychokinetic powers, so Jack's potential as a super was rather likely. He started being tutored in how to properly use his ability all through out the rest of his schooling, eventually deciding he'd do better utilizing his power to fight rather than for a civilian use, after ending up beating up a gang of seven people who tried to ambush him in an alley in Detroit, when he was sixteen. At that point, he started looking into a military career, seeing a path to hone himself to his fullest. When he turned 19, he joined up with the French Foreign Legion, learning much of his military skills with his five years of service there. He served in several conflicts in the Middle-East and Africa, usually in a support capacity for a squad of soldiers. His service in the French Foreign Legion nearly removed his American citizenship, but due to never becoming a NCO in the Legion and the Legion never being hostile to the United States, he kept his US Citizenship. He was wounded in combat during his time in the Legion, granting him dual citizenship in both the US and France. After his service was over, he returned to the States, and took up residence in New York. While in New York, he worked a bunch of odd jobs, usually in food joints and occasionally taking up a bit of muscle work. He eventually joined up with the NYSCN, trying to keep himself occupied with the jobs that were made available to him. He has been struggling to make ends meet through his work with them, and seeks something more to his life in New York.Legal  Status:Jack has registered voluntarily.He is a former Legionnaire. He is associated with the NYSCN.Jack has dual citizenship in both the US and France.Jack does not have a criminal record. Other:Anything you don't mention in the nine above fields that you feel is important  to the game.

Legal Name: Jack Pierre Kettering

Alias(es): Jack

Physical Appearance:
Height: 188 cm
Weight: 95 Kilos
Build: Rather muscular, with a layer of fat
Eye Colour: Blue eyes
Hair Colour: Lightish Brown
Clothes:Wears a black jacket, with khaki pants. He usually wears boots of some sort.

Race: Caucasian

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 1986/10/3

Supernormal Category: Standard Deviation Human

Powers/Skills/Training: Chronokinesis:Ability to create a bubble accelerated or decelerated time.
Jack can prepare decent meals, stemming from times he has had to be a chef during his travels. He also has the capability to operate most communication technology, from telegraph keys to the very rudiments of quantum entanglement theory. He cans speak both English and French. Other skills include driving, basic marksmanship with a rifle, decent handling of a pistol, a working knowledge of knife fighting, and proper maintenance of weapons. He has about six years of training with his ability of Chronokinesis, which started once puberty set in. He went through training in the French Foreign Legion, and continued his training with his Chronokinesis in combat situations there. He also has trained in a unit designed to utilize his time manipulation abilities to their fullest.

Equipment/Property: Jack has a key for his apartment in New York, a holster for his pistol that is underneath his armpit, a blade kept on his shin, a cellphone, and his wallet. He wears a jacket reinforced with kevlar.

edited out the tech you had leftover from the old RP.

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History: Jack was born in Ann Arbor, Michigan to a rather wealthy family. He picked up a fondness for cooking at a young age, which was encouraged by his mother. He did decently in school, until he started showing signs of powers around the age of thirteen. His mother was, Kendra Kettering was a Gravitokinetic, and his father, Adrian Kettering, possessed a super intellect and the ability to copy other psychokinetic powers, so Jack's potential as a super was rather likely.

He started being tutored in how to properly use his ability all through out the rest of his schooling, eventually deciding he'd do better utilizing his power to fight rather than for a civilian use, after ending up beating up a gang of seven people who tried to ambush him in an alley in Detroit, when he was sixteen. At that point, he started looking into a military career, seeing a path to hone himself to his fullest.

When he turned 19, he joined up with the French Foreign Legion, learning much of his military skills with his five years of service there. He served in several conflicts in the Middle-East and Africa, usually in a support capacity for a squad of soldiers. His service in the French Foreign Legion nearly removed his American citizenship, but due to never becoming a NCO in the Legion and the Legion never being hostile to the United States, he kept his US Citizenship. He was wounded in combat during his time in the Legion, granting him dual citizenship in both the US and France. After his service was over, he returned to the States, and took up residence in New York.

While in New York, he worked a bunch of odd jobs, usually in food joints and occasionally taking up a bit of muscle work. He eventually joined up with the NYSCN, trying to keep himself occupied with the jobs that were made available to him. He has been struggling to make ends meet through his work with them, and seeks something more to his life in New York.

Legal Status: Jack has registered voluntarily.
He is a former Legionnaire.
Jack has dual citizenship in both the US and France.
Jack does not have a criminal record.

Group Membership: He is associated with the NYSCN.

