Golden acres the scum of society as were the lowest of the low conglomerate in groups and masses. Wether it be the shady dealers were the very houses the live in can be ticking time bombs with meth manufacturing to the lights never going out causing sleepless night. Thugs and small time killers extorting for profit, sometimes to no avail as most of the trailers are packing some sort of weapon. Arms dealers with enough to supply small armies giving the phrase trigger happy a bad name as gun shots are all too common thing. Hookers and prostitutes that walk the rows, not all women but with some men selling themselves for god knows what reason; drugs, food or any other reason. The homeless always trying to sneak and steal for what ever commodity that it is they need, with them flowing in by the day with promises of something better or theft.

According to official police reports, any calls that come from Golden acres result in at least two deaths of any sort of any peace officer. Swat, police in riot gear and some federal agents hit the trailer park quarterly, to stim any grow tide of rampant corruption to little resolve but it helps keep the residents in line for at least a while. With the average arrests being rounded over a hundred. From petty theft to cold blooded murder often with there being five to ten charges on the minimum. With the most on record was over sixty, five years ago since a mass murderer had been found in one such raid. It takes not only guts and a will to live but to devolp a personality to take it all by handles and peddle like hell.

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Dirty Secret: (Well whats something most people know about your character.)



Scott Ardister aka Torch

26

Rap Sheet
17 Counts of Arson (Known about)
10 of alleged 1st degree of murder
19 Counts of drug carrying with the intent to sell
3 Counts of theft

Bio/Personality
If there is anything about product of the system it is Scott, born from rape between a stripper and strung out meth addict. In foster care bouncing from place to place, unable to stay in with one such family for more than a year partially due to his obsession with fire. Leading up to the point where he was outright abandoned by the social services and anyone in the system at the age of thirteen, having to live off the streets until his first incarceration into Juvenal hall at fourteen for theft. For once he felt at home with the others who had been thrown away and the key long forgotten. Able to live of the hopelessness from others making his first contacts in during his lockup, learning and watching how to maneuver the system and make the money from it.

Getting out Scott drifted between crack dens and underground whore houses supply the needs of the clients, until one day he made a deal. In exchange several bags of his finest for a home. Not the best of deals but it was a home to lay down. Taking the key to Golden acres browsing threw the trailers, until he found his place. A piece of crap but it was something, until he was extorted the next day and beaten to a pulp. A dozen of bruises, a few broken ribs and a couple of silver teeth, he found the assailants house. Armed with a half a dozen Molotov cocktails tossing four into the large double wide home until the two that beat the life from Scott came running out, the last two were thrown and the two roasted alive. Making his statement, justice by fire.

Over the years he had grown in reputation and made his fortune in the drug market, mainly in main Cocaine, Heroin and Meth. Which allotted him some of the finer things despite the large amounts of theft, though one thing he takes pride in his the military grade flamethrower. In according with the last psyche evaluation according to police he's a certified genius but the lack of an education has developed into a street smart psycho. Earning the nickname of Torch because of anyone who had wronged had met their end by fire and a rather painful slow death.

Dirty Secret
His half sister is a police detective that both extorts and protects him strangely enough. Probably to line her own pockets.

Innovative Engimas said
Dirty Secret: (Well whats something most people know about your character.)

Um, correct me if I'm wrong, but it's a dirty SECRET... isn't that something that almost nobody knows about the character?

Appearance:
Name:Axle Niebo
Age: 35
Rap Sheet: 6 Counts Assault in the first degree, 4 Counts attempted murder
Bio/Personality: Axle is typically fun loving, he can be very serious when you wake him up, or shoot at him. He was a cop for 13 years untill he was shot in the leg, breaking a bone, and forcing him to retire early. His wife left him not long after moving to Las Vegas with her mother. He moved to Golden Acres because it was the only place that he could afford on unemployment. Lately he has been working as protection, for a crack dealer, an arms dealer, and a meth lab. He is rarely seen without a beer.
Dirty Secret: He has a 16 year old daughter who lives with her mother that he calls every Saturday, if you interrupt him he will, "break your fucking legs".

Yes it supposed to add a little flavor. Nothing too relevant.

