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> Tekno, the way u referred to Nightmare's character is a little odd. Your rping the principal in third person, but then referring to Nightmare's character as "you and your". Its kinda awkward. Shouldn't it be like..for example... > > The principal lifted his head up and looked at the boy eyes intently, rummaging through the papers before handing them to him. > > (Instead you did it like...) > > The principal lifted his head and looked at your eyes intently, rummaging through the papers before handing them to you. > > Idk, I'm sorry if im whining. Its just very weird and incoherent for me. LOL Ahh, I see your confusion there. When I type with <> that is in reference to the character them self. So, as to what Nightmare's character was seeing. If I had done {} I would have done a more of a third person type of post. If I was RPin in third person as him, I probably would have mentioned his thoughts, or what he was doing before Sam came into the room. I normally do this when the character isn't extremely important, or if they're doing something I don't want other characters to know about. A good example would be if a character was reading a book, and you walked up to them, I would probably use <> to avoid the other players seeing what they had been reading to build up suspense. I would then use {} at some point if I wanted to show his point of view after the other person left. <> are usually used for specific responses to posts. But sometimes I just go back and forth between the two.
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Username: ApollosArcher | Character Name: Jacob Blackwood | Character Age: 14 | Character Gender: Male | Character Grade: 9th Appearance: Tall and slender, with piercing Gray eyes and sharp jaw line. His hair sticks out like a sore thumb and some freckles dot his face. He's actually pretty light for some one his size standing about 5' 11" and weighing in around 175. What little weight he does have is muscle as he is avid athlete. Personality: While he does project an air of nobility and power, he doesn't do it intentionally as he's friendly if a bit distant, due to past problems he tends to talk a lot without really saying anything as a defense mechanism. Generally Jacob is willing kind and considerate but prone to anger and lash out if stressed, thus he does his best to stay distant from people. While popular he secludes himself keeping post people at arms length only letting a certain few get close. Biography: A gifted young man, from a young age he showed talent in fencing and most academic pursuits. He comes from a long line of English nobility, however his childhood was filled with sadness as his father constantly berated him for not being good enough. He wanted a son of legend, anything less than perfect qualified as failure, with that came no dinner, a beating or worse. An all star fencer and child genius he did well in most subjects, however only hundreds and flawless victory's satisfied his father, however he also took the beatings for his sisters failings in school. Talented and singing and can play a few different instruments. Two years ago his mother could no longer stand by and watch this, so while Jacob and his sister were at school she killed her husband, this got her place in jail, both kids were then sent off to France where they were enrolled in Kadic Academy to keep them out of the light of paparazzi. Other: I swear, some fool wrote nine twice! Ugh, I'll have to edit it all now.
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Where are all the girls Chàrlie needs some lady friends to keep her sane in this mess of boys
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I'm making one now :D
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> I'm making one now :D _thank god she's not alone_
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Hey, Apollosarcher! You posted your character in the character's section without before being accepted first. It's okay, your app is good enough to be accepted though. One quick question though, did you mean to pick 5'11"? That's pretty tall for a 14 year old. If that's your point... then alright. But you'd probably be literally the tallest kid in school. By far.
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> > I'm making one now :D > > _thank god she's not alone_ Haha! There are going to be some in the future that will be part of the story. There is one character I wanted to bring in from the other RP, and I think she might be a good character to bring in at some point. She'll be part of the secret type of characters. :3
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Bluh, not a very good first post for me. I'll edit in a bit, but I had to write that before lunch.
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> Bluh, not a very good first post for me. I'll edit in a bit, but I had to write that before lunch. Haha! Is that Keima? For some reason I picked up a little hint of "Money" with the mention of his driver. As for other people posting, I'll have someone else up to the principal's office after Sam responds. If he doesn't I'll PP him out and put someone else in. NVM about that PP thing. That post he made was an open ended post. If a character wants to jump it (Spades), you can. I'm sure that's what he was up too. :3 Neeeext!
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I already responded and interacted a tiny little bit with Spades's character. She can now choose if she wants to talk with me before going to the principle or if she wants to head there straight away.
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> I already responded and interacted a tiny little bit with Spades's character. She can now choose if she wants to talk with me before going to the principle or if she wants to head there straight away. Yep! That's what I thought.