Scarifar said
Legal Name: Michelle KineAlias(es): GrimRace: Cross between White and JapaneseGender: FemaleDate of Birth: May 7, 1987Supernormal Category: Transgenic Hybrid. Legal Status: Former NYSCN, now employed by the DSA. Group Membership: DSA

Legal Name: Michelle Kine

Alias(es): Grim

Physical Appearance: She sometimes wears dark sunglasses, partly for protection against the sun's rays but mostly to maintain a serious composure.
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 125 lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue



Race: Mix of Asian (Japanese) and Caucasian (Northern European)

Gender: Female

Date of Birth: 1987/5/7

Supernormal Category: Transgenic Hybrid Human

Powers/Skills/Training:
Super Accuracy
Super Dexterity
Super Reflexes
Super Agility
-Guns: assembling, reloading, rapid firing.
-Lockpicking and pickpocketing: self-explanatory.
-Martial Arts: specifically, those of subduing and knocking unconscious rather than being Jackie Chan-like.

Equipment/Property:
-Invisible Cloak: not exactly invisible, just changes it appearance to match its surroundings, granting the user camouflage. If looked at closely enough, one might be able to see the silhouette of the one wearing it.
-Voice changer: built into her mask so that anyone who might encounter her will not be able to determine who she is by the sound of her voice, in addition to the mask already hiding her face.
-Semi-automatic sniper rifle: 7 rounds in each clip, fires as fast as one can pull the trigger. Has a silencer and an adjustable scope (changing distance, turning on and off night/thermal vision).
-2 semi-automatic pistols: 12 rounds in each clip, fires as fast as one can pull the trigger.
-Omnitool: basically a high-tech "skeleton key" for those pesky locks.
-3 sets of lockpicks, hidden within various hidden pockets and linings of her clothing, as well as being disguised as hairpins hidden within her hair.

History: Michelle is a "test tube baby", created using favorable genes to create the perfect soldier. However, when she was fully formed, the scientist who created her deemed her a "failure". The scientist considered his options for her disposal, but couldn't bear to kill what he had created, so he sent her away to an orphanage.

Michelle grew up, then joined the NYSCN under the name Grim. She performed various jobs and carefully saved her money. She waited for the right moment, then defected from the NYSCN and joined the DSA. She had worked hard and managed to become one of their top shooters.

Legal Status: Former NYSCN, now employed by the DSA.

Group Membership: DSA

Anyone who is edited into the third post is approved. Anyone who is not please follow the comments I left you to complete your character.

Legal Name: Hector Espanoza

Alias(es): Manuel the Drifter/ Manny (his most famous role), Benefactor of The League of Masks

Physical Appearance:
Height: 5'11, Weight: 158 lbs, Hair Color: Black, Eye Color: Hazel, Outfit: A tailored business suit, or the costume featured above.

Date of Birth: 6/14/1980

Gender: Male

Race: Hispanic

Supernormal Category: Standard Deviation Human

Powers/Skills/Training: Superhuman Intuition and Reflexes, as well as peak physical condition. He’s learned MMA and how to fire guns (in a Wild West appropriate manner only).

Equipment/Property: A large assortment of costumes and props, as well as a fancy apartment. Of course, he always carries his signature revolvers and cowboy hat from his best known role in Arizona Sun.

History: A former detective, a few lucky auditions netted him his big break, and made him a famous actor known for his roles in Westerns and action movies, Hector uses his powers to ensure he’ll always have a job in cinema. His enhanced reflexes and intuition made his trademark quick draw famous on the big screen.

Legal Status: Standard US Citizen

Group Membership: A former member of the NYPD, and achieved the rank of Detective, which he holds with pride. Also, the secret Benefactor of the League of Masks.

Edited to include the missing information.

Legal Name: Charles Tamerlane

Alias(es): Lord Tamerlane, General Manager. (In his store) The Provider (with the League of Masks.)

Physical Appearance: Lord Tamerlane is a tall middle-aged man standing at 6'1", 201 Lbs with a somewhat out of shape build. He has something of a gut from not eating as healthily as he ought to but he's not actually fat, as such. He's broad shouldered and somewhat imposing with a second set of small, thin arms beneath his primary set. These are fully functional. He has straight black hair cut sharply at the shoulders and brown eyes with noticeably asian features and a small pair of pince-nez spectacles. He typically wears a shoulder cape over his collarless suit. It makes him look somewhat like royalty or like some sort of drama villain. When in his other persona as the Provider he wears a suit of high tech powered armour. The exact design varies but it always has a third set of human-like arms and makes his lower arms look just as big as his upper arms. Aside from the six arms it's most noticable feature would be the glowing lines all over it ending at his six hands all of which glow brightly.


Race: Half Anglo-Caucasion and half Japanese Asian.

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: 1966/4/14

Supernormal Category: Standard Deviation Human.

Powers/Skills/Training: The Provider is a brilliant inventor. He has a deft hand (or four) at a wide variety of inventions but he specializes in non-lethal weapons of various kinds as well as armour. He's had years of experience running his business and investments. He has degrees in various kinds of engineering but no doctorates, perhaps why he takes on the gaudy title of Lord.

Equipment/Property: He sells a large variety of supernormal equipment, tools and weapons of various kinds as well as a plethora of more mundane items. His store also contains a juice bar for supernormals to feed their constant hunger with his high calorie concoctions and energy bars. It's become something of a hang-out for supernormals in recent years. He also carries a remote on him at all times the controls everything in the store.