Appearance:
Name: Roxy Black
Age: 21
Rap Sheet:
5 counts of attempted murder
10 counts of assault
15 counts of assault with a deadly weapon
20 counts of prostitution
Bio/Personality: Roxy is the only child of an up and coming crime boss. She doubts that he'll ever reach the big wigs but that doesn't stop him from trying. She ran away from home at 16 when her father forced her to get pregnant with her son. She spent years learning to fight with and throw knives so that she could protect herself and her son. She worked the streets trading information or trafficking items. Once she saved enough to buy a place for her and son. She still works the streets She specializes in antiques and unusual items.
Dirty Secret: She loved to dance. But she'll kill anyone who sees her doing it.

Appearance:


Name: Mark Vincent

Age: 31

Rap Sheet:
- Possession of Class A & B drugs;
- Trafficking of Class A & B drugs;
- Illegal possession of a firearm;
- 1 count of 1st degree murder;
- 3 counts of battery;
- 1 count of sexual assault;

Bio/Personality: Mark comes from a pretty financially stable family, but he has been living in Golden Acres since he was 22. That's when he was kicked out of his home by his father after he was trying to protect his little sister from him beating her. Four days later Mark's father dissapeared and was never seen again. Some think it was Mark's fault but evidence was never found. In truth, Mark did kill his father and burned his dead body until nothing remained of him so he can cover his tracks. Desperate to make lots of money fast, Mark started living a life out of selling drugs to all the junkies living in the trailer park. He was getting his stuff from a drug lord that was living in the city. Three years ago he gained his independence and now works by himself although he is still partner with the drug lord that supplied him all these years.

Mark is an impulsive man with zero tolerance to thieves, traitors, people that abuse women and those that generally step on his toes more then they should. His favorite punishment for them is a good ol' fashioned beat up, though sometimes he likes using cold weapons too. He possesses some firearms, most gained through illegal means and never leaves his trailer without his favorite one of them all, a Colt 1911 with custom grips. Despite beying a man that hates violence against women, there was a night, sometime last year, when Mark raped a 22 year old girl. He later confessed to a friend what he did, also saying that he is not proud of it at all and that if he could turn back time he wouldn't do it again. He also said that he was drunk, a little upset because of a drug deal that went bad the previous day and that she was skimpy dressed and he just could resist. Despite his impulsiveness Mark values friendship and is extremely loyal to his friends and family. He also does his best to keep his younger sister away from drugs and anything bad that has to do with Golden Acres.

Dirty Secret: Mark and the wife of the drug lord he has been working with all these years have developed feelings for each other. She visits him disguised as often as she can and they both spend time together. Of course everything happends in secret because the man is powerful and has connections, even in the trailer park. If anyone finds out about this then both Mark and his cheating wife would be in serious trouble.

Innovative Engimas said
Yes it supposed to add a little flavor. Nothing too relevant.

I get that.

However you missed my point. My point was the wording or word choice for the phrasing behind the "dirty little secret".

Name: Jeebis Ruby A.K.A, Animal
Age: 22
Rap Sheet: 8 Counts of 1st degree Murder
3 Counts of 2nd degree Murder
4 Counts of 3rd degree Murder
6 Counts of Theft
Bio/Personality: Jeebis is known as the 'batshit insane animal' in Golden Acres, if there's anyone you DON'T want to run into at night, it would be her. Due to a camping incident, Jeebis was trapped in the woods with four mutual friends for about 3 months. The first few weeks were just fine, but then as time went on, everyone got more and more irritated with each other. The diminishing food supply didn't help the situation either. About 2 months into being stranded, they had run out of food completely. Everyone was at each other's throats, passing the blame for getting stranded around from person to person. As soon as one of them took a swing, everyone began picking up rocks or random objects to bash each other's skull in. Knowing that there was no one around to stop the fight or see who won, Jeebis snapped completely. Giving into her homicidal urges, she slipped out her pocket knife and began swinging, starting with the first person closest to her. In a mess of swinging fists, knives, and rocks, Jeebis had successfully slaughtered the four friends she had traveled with. Sporting quite a few bruises and gashes, she bandaged her wounds with whatever she could find as she stared at the motionless bodies infront of her. Then a thought had sparked in her mind, technically they're made of meat, so why not eat them!

Durring the next month that Jeebis spent trapped in the woods, psychosis had officially set in and she took a metal file found in one of the backpacks and filed down all of her teeth (except for the back ones) into shark-like points. She spent most of her time admiring wolves that would come by every once in a while, and began to mimick them. From how they communicate to how they hunt, eventually Jeebis got into the habit of walking on all fours wherever she decided to prowl around out of boredom. Once she was rescued she was put into a Mental Hospital to try to get her mind back into its original state. Although Jeebis's mind had gone completely feral and insane, she still had enough smarts to gradually fake getting better to "Get the holy everloving fuck OUT of there." Once she was out, she wandered around the streets, 'accidentally' killing 3 people that happened to walk by the alley she was sleeping in for a night, and then gradually began to 'hunt' whatever 'prey' looked suitable enough when she got hungry. After a while Jeebis was diagnosed with Kleptomania because of her urge to steal things while she was homeless. Once missing and murder reports started getting to the police with her as the main suspect, Jeebis fled to Golden Acres, completely unaware of the fact that it was a small place for criminals. She successfully hid underneath one of the trailers with a loose panel at the bottom and gave the police the slip. After about 6 months of living in Golden Acres, the people there had given her the nickname "Animal" due to her feral tendencies, habit of walking on all fours, and sharp teeth.
Dirty Secret: Is actually really loyal, but no one has gained her trust enough for her to let herself be someone's 'human guard-dog'

Now ma character has a face

Name: Hailey Baylor
Age: 23
Rap Sheet:
-Auto Theft (1 count)
-Arson (1 count)
-DUI (3 counts)
-Assault (4 counts)
-Public drunkenness (4 counts)
-Possession of a gun without a license (2 counts)

Bio/Personality: Nothing scares Hailey except the dark. She could be face to face with a murderer and be mouthing off until someone turns out the lights, and then she loses it. She’s always thought she was a tough chick. She grew up with just her dad, who let Hailey do whatever she wanted. He ran his own illegal businesses on the side, and pretty much ignored her. Hailey has no idea about her mother. When she would ask her father, he’d just say she decided to start a career as a slut and refuse to talk any more. Her father did respect women in general though, despite being burned. He had fun teaching Hailey self-defense, and how to shoot a gun. He treated her basically like he would have a son. He would also show her off to his friends with sons, and how she could whip every one of them.

In high school, Hailey got into a lot of fights with other girls. She unlike others, did not put up with being called slut or trashy or fat. She’d just rear back and punch a girl in the face. She spent most of her time in juvi. Her father didn’t really care. When she was home they often bonded over drinking starting when she was about 14. He had other substances and drugs in the house but kept her out of them, giving her such life lessons as “Dealers are smart, druggies just bum out and stay in jail.”

When she was 18, Hailey met a guy going in the military outside a bar. It was a purely physical relationship at first, but they fell for each other and got married (even though he was 8 years older than her). Her father didn’t approve, not a big fan of the government or military, but Hailey still spent time with him when she could, until he got shot when one of his clients wanted his stuff and had no money. After her father died, Hailey got drunk more often. She never domestically abused her husband but she probably would have if he hadn’t been stronger than her. He helped her get through it anyway until he had to go back abroad, and left her. He got killed about a year after deploying, and three years of marriage.

Alone, with little money, a GED but no particularly special skills, she didn’t have a lot of options. She moved into the trailers with everything she had and currently sells her husband’s old firearms sometimes to get money for food. She has an ambition to fight for money, but doesn’t have the right connections.

Dirty Secret: She loves kids and would love to have one, but physically can’t.

Up an going.

Looks like we're starting in the summer. What time of day?

Late day, close to dusk and in the worst part of summer where its hot as holy hell.

; ) my favorite part of summer.

My character is officially done. I've added the dirty secret and done some editing to his rap sheet as well. Not much just added some things. Now he's done.

So... is it Scott or Derrick?

Scott, my bad

No problem. Just needed to know before posting.

I was tired as hell last night so put that in by mistake.

Room for one more?