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> > Bluh, not a very good first post for me. I'll edit in a bit, but I had to write that before lunch. > > Haha! Is that Keima? For some reason I picked up a little hint of "Money" with the mention of his driver. > > As for other people posting, I'll have someone else up to the principal's office after Sam responds. If he doesn't I'll PP him out and put someone else in. It's like those people who drive you in from the train station. (At least, around here people do that.) Arndt would be much more middle class, so I'm sure he doesn't have a chauffeur, or I would have mentioned that. I'm trying my hardest not to make this character Keima_2.0
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Okay Ragna. xD. That makes sense though. I live in the country, so I had no idea about that. I'm wondering now how many people will disappear, quit, and stick around. This is very strange so many people are actually posting right away! I have to make sure everyone understands that not everyone will get to be a Lyoko Warrior! I'll pick some people at different times to do it, depending on their actions. But, don't worry... I still have that secret other type. :3
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For reference, Nightmare, yes, that's the same Mike as from the other RP. For everyone else, Mike is a character who appears in the background, and has only had a few lines of speech. I recognize him from the episode where they are asking for a kid to play an instrument with them, and he's the kid that plays the drums. Yes! He is an actual NPC. He's not listed though, so you can't look him up.
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I think I'll wait for someone else to post before posting again. I don't want it to be filled with me just making small talk with an NPC
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Yep, good idea. lol Oh! I actually found [Mike](http://codelyoko.wikia.com/wiki/Emmanuel_Maillard)! Okay. So, he's a 9th grader... I've got to remember that. And he looks completely different than what I thought. Oh well, same character.
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Sorry I'm sorta busy so I haven't posted yet I feel bad ;n;
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> Sorry I'm sorta busy so I haven't posted yet I feel bad ;n; No problem. Do you think your'll be able to post soon? If not, I'll PP things around you.
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Username: gamer5910 |Character Name: Flippy Takeshi |Character Age 14 |Character Gender: Male | Character Grade:8th Appearance: Flippy is 5'7" with blue hair and blue eyes he is skinny-ish but can fight well and can run really well. He wears a light black hoodie with cat ears on it, a light blue shirt beneath, black sweat pants with white shoes with black laces, and also can't forget about his headphones they are a darker blue than his hair with a magenta color for the cord. Personality: Flippy isn't that social but when he is he comes off really friendly, but to get him to be social is like to see a double rainbow during a lunar eclipse. Due to his past he doesn't like being asked about his mother or father but he does answer about how many grandparents, siblings, or cousins, he has which most people tend to ask him. He is also known to be very Popular which in that case it is prouder to be picked on for that reason, but he just puts on his headphones and ignores the people picking on him. Bio: When Flippy was born in Japan he had no brother or sister, and his father worked for the army so he didn't get to see him often. His mom on the other hand he saw every day with a smile. Ever since Flippy was five two things happened to him that he will never for get one was his spent the one day a year he could coming to his sons birthday, and his gift to Flippy was wooden katana hand carved by his own father. He also found out he loved two things drawing and computers. Since he loved those two things he wanted to find a carrier that could involve one or the other which meant he didn't have much time for social time he spent his time up to the age of 12 drawing learning about computers. His mother told him they had to move but since Flippy had no friends he didn't really care. So for the next two years Flippy was getting better and better at his hobbies, but one day his school burnt down and he had to switch to Kacid Academy which made him have to leave his mom and live in one of the rooms at the school. The day before Flippy left his mother gave him a necklace which had a yin-yang symbol on it his mother told him it has been past down from her mothers mother to him, so he treasured it just like his wooden katana from his dad. It took him a month to get packed and ready to move into the school it was a easy transaction, but when he arrived he heard that a group of students went missing. He was curios at first but just kept to his work and didn't care after a while, so from then on out its been a normal life to him, or so it seems. Other: I can't think of anything good to say about rule 9, but it is a good rule to follow.
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Username: Demous | Character Name: Sayuri | Character Age: 14 | Character Gender: Female | Character Grade: 8th Appearance: She has waist-length sleek black hair which she keeps in a thin ponytail and sharp blue eyes. She is slightly tall at 5'6" and with an athletic build. She wears black shoes, black pants, and a white t-shirt. Personality: She is laid back and carefree taking very few things seriously. One of the few things she is serious about is threats towards her friends. She is also cautious when making friends due to the dislike aimed at her where she used to live. She enjoys reading, drawing, and fighting. She hates above anything those who use others to their advantage. Biography: She was raised in a fairly wealthy household getting many things but rarely anything she wanted. Her parents wanted her to act one way she wanted to live how she chose. Her parents were well disliked in the area they lived for various reasons, which in turn made her equally disliked. As a result she had one friend other then her twin sister. There weren't really any major problems until 6th grade when several of her classmates started targeting her. It started with small things but eventually escalated into full fights near the end of that year and continued through most of the way through 7th until a suspenstion of all parties near the end of the year. Her parents finally got fed up with the fights and sent her off to Kardic figuring that if she didn't have anyone she knew she wouldn't get into anymore trouble. Other: The second rule 9 is my favorite.
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