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*sighs*

No one interacted with Roan, just one of the NPCs from Kaiden's group heard a snarling, but that's about it though.

So to recap

Western District:
1. Roan is looking for Lavica but he is being followed by five people and is at a dead end. He is opposite the tavern on an alley.
2. Lavica is right outside the Gutted Karak after bumping into Kaiden
3. Amy is outside the Gutted Karak
4. Kaiden attempts to seduce Lavica when his companions interrupt him.
5. Shin falls though the ground and meets an evoker, The Baron Markul. They introduce each other.

NE:
1. Stevan Vlahovic attends the King's Court and discovers the King has crowned the Prince as heir effective immediately. He wishes an audience with the king. He is also chasing an evoker under the protection of the Kal. embassy but cannot get to her yet.

Somewhere
1. Thora is wandering the city looking for shelter
2. A noviate of Idris is chasing a female evoker that left the inn (I assume this is Lavica?)
3. Myth is still headed towards the capital.
4. Alessia and Angie are at the Kalesian embassy. Angie was chased by Stevan.

Did I miss anything? I'm fairly certain this is everything that happened recently.
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Most web pages aren't ideal for reading. I am sorry for saying that it was just a long block of words but it's just hard on the eyes and I can't help it if I am suddenly reading a sentence two lines down from where I started. It's not that I'm skimming but readability suffers because on the long trip back to the left margin I may lose track of the next line and when I'm reading especially long posts which affects my mood and understanding so it really helps when things are spaced out.

I'm not sure how to explain in detail but AlidaMaria has posts of comparable length to yours yet I find it much easier to digest. Something about AlidaMaria's spacing just flows as a narrative whereas yours feels bulky. It's subtle but significant. I'm not attacking your ability as a writer nor your creativity because you can write; I know that my writing is weaker in comparison to everyone else's simply by reading their ICs. It's just spacing can really affect the readability of a post and I really should have worded my thoughts better at the time so it didn't sound so crass.

Ultimately we are all here to have fun, share stories, and improve as writers along the way so let's keep it that way and leave this episode behind us.

No, he is NOT talking to an NPC who heard snarls, he is trying to seduce Lavica. Jesus, I spaced it out already, so there's at least that. If you're going to criticize me on something, it'd be FAR BETTER to personally message me about it, I'll definitely take it much better too. I definitely don't mind criticism, as that is not the reason I am angry. If there's anything that all of you should know, I fucking hate being humiliated in front of other people, whether someone intends to or not.

He was last addressing Lenard and Tran, the latter of whom had heard snarls which is why I wrote down what I wrote but I can see how that would be misleading the intent of Kaiden to those who read my recap. NPC was the wrong word. A traveling companion would fit the bill better. I'll change it

I understand what to do now.

Thora took a room at the gutted karak. Whether she is there atmosphere isn't too important, she can be moved if necessary.

Maki, we're not trying to claim that your post is bad. In fact, the contents are actually quite good. However, sticking about 400 words in a single paragraph makes for tough reading. When we write, we keep it to about three-four sentences per paragraph. That is generally fairly easy for others, and ourselves, to read.

I should have a post up today or tomorrow.

I know what you're saying, but if you didn't read my post, " If there's anything that all of you should know, I fucking hate being humiliated in front of other people, whether someone intends to or not." I can take criticisms fairly well, but not when it's in front of people, especially strangers. You're better off pulling me aside and telling me what I need tuning, otherwise I will just flare up and not give a single, flying fuck.

@Apokalipse

It's cool. Take your time. I know you have tests and all that good stuff.

Hey guys, to all of you:

I'm very, very, very sorry but I don't think I'll be able to handle being (a GM) in the RP any longer.
Due to personal stuff and schoolwork piling up, I simply can't give this RP the time it deserves... I'm sure you'll do just fine without me, since the plot is quite good and you lot are just fine writers. If anyone wants to take over the Da-Hyunin, feel free to do just so (Athan has all the lore, or just shoot me a pm if you're interested). I might check in on the IC from time to time to see how you lot are doing, so I expect awesome posts (jk, jk, no pressure xD).

@athanshadow If you want to make use of Marcus, feel free to do so!

All luck and fun to you all!

Oh no!
Sad to see you go Alida, you have contributed so much to the RP.

Alessia - Roan collab up, finally.

Oh... damn... Well, good luck then, hope things turn out well for ya.

So, now Markul needs somewhere to go...

We'd suggest somewhere where other characters are located.

oh, and with AlidaMaria's unfortunate departure, we're missing someone to play that Prince Aral Otharion. Any volunteers?

Freeshooter92 said
Oh... damn... Well, good luck then, hope things turn out well for ya.So, now Markul needs somewhere to go...

Roan's currently... leaving a blood trail mess and bleeding out so if you want to pull away to help him out, I would be grateful. He's a slight ways from the Embassy by now and the crowds, cliche as it sounds, is always a good way to part. We can meet up with Machaggis's PC at his clinic. I'm sure an almost albino man will draw some looks and questions when he wakes. Namely at least from those buggers who were chasing him earlier. Might have ideas to shake up the IC into a fight, anyone want in?

Also, random and totally off topic question, I hate silence in the OOC:

Where do you draw your rp inspiration from for your PC or rp in general? I draw mine from games, books, and the what if scenerios I tend to explore with a passion. Nothing like putting a new twist on things with a different perspective. Part of that was why I wanted to make a werewolf PC and show a different side of the self claimed 'beast'. So far, I think I enjoy him best as a wolf.

The original Thora in Relics was designed to play with Vampirism. This iteration is somewhat similar, but with more Relics-specific differences from the classic myths. Unfortunately, Thora isn't working as well as a PC as we'd hoped. Our sources for concepts are innumerable and constantly fluctuating.

Part of the inspiration for Angie Nic Cuán was actually Fallen's character combined with our fondness for lupines and canines.

The inspiration for the inquisitor NPC was religious fanaticism. We do hope someone will build on that plotline. The inquisitors are meant to be a fair bother for everyone, but we're personally not all that fond of the GM being in control of all opponents.

If anyone's willing to take on that prince Aral, know that you'll have pretty free reins on how you make him tick.

Ellri said
Part of the inspiration for Angie Nic Cuán was actually Fallen's character combined with our fondness for lupines and canines.

Part of me wants to say... woof. :P

Ellri said
Part of the inspiration for Angie Nic Cuán was actually Fallen's character combined with our fondness for lupines and canines.

Part of me wants to say... woof. :P

heh.

we're not on as much as we'd prefer, but we do often frequent the guild IRC and control a channel of our own therein. You can, among a number of other people frequently find several people from here in that (us, Fallen, Echo, ...). If you should happen to find your way to the guild IRC, just throw in the line "/j #Aftermath" and you'll pop over.

This place needs more noise. Also, don't hesitate to do something out of fear of doing too much. You will, within reason, have fairly free reins on what you start up IC.

Ellri said
Also, don't hesitate to do something out of fear of doing too much. You will, within reason, have fairly free reins on what you start up IC.

Now you're just encouraging me.

this is the point we'd insert a whimsical grin.

Ellri said
this is the point we'd insert a whimsical grin.

Allow me: