medical team under the Twin Souls Program that provides medical care to Shifters injured in battle.They have Mythics capable of bringing you back from the brink of death (almost). Doctors and nurses aren't necessary.
Out of necessity, it didn't take long for the Program to be perfected. In five years time, there were so many volunteers and so many compatible humans that Earth had its own army of magic wielding beings. More and more young adults were tested and infused with Mythic Essence.Please change the wording of this a bit. It makes it sound like it took five years for the project to be completed (when it only took 6 months). Just a minor nitpick. Aside from these two, there is only one thing that "grinds my gears" so to speak, and that is how her flames can someone rid people of illusory attacks. One thing that I need to make clear here is that illusions are (most often) targeted directly at the victim's mind, meaning that the Caster is affecting the brain itself, and all of the senses (most often it's only vision). Flames and fire are physical, and as such can't reach the mind, and because of that can't dispell illusions. As for the fire cyclones... Sorry, but even for a Fae that's overdoing it. A ~1,2 kilometre tall cyclone? Moving over 400 kilometres an hour? While I like the idea of a rotating thing of fire and death, this is just too much. Make it ~200, or so, metres tall, and move at max 100 kilometres an hour. It'll be quick enough to catch Demons, but in return it would also be a bit slow when it comes to changing direction. A tornado doesn't just change from going forward to suddenly turning 90 degrees and continuing without pause. Also, may I suggest that you don't just stick with fire tornados? Fire is her element and she can do a lot more with it. Like a Napalm, for example. You don't have to write down a thousand examples of how she can use her fire, but just one or two more to make it seem like she has a bit of diversity. That... should be all :)
