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Name: Arthur Collins

Age: 39



Occupation: Rare Book Collector/Part-time Professor of Literature

Hobbies: Reading and playing chess

Psychology: Arthur thinks in terms of a game. He sees everyone and everything as a giant game and will do his best to plan everything out in his day and gets extremely bothered when something doesn't go according to his plan or is out of his control to fix. He hates being late for anything, and he considers himself being late if he planned to get somewhere ten minutes before he had to and arrives any time after that.

Brief History: Arthur went to a private school for Grade School, Middle School, and High School. He was Captain of the Chess Team in High School. He graduated second in his class and went on to a local University in his hometown, where he pursued a Bachelors in Literature and was also on the fencing and chess team; he also met his best friend, Richie, there. After graduation there, he moved to where he is now for Grad School and his Doctoral Studies in Literature with Richie. Arthur has since completed his studies and has been teaching part-time at the same University he got his Ph. D. from for ten years now along with working at a local museum as a rare book collector.



Skills: Arthur is a very well-spoken man, making him very charismatic; he is also fluent in Latin. He is a very clever and quick-witted man and excels at strategy games such as chess and even fencing.

Weaknesses: Arthur is fast when it comes to sprinting short distances, but when it comes to running long distances he has very little endurance. He is also not very physically strong at all and can be overpowered easily by a stronger adversary.

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You can tell you went back and forth with your CS a bit as Arthur is said to have finished his Ph.D at one point and at another that he is apparently near the end. Otherwise, I like this character, but perhaps I'm biased -- from the detail of his background to the very image, he is extremely close to old professor of mine from undergrad. A philologist and historian Ph.D, he started me off on my way to learning Latin and put me in an entirely new head space. Yes, this is not him and I understand that, but imagining an academic like him in a world like this seems very compelling.

I'd love to see a post from you before I move us along!

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Arthur Collins 39 Rare Book Collector/Part-time Professor of Literature Reading and playing chess Arthur thinks in terms of a game. He sees everyone and everything as a giant game and will do his best to plan everything out in his day and gets extremely bothered when something doesn't go according to his plan or is out of his control to fix. He hates being late for anything, and he considers himself being late if he planned to get somewhere ten minutes before he had to and arrives any time after that. Arthur went to a private school for Grade School, Middle School, and High School. He was Captain of the Chess Team in High School. He graduated second in his class and went on to a local University in his hometown, where he pursued a Bachelors in Literature and was also on the fencing and chess team; he also met his best friend, Richie, there. After graduation there, he moved to where he is now for Grad School and his Doctoral Studies in Literature with Richie. Arthur has since completed his studies and has been teaching part-time at the same University he got his Ph. D. from for ten years now along with working at a local museum as a rare book collector. Arthur is a very well-spoken man, making him very charismatic; he is also fluent in Latin. He is a very clever and quick-witted man and excels at strategy games such as chess and even fencing. Arthur is fast when it comes to sprinting short distances, but when it comes to running long distances he has very little endurance. He is also not very physically strong at all and can be overpowered easily by a stronger adversary.
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I'll try and have one up tomorrow. Thanks, Lo. Glad I made a nice character.
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Only if this is still open.
I do want to make a sheet for his sister. Would this be possible?
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Only if this is still open.I do want to make a sheet for his sister. Would this be possible?[spoiler=Forrest Archer Johnson] 25 Farm hand Singing, Archery Forrest is a quiet man, almost shy. He's not one to make a show of himself, but being 6'3" and built like the farm hand he is, others can't help but notice him. He's sensitive to others' emotions, claiming himself to be empathetic. He didn't grow up in a religious house and formed no formal opinion on the matter. He will pray or use religious profanities due to his sociological experiences. He has a large respect for firearms and dislikes those who wield them unskillfully or disrespectfully. He remembers his middle school years as the most difficult as he was bullied for being a farm boy. He was still small during this time and felt hopeless and alone. He even admits to crying a couple times during those years. However, in high school, he grew quickly. He was approached by his middle-school bullies for joining the football team, but turned them down due to his formed bias and the fact he cared about his family farm more than sports. His father was, understandably, upset by this and needed his wife to explain the reasons behind their son's decision. Girls fawned over his masculinity, but he seemed to never show any care or even notice the flirtation. In truth, he ignored it, being completely uninterested in the superficial world his peers seemed to come from.He was raised to appreciate what he had, as he lived on a subsistant farm that sometimes sold their crops. He knew what real hard work was and would often arrive to school with wrappings or bruises. He learned to hunt quite effectively and became callous to the idea of death for sustenance. He even took hunting further and honed his archery skills by using recurve, reflext, and a self bow he made. These tools mean more to him than the firearms his father provided. He's only ever driven standard vehicles. He also knows how to run and maintain most any vehicle including tractors and agricultural equipment. He also trained in dressage and barrel racing with Hanoverian, Draft, and Quarter Horses. He, personally, raised at least 3 horses of each of these breeds himself and has intimate relations with all of them, but most of all with Buck, the first Hanoverian born to him.His relation with his younger sister is strong and extremely paternal, even more so than their father. She claims to be suffocated by him, but never admits to actually appreciating it. Forrest believes this to be a larger reason to his disinterest in girls: his attention to Willow is so much more demanding of his energy and focus.He's quick to make decisions and is reasonably more educated than most other farmers who make a life of their farm. However, this merely means his knowledge extends further from agriculture and animal husbandry, which he knows quite well. He has a basic understanding of politics, psychology, and sociology. His strongest subjects in school were maths and English. Additionally, he understands well enough that he doesn't know everything, but that others don't necessarily know everything, either. Personally, he feels the ability to relate to other humans to be paramount to responsibility and physical aptitude. He not in the least boastful and despises condescension above all. He was born on the ranch when his mother went into labor too suddenly. They say he was her quickest and easiest birth and not quite nearly as long or painful as his younger sister, Willow Yew. Being seven years apart, Forrest has always been a stronger father figure to her than their own father, Richard Robert. Their mother, Katherine Jeanne James, had also been the light and lovely housewife, but surprisingly taught their children what "real" work looked like.Forrest was taught how to ride, hunt, slaughter, and farm since he was able to walk and knows much about the arts of farming. He also taught himself archery from his grandfather's bow. However, he is not ignorant of the world and its developments. He doesn't show any interests in technology, but is curious enough to learn about it, however minimally. His strengths were in maths, English, and social sciences. Even though he only got an Associate's degree in Liberal Arts at a local Community College, his surprisingly worldly, though he's never traveled outside the state. Through his elementary and junior years, he was small and often picked on by larger children. His father put him to work when the boy got home to distract him, but then told the boy that his work was too great to be lessened by the words and actions of others. "Take pride in your work," Forrest's father would always say.He grew quickly in high school and was the attention of the girls. Ignoring them only made them fawn more. His attention was on his baby sister and his work. His parents pushed him to join an extracurricular, preferably football since the coach and players often approached him due to his size, but being most of them were his bullies, his bias against them was too great to consider such an activity. Instead, he joined the school's Chorus as it took up much less of his time and his beautiful baritone voice was discovered. By today, his father condemned his son's celibacy only through cultural norms. "It's unnecessary," he claimed. Later he would learn this as non-sexuality, or something close to it. He focuses on his work on the farm and helping to raise his little sister in spite of both their parents being alive and well. Will create if requested Automotive, mediation Deep emotional connections created quickly, independence[/spoiler]


