• Modern technology all comes from one corporation; Desium Corp. Suppliers of all anti-angelic (To the public, demonic) weaponry. From Cars to Condos, it's Desium Corp.
• Thanks to Desium Corp, cars are now flying, weapons are all outfitted to deal with [supernatural or otherwise] threats, and the world has never been at a greater peace.
• This world has been unified under one central government, and one leader. All currency is the same no matter where you go.
• Desium Corp has not been around for long, only twenty years. There are still people, traditionalists or nostalgics who fight back against this one-world globalization. There is rumor that most of the people in the main cities are brainwashed, and they are out to uncover the truth...

If you wish to play in an NPC role that's fine, just pm me first





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I should have a CS up later tonight. Reserve me for a human :)

Okay :3 I forgot to mention, I'll only be accepting 10 applicants for now. I'm a tough critic too.

Where'd all my people go??

Give me some time to work on my CS. Name: Zaneria Gender: Female Character Type: Cyborgel Personality: I would prefer to explore this in the RP itself. Appearance Zaneria in her greater glory, before the defilement of her existence. Supernatural Abilities Flight, as evident by her wings. Composed entirely out of physical matter, they are visible at all times, enabling her to fly through physical means. Career, Related Skills, and Description of Cybrogel Form Following her capture and subsequent brainwashing, Zaneria was modified and augmented to be deposited in war and disaster zones as a ‘humanitarian aid worker’, providing relief efforts such as search and rescue, evacuation and the delivering of aid supplies. To facilitate her effectiveness in that field of expertise, as well as to optimize the usage of her flight assets which had been rendered inoperable as a consequence of the brainwash, several modifications had been imposed on her. Coated in a unique, lightweight and highly robust metal, her wings now take on an eerie sheen, equipped for streamline flight, agility, and mobility appropriate to her line of work. Slim and complex - almost weightless - pistons and mechanical arms of varying sizes make up the flight component, adroitly simulating the motion of wings in flight to replace the angel’s void in memory and knowledge, all of which were once a prerequisite for the natural usage of her wings. This contraception is unique in its operation, being strictly directed by signals sent from the mind using a biosensor imbedded in her head. Thereby, it is to be emphasized that whilst she is still in her brainwashed state, her wings can only be moved by artificial means. Zaneria, as a Cyborgel, has no offensive potentialities to note of, for the minds behind her Cyborgel design had decided that she needed nothing else. Thus, with the same metal which now suffocates her wings, they had ensured that much of Zaneria's physical body underwent a dramatic replacement of appendages in an effort to boost her flight and defense capabilities, augmented by the properties of the metal. In current times, however, the metalwork once concealed under a layer of artificial skin is now dreadfully exposed. The last of her Cyborgel modifications involved her eyes. Equipped with infrared and night vision facilities, one in each eye, Zaneria now sees the world in a spectrum of metallic and warm shades, the natural colors of the world now inaccessible to her. However, it is to be noted that whilst these added functions have proven highly efficient in her search and rescue deployments, they were – tragically – implemented hastily, with little thought put into the durability and robustness of the design. Exposed to the mercy of the rain and sun, Zaneria's mechanical eyes are now susceptible to regular and persistent glitches, thus affecting her ability to see when they occur. In New Society, a world government meant no more civil wars between countries in strife, while advancements in technology provided sufficient protection to societies and communities against the forces of nature – earthquakes, tsunamis, hurricanes and the like. Thus, Cyborgels specifically augmented to operate in the field of humanitarian aid became obsolete, left to rot in the landfills and waste of humanity. Biography Long before the day which was to be the ultimate deliverance, Zaneria had been a veteran in the field of diversion, proficient in luring demonic attention away from unsuspecting mortals. It was often that she left other angels of her kind to guide souls to their rightful paths, while she worked with Seraphims in a collective effort to obliterate certain persistent spiritual entities. With a brazen personality and a penchant for inducing various sorts of inconveniences in the way of her evil counterparts, Zaneria had often been regarded as part of god’s mischievous lot - vexatious, volatile, but no less intelligent, hosting unparalleled skill in the art of aerial maneuverability. Now, her Cyborgel body lies motionless in a metal scrap-yard, waiting to be pulverized by the fantastic machinery dotting the landscape. It has been six hours since her consciousness awoke. To be continued in the RP. Other: REBORN

Got waaay too caught up playing Neverwinter, will have my character up tomorrow, probably. EDIT: Apologies, gonna have to pull out of this.

Name: Kirk Chin Gender: Male Character Type: Human Appearance: Career: Revolutionary/Gun dealer owner Skills: [For Cyborgels, put down what they were able to do in their career, and what they can do to fight mechanically. For Demons, put down career skills or fighting capabilities and for humans, any skills that you can think of.] -Sufficient at shooting -Able to break into homes/cars -Can lockpick Personality: -Charismatic -Cocky -Arrogant -Obliging -Cautious Bio: Kirk was born to a rather poor family. His father was a butcher who had came to America directly from China while his mother was an American of Chinese descent working in a car wash that laundered money for a local gang lord. Kirk's brother, Douglas was born two years after he was and Kirk took it upon himself to be as brotherly as possible. Which essentially means poking fun at Douglas whenever he saw fit. Kirk's mother and father tried their best to keep them out of any crime or gang related business, but in a poor neighbourhood like the one they lived in, it was just about inevitable for them to commit some sort of crime. They were both recruited into the gang that laundered money through their mothers carwash. Kirk excelled in stealth while his brother excelled in the more brutal and loud part of the job. Kirk would often joke that 'He ain't heavy, he's my brother" whenever someone asked if Douglas was the 'heavy weapons guy'. Or at least, they did later on in their jobs, they started out as drug runners and gradually worked their way up. It was only at the ages of 21 and 19 that Kirk and Douglas got their big break and began to get in on the action. They each had the same job to prove themselves though, one that drastically changed their lives for the worse. They were forced to kill an undercover cop each, Douglas took it a bit better than Kirk did. Kirk almost attempted suicide after the event while Douglas took it in stride and carried on with his daily life. The revolution began shortly after this. Kirk had considered joining every now and then but the leader of the gang was strongly opposed to anyone joining and raising any attention to the gang itself. He'd tried to help any revolutionaries he met along the way as much as he could though, even if it was just some spare bus change. Kirk stayed with the gang for another six years before he began to consider leaving to work on his own. He would do much more than leave after a series of events transpired though. Douglas had been apprehended by the police after a drug bust and was forced to work undercover for the cops or be put in jail for a length of time that was essentially a death sentence. The gang leader found out and ordered Douglas' death, sending Kirk over the edge. He planned his revenge in silence for several months before acting. The gang's leader was meeting with a rather corrupt politician to make a deal about the police force turning a blind eye in return for a steady supply of drug shipments. Kirk had planned the entire situation out. He disguised himself as one of the leaders bodyguards and had planted makeshift sticky bombs at select locations around the warehouse that they met. He blew the charges, taking care of the other guards along the politician and any exits the leader could escape from. Kirk beat him to death there and then and quickly made his escape through a manhole leading to the city sewers where he had stashed a spare suit and a place to exit in order for his alibi to be complete. With the leader gone the gang quickly broke down and fell apart leading to Kirk having a surge of business coming his way. He stole from the rich and gave to himself. His prize possession being an exact remake of the famous Ford Torino. He used the money he gained from stealing in order to finance his own gun dealership. He joined the revolution shortly after he had gained enough profit to go higher than breaking even and began to stop stealing until he had no need to anymore. He now helps to train any revolutionary who wants to be trained in the art of stealth along with supplying the revolutionaries with weaponry, at a discount of course, can't give everyone a free gun. He recently opened a pawn shop that has been slowly getting off the ground since he opened it. OPTIONAL Likes: -Hamburgers -Muscle cars - preferably from the 70s -Pistols -Nice suits -Guitars Dislikes: -Big Business -Techno Theme Song: Milk and Alcohol Other: REBORN

I'll have my CS up in a little while. Before I get working in it, is it cool if I have a Revolutionary sniper?

Sure! Just make sure you provide enough evidence that they've been trained to be a sniper. Remember! Revolutionaries are crash-course trained depending on their origin. If you want a sniper I suggest maybe having your character come from a military background, but of course it's up to you!

Well, I was already thinking of having him be a military defector, so it all works out :)

I'll hopefully have my CS up by tonight. --EDIT-- I might have a military battle cyborgel.

I'll hopefully have my CS up by tonight. --EDIