DiamondBlizzard said
FUCK! I didn't copy what I wrote, stupid wifi...From reading what you said, I just can't be asked to edit that much of my bio, I was taught that in NRP you earn your way to OPness, and my skill in both Kenjutsu & Taijutsu are derived from real life (Martial Arts) and it seems unfair to tone it down. Medical Ninjitsu is needed to know pressure points and first aid, that's all I know OF Medical Ninjitsu, due to narutoverse being retarded.To sum it up, if I'm going to join this RP, I need a SHORT list of what to change and what not to change or I'll probably be the antagonist who's a sadistic bastard.And no, I'm too lazy to change my picture.

Dude I gave specific and exact comments for each of your abilities. I know it seems like a lot, but honestly it's better to know exactly what I think. If I could spend time, copying and pasting your words, and accurately going over each line multiple times and CONDENSING many of my personal thoughts while maintaining semi-kindness I'm sure you could take the time to read over what I wrote and make edits accordingly. It was all fairly simple stuff.

But if you want the short version.
Most of your Scorch Jutsu, rather than Heat were Fire. Your laziness over changing a picture which isn't even that hard to find is infuriating, but I can't really make a big deal about that because I would probably feel the same. Your gauntlets seem cool, but ridiculously overpowered for a genin to have. They pretty much render any and all fire users that may exist, have existed or appear useless. They wouldn't extend to kicks because they're only gaunlets. For kicks you need greaves. The sword... I'm not even shortening that... Too much to shorten. You don't need Medical Ninjutsu to know the pressure points or first aid. The backstory is a bit illogical and there are various plotholes you seemed to over look. Had I given more thought into this the first time around you wouldn't have been accepted.

I take responsibility for that blunder, but for nowthis is all you get. Go over what I wrote. It's not a lot to ask.

G3njii said
MAterializing a weapon sounds very similar to my unique ability

In all fairly it technically isn't the first form of weapon materialization. I mean look at Chidori senbon. That is somewhat like materialization.

Zarkun said
Gotta say, Demon, I've yet to scroll that much on this site. I honestly hadn't read past firebending but a lot of those really are kinda...wrong. Or OP. I mean, everything sounds cool, but I don't think we're listing later techniques yet.

Imagine writing, reading, rewriting, and rereading, copying and pasting, etc. It all took up 7 pages on Word lol. Not that much I know, but for one post and one character review XD

Redwing said
You shouldn't have used the word martial arts. I've been a martial artist for ten years. I am a black belt and can be considered an expert on the subject, because I know more about it than 95% of the population. An academy student has been training for what, a couple of years? There is absolutely no way in that amount of time could someone be considered deadly in the art. Thus making your argument about it invalid because you connected Kenjutsu and Taijutsu to real life stuff. Yeah they can be good for their experience level, but there's no way somebody with only a couple of years of training has developed the power and skill to actually be able to kill somebody. Breaking a neck is much much harder than the movies make it out to be. Injure, yes absolutely, but not kill.The same argument can go for the sword, which I have been training with for about four years now. You aren't even given a real sword for a couple of years because you don't have the skill, knowledge, or experience to use it without hurting yourself.As for medical ninjutsu, the Hyuga know every pressure (Or chakra) point on the body and have no knowledge of medical jutsu. They are two completely different things. You can know how the human body works but not know how to fix it. Again coming from my martial arts background. I know exactly how many pounds of pressure it takes to break an elbow, but I couldn't fix it after I broke it.If you're too lazy too change your picture, let alone change things the GM wants you to. Who says we're going to let you have the antagonist role at all? I know I won't let you.

And this is why Red is my Co-GM >_>
Fuck with one of the ultimate teams now. XD
Other teams include Me and Zarkun, me and soren, and all of us together in various variations XD
No but seriously. Red is awesome. And meaner than me when necessary which is good since I tend to try and please people a bit too much.

Masaki Haruna said
Got it.I wanted to ask if I can make a detective but I was hesitant due to the fact that we got like 3 players being Uchiha if im not mistaken. This, assuming if the police force is a yes. If not it is alright.How's your Thursday morning guys?

Theres is technically, only one official Uchiha character (Zarkun), one Uchiha Uzumaki Cross(Me), and one Uchiha NPC (Nagato's mom and Jerin's sister who won't really do much in the RP for a while.)
Also it is only Wednesday night for me too XD

Demon Shinobi said
And this is why Red is my Co-GM >_> Fuck with one of the ultimate teams now. XD Other teams include Me and Zarkun, me and soren, and all of us together in various variations XD No but seriously. Red is awesome. And meaner than me when necessary which is good since I tend to try and please people a bit too much.

Hahaha, just call me Queen Bitch.

This is also why I'll probably never have a job in customer service.

I love Red. My favorite rper/person ive met on this site.
I have the honor of doing with her(and her being exceedingly patient with me) on a kh rp of mine.

G3njii said
I love Red. My favorite rper/person ive met on this site.I have the honor of doing with her(and her being exceedingly patient with me) on a kh rp of mine.

Aw you guys are so nice! :3

I should have a post up tonight for that roleplay by the way. And pretty much every other one I'm currently in.

Oh coolio. I'm excited to start this one. I've wanted a naruto rp for a long time.

Also I'm gonna start putting together that gravity jutsu character in case I get the chance to use it. I'll message demon about it. Maybe an antagonist/missing-nin character would work for it.

Redwing said
Hahaha, just call me Queen Bitch. This is also why I'll probably never have a job in customer service.

lol wow XD

G3njii said
I love Red. My favorite rper/person ive met on this site.I have the honor of doing with her(and her being exceedingly patient with me) on a kh rp of mine.