History: Lord Tamerlane's British father used his brains as a code breaker in the Cold War. His Japanese mother was a wiz at the switch boards with her multiple arms. They met in the line of duty and as was custom at the time married for love and to increase the number of supernormals on their side of the war. He went to college at a young age excelling in several fields but always finding himself stuck at a certain level of advancement. He never got the doctorate he so craved. He was somewhat disappointed with himself, to say the least. He wondered if there was anything out there he could excel at. Eventually it occurred to him that perhaps his specialty was not having a specialty. He seemed to have a moderate level of skill at creating overtechnology of a variety of kinds. He decided to ply his skills at trade. He started out with repairing the work of other inventors with some moderate success. Eventually he made enough to open his own store. Over time he broadened his store into the wide range of products that it sells today. He secretly supplies gadgets to those less fortunate members of the league in his guise as the Provider. Sometimes the DSE takes a special interest in him, especially when his gear somehow ends up in the hands of the illegal vigilantes and other criminals. Still, he's managed to stay open this long and he's fairly confident he will continue to do so.

Legal Status: He has duel UK and US citizenship but has not visited the UK in many years due to the necessities of running his shop.

Group Membership: He is highly ranked in the league of masks. He provides equipment for most of the members in the city and answers only to the planner.

Did you accidentally make this character for a different RP? I have the distinct feeling this is for something else.

Related to the character of another RP, but made for here? I was thinking to start without affiliation and choose one later. What category would vampires/lycanthropes/supernatural creatures go again?
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vampires and werewolves are not supernatural. They are real life medical conditions that cause supernormal abilities but also have huge drawbacks. the more supernatural myths grew around the real facts but are not themselves true. Or to put it simply. people used to think they were supernatural, but they are not. That's not the only issue with your character, tho. Your powers don't fit with the rules I outlined about powers.

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I say supernatural as a generalization, but mean races that aren't generally human to start. But, I get that you're not feeling a character that has the word 'elf' in his race, so I'll change it up. Just give me a while to find more inspiration.

I would appreciate if you would read all the stuff in the first three posts. I feel like you missed quite a lot of important info.The theme of this RP is science, there is no magic spirits or anything like that.

Not a magical spirit, but was a mental manifestation created from psychic energy focused on a single idea of the being...dude, I sent you links.

That just flat out doesn't fit the theme of what we're doing here. That's a pretty fundamental problem.

Legal Name: Hector Espanoza

Alias(es): Manuel the Drifter/ Manny (his most famous role), Benefactor (The League of Masks), Nicolas Garcia (Old name)

Physical Appearance:
Height: 5'11, Weight: 158 lbs, Hair Color: Black, Eye Color: Hazel, Outfit: A tailored business suit, a black and white noir hero costume complete with a black, white and grey trench coat, fedora, and a screen mask with a domino mask over it, adding to the film grain aesthetic. The costume includes a four inch purple lapel pin that shows the Comedy and Tragedy masks from theater. When walking around the city, he'll occasionally wear costume featured above.

Date of Birth: 6/14/1980

Gender: Male

Race: Hispanic

Supernormal Category: Standard Deviation Human

Powers/Skills/Training: Superhuman Intuition and Reflexes, as well as peak physical condition. He’s learned MMA and how to fire guns (in a Wild West appropriate manner only).

Equipment/Property: A large assortment of costumes and props, as well as a fancy apartment. Of course, he always carries his signature revolvers from his best known role in Arizona Sun. He usually wears his cowboy hat as well, unless he is out crimefighting for the Masks, where he is wearing a traditional 1950's noir detective's outfit.

History: Nicolas Garcia was once a detective in another big city. He was tenacious and he always strove to make a difference but the detective life really started to wear on him. Month after month, year after year he put as many as he could behind bars but no matter how many he put away there were always more out there. Eventually he resolved to get away from it all, and with the help of a few friends in the Police Force, he faked his death and used some connections he had in order to take on a new identity as an orphan with no family.

A few lucky auditions netted him his big break, and made him a famous actor known for his roles in Westerns and action movies, Hector uses his powers to ensure he’ll always have a job in cinema. His enhanced reflexes and intuition made his trademark quick draw famous on the big screen.

After several years of acting he started to miss what little he could do to make a difference. This time he decided to join the league of masks so that he could make more of a difference without all the red tape. As it turned out the organization was pretty much always hurting for money so he started funneling significant portions of his fortune into the cause, hence his persona as the Benefactor. When it's time for crime fighting or other Masks activities, he dresses like a 50's noir hero.

Legal Status: Standard US Citizen

Group Membership: Very few people know this, but he was a former member of the NYPD, and achieved the rank of Detective, which he holds with pride. Also, the secret Benefactor of the League of Masks, which entails providing them with the funds and possible contacts they'll need, as well as keeping them out of the spotlight, should the need arise.

Changed, hopefully for the last time before I can play.

Are you in Skype, Forge?