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Well, sorry if I wanna rush into the conflict a little. :3
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Heheheh, "I think your rage broke Lai."
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Hmm, I'm caught between Xeph being jealous or grateful but weary. He is still a demon free after all, he's bound to wanna break Lai a lil more here and there. I want there to be more confrontations too. I have a few ideas for that. Will reply later :3
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*Giggles* Lai is so mad right now that all he wants to do is stick around to tick the demon off :P He also misses his cousins so he wants to hog the kids and keep them away from the evil evil demon :P
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Haha, they're going to look like bickering parents infront of the little kiddies if they ever start to fight, I almost want Xeph to break out of his priestly role, but he is refusing to do so.
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Heheh, you called Lai a demon here - "Gathering himself, he turned to fix the demon with a deadpanned stare. . ."

Hmmm. . . . .What does Lai have to do to actually get the demon to confide in him, or is "As I have left it behind. . ." all Lai's gonna get?
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Bleh, typos ><
My brain runs too fast sometimes, it's not smart, just really hyper.

Well, for now, that's what Lai's gonna get, though I picture he either stays on longer and constantly tries to get an answer out of the demon before he leaves (whilst growing attached to the kids and all)

Or

....well I can't picture much else, but I'm sure you can text your creativity and come up with some crazy or tricky idea to have Lai get what he wants. Xeph is being really cold now so I feel like their relationship is somewhat slow.
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Sorry for the wait, I'm gonna have to take a while to reply, but I will soon. Thank you for your patience.
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No problem, I am patient :P
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Finally posted!!! Ah, I always feel bad making people wait no matter how patient you claim to be.
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I am as patient with others as I pray they will be with me. Sometimes I will not be able to respond for a few days due to life :P Hope you don't mind one of my smaller monologues :P
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It's alright. I feel bad cause sometimes its' not just life, but having that sort of 'writer's block' or just that feeling of not wanting to do anything.
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*Kuu* Things happen, I deal :P Also, I will apologize for any future monologues as they can and will get very long :P It's an issue of mine :P
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Haha, that may be an issue cause I just have to match my partner's length at most times :p but don't worry I can be very monology too, I just build it up for all one moment XD
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I'll tell you the same thing I tell all my partners, do not worry about trying to match me. In fact many times when you worry about such things the quality of the post goes down. Just focus on making it a good post. Sometimes, short posts happen, and I'm okay with that. I make short ones too :P
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Haha, I'll be honest then as well. Quality is definitely something I strive to have even if I doubt myself a lot, don't worry too much about me worrying. It's like an inferiority complex, a whole mess of issues I suppose. I'll try to post soon. :3
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So far, you're doing really well. I've liked all your posts, especially the one with the death threat. It made me laugh. Also, you don't have to feel alone, almost every partner I've ever had have not been happy with their writing skills. I may be arrogant, or just naturally have high self esteem, but I've found that worrying about my posts is more stress than it's worth as I know when I made a sub par one and simply work to improve myself, free of the usual stresses :P Which reminds me, I also will apologize in advance if I ever sound arrogant. I do not mean to :P
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Haha, it's alright, I'm terrible at looking at people's flaws or judging them at times. You'll never come off as arrogant to me until we really become better friends and then I'll point out everything terrible about you! Joking, joking, but I'm really enjoying your posts as well. I admire people who can combine quantity and quality together. I also think that this rp hasn't even gotten the ball rolling yet, but it has lots of potential. FOr now, our characters are really cold to one another still and not much has really been brought in yet emotionally.

Xeph really turned out different from what I initially had. He was going to be a little more level headed and cool, but he turned out more stressed and paranoid whenever Lai is around.
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Okay, two notes, a comment, and a compliment.

Note 1 - This may have been a mistype but if not, that looks hilarious in my head: A chorus of 'no's follow and the elder child sighs and punches the bridge of her nose.

Note 2 - I think the wrong name landed here: Laisander's was left defenseless an helpless against such a fearsome thing.

Comment/apology - Sorry. When I write I do present tense and it bothers a lot of my partners.

Compliment - You did a very good job at switching over!
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Random status check: Are you enjoying the RP thus far? Anything you'd like to see more of? Less of? Ideas for future events?
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