I will review the CS when the background is completed.
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Sorry for the lack of a post so far, Lo. I will try and have one uo later tonight or tomorrow.
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Lo Pellegrino said I will review the CS when the background is completed.
I don't really know what else to add. I'd really just reiterate what's already been written in greater (and arguably irrelevant) detail. Do you want me to write a kind of story depicting his everyday life? It won't even be longer than the Brief History due to the nature of his life, which is relatively uneventful outside of what I alluded to already.

Let me know what you're looking for so I can accommodate.
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Sorry for the lack of a post so far, Lo. I will try and have one uo later tonight or tomorrow.


I will be posting the next IC tonight. Consider that a gentle nudge ;).

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I don't really know what else to add. I'd really just reiterate what's already been written in greater (and arguably irrelevant) detail. Do you want me to write a kind of story depicting his everyday life? It won't even be longer than the Brief History due to the nature of his life, which is relatively uneventful outside of what I alluded to already.

Let me know what you're looking for so I can accommodate.


First, pointing out that there may be quite a bit of fluff already should not be how you sell this to me -- not being mean, just saying. The CS should have a background and a Brief History, right now it looks like you dumped it all in the Brief and did nothing in the Background. Both have a purpose, both are necessary for me to properly check out your character and provide real feedback. Basically, please follow the CS's instructions.
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Okay, I understand.
Thank you.
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Almost done with my post, Lo.
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Nice posts all around!

To elaborate on my last one: Please do explore any means of escape you please. Just because a character believes one way is right and another is blatantly wrong does not make that truth. We're all wagering here, and our wagers will cost us in the end. Make the bet you think is right.

Looking forward to all these characters, who all seem to believe leaving is the best option, coming upon one another!
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Interesting turn of events, Lo.
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Not to be nitpicky, but King, in your first post you said Kyle had a pump-action shotgun. In your second post, you said he had a hunting rifle.
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Not to be nitpicky, but King, in your first post you said Kyle had a pump-action shotgun. In your second post, you said he had a hunting rifle.


Woops. Not quite sure where I got hunting rifle from. Fixed it. Thanks for pointing that out :)
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No problem.
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So I feel kinda dumb for sending Mark away from the escape route, but then that's what Mark would do. He's not one to run. Lo - please let me know if that's okay. If it throws a wrench in the works, I can edit. Also, let me know if the container's contents are alright. I don't plan for it to be a shopping centre, but figured that what a gang's container would have.

Also, also, bras are fun to rapidly spin around. I like to put a bit of humour in my posts... :P And to cover my ass in case 14C (Aus) can be misinterpreted as an underage size overseas, here's a conversion chart.
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@KingFisher: Good post. Looks like Chessa has first blood, huh? Can't wait to see how she reacts as things get worse.

@Silver: Humour is fine, just keep in mind this is a serious project we're all working on here. Respect the efforts your mates put in. Be funny if you please, but I think you know what I mean. The storage container is fine, just be realistic when it comes to just how much they'd even have stored and don't turn Mark into some power-god just because he finds some guns.
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I will start my post either tomorrow or this weekend.
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Eh, I'm not actually expecting Mark to become a power god. He's more like the type who dies alone in a corner sadly laughing to himself. I'll leave out the humour (sorry about that).
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My next post will talk about the bridges and ways out of the city, so you all know. My characters are totally fair game to interact with, but they'll also be used to show world events and what not.

Don't be afraid of going big, like Kingfisher, by the way. Treat your characters as you would act if the world reacting like this. If you'd assume things are falling apart, then act that out, or if you'd be in bitter denial, that too. Have fun and be free with it!
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