Oh you're the KH person.
How goes that one by the way?
I haven't seen it, but anything KH tends to interest me XD

Redwing said
Aw you guys are so nice! :3I should have a post up tonight for that roleplay by the way. And pretty much every other one I'm currently in.

Awesome :3

G3njii said
Oh coolio. I'm excited to start this one. I've wanted a naruto rp for a long time.Also I'm gonna start putting together that gravity jutsu character in case I get the chance to use it. I'll message demon about it. Maybe an antagonist/missing-nin character would work for it.

Missing isn't necessary. Secret partner of Hokage will be fine XD

I'll message you bout it tomorrow most likely.

And kh is moving slow but surely. We have an extra spot for a magic focused character(female if we're lucky), hint hint

ahaha
Thanks for the hint, but before committing I'd like to look it over and stuff and see if I can think of ANYTHING magic wise.
Just realized I never ever made a magic/illusion KH character.
All of them fought. like hardcore. Just never got far enough to show off the badassery XD
But yeah e-mail and possibly link me at some point when you have time XP

You'd still get a keyblade and stuffs

G3njii said
You'd still get a keyblade and stuffs

Yeah i know that. lol
I think I'd still need to look it over first broh lol x3

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/54595/posts/ooc
Link :D

Wow Demon when you go thorough, you go thorough. Also I don't understand why Diamond didn't bother to read the list, I read it while it didn't apply to me and you made excellent points. Same goes for Red when she pointed out the martial arts thing. I spend some time learning Jujutsu and made it the yellow belt (not claiming to be an expert or anything), and the most I could do to someone is throw them over my shoulder, tv/movies often make it seem easier/more impressive than it's.

Duthguy said
Wow Demon when you go thorough, you go thorough. Also I don't understand why Diamond didn't bother to read the list, I read it while it didn't apply to me and you made excellent points. Same goes for Red when she pointed out the martial arts thing. I spend some time learning Jujutsu and made it the yellow belt (not claiming to be an expert or anything), and the most I could do to someone is throw them over my shoulder, tv/movies often make it seem easier/more impressive than it's.

Lol I'm telling you dude. Sometimes depending on the character it is quite important to be that thorough. Especially when that much information is given.

Also if all goes well we should be ready to begin by tomorrow evening.

My wifi's fixed, anyway...

I know it's harder than it looks, but with two-three years of real life thorough experience I can easily injure someone or incapcitate them. If I may ask on a slightly different topic, what do you practice?

Also 95% of my posts are on tablet, thus I'm lazy to change my picture and edit so much, if I were to re-edit everything it would be during the weekend.

If you would like, I can earn my gauntlets later on, along with Sukochi?

Duthguy said
Wow Demon when you go thorough, you go thorough. Also I don't understand why Diamond didn't bother to read the list, I read it while it didn't apply to me and you made excellent points. Same goes for Red when she pointed out the martial arts thing. I spend some time learning Jujutsu and made it the yellow belt (not claiming to be an expert or anything), and the most I could do to someone is throw them over my shoulder, tv/movies often make it seem easier/more impressive than it's.

You may not have gotten far, but you made it to the hardest rank there is to get. White belt. It takes a lot of courage to walk in that door for your first lesson.

DiamondBlizzard said
My wifi's fixed, anyway...I know it's harder than it looks, but with two-three years of real life thorough experience I can easily injure someone or incapcitate them. If I may ask on a slightly different topic, what do you practice?Also 95% of my posts are on tablet, thus I'm lazy to change my picture and edit so much, if I were to re-edit everything it would be during the weekend. If you would like, I can earn my gauntlets later on, along with Sukochi?

Okay now we're getting somewhere. How about instead of saying you're too lazy to change your picture, why don't you say that you're on a tablet most of the time and its very hard to. And that you'll change it on the weekend when you have access to an actual computer or more time to do it? That would have saved everybody a lot of annoyance.

Oh with two-three years of experience you could hold your own in a fight well enough. But not kill them. So if you could change the word deadly to skilled that would be excellent. I practice a style called Shaolin ChuanFa, or Shaolin Kempo. We're kind of a mix between Karate, Kung Fu, Juijutsu, in that we have a little bit of everything. We have the punches and kicks, the grappling techniques, the ground game, the forms, all that stuff. It originated in the Shaolin Temple over two thousand years ago and is still practiced by the monks there. In fact, three years ago our company took a trip to the Shaolin Temple and actually trained with the monks for a couple of days. And it is where I earned my black belt. It was the best trip I had ever taken.

Yes, getting the gauntlets later on, maybe at a different time as the sword would be good. Me and Demon are planning our characters to get some new stuff around the Chunin exams, so I'd say that's where you can get the first one.

Alright, thank you for being understanding, my revised bio will be up this weekend.

Question, Are Ultimate Countering Jutsu allowed? Such as a B-A-Rank to counter all physical attacks?

Alright, thank you for being understanding, my revised bio will be up this weekend.

Question, Are Ultimate Countering Jutsu allowed? Such as a B-A-Rank to counter all physical attacks?

As a genin id think not. Plus there isnt really a way to negate all physical attacks. Thatd be too op in my eyes.

But I had an idea about the gauntlets
"copy and pasted cause im too lazy to reword it"
Perhaps one should suggest changing the name of fire bending as it doesn't quite seem to be as versatile. The name leads to miss understanding. If its limited to punches and the daggers then perhaps it should simply be referred to as flame generation. Maybe it could be described that rather than creating fire, it actually focuses the scorch style chakra into flames by heating the air around the gloves. It makes much more sense to me and sounds signifcantly less intimidating, and much more naruto than avatar.

Of course not as a genin! Also B-Rank would negate all physical attacks, only used against spammy people & NPCs.

The Gauntlets aren't Scorch they're Fire.

My idea still stands. Just have them focus your fire nature chakra. Big difference