Mistress Dizzy said
Hello! I'm one of the mod squad. Call me Dizzy!I like what you have going so far, but I'd love to see a bit more expansion. For the powers- how accelerated is her healing? I mean, I don't know a whole lot about Sabertooth, so you'll have to clue me in. I mean, Wolverine took a bullet to the head and came back, so I'd appreciate it if your girl was a liiiittle less powered than that.For the bio, just to throw some ideas at you: Does Lexi know who her father is? Or her mother? We do have a lot of orphans running around at this school, but considering the nature of comic books, it makes sense enough to me. How was she brought up? Did she know she was a mutant's kid and might be a mutant herself, or was she in the dark?As for the appearance, it might be my eyes, but her hair seems to be pink. Is that me seeing it wrong? (I do need to get my eyes checked, it's been a while.) I'd love to know how tall she is, and perhaps a general idea of her body type. Not saying you have to do it, but it'd be interesting if she was big and tough like her dad. Good to see you! I hope you aren't scared off by me, haha. ><

JediAvenger said
Ok, I put like two minutes of work into this... REVISION TIME! Anyway, as far as I know, Sabretooth's healing is as fast as Wolverine's. And yes, Lexi's won't be that fast... Er, from how I'm envisioning her, its fairly obvious who her dad is. And, like most mutants, her powers didn't develop until she was a preteen. Oh, I got lazy with the picture, I'll find a new one. I doubt you could scare me off, I'm pretty scary... if I try... raaawr? :P

Mistress Dizzy said
...*Squees, picks up* SO ADORABLE!!Ahem. *sets back down*Thank you for taking my crits and questions as intended. I'm happy to see what you come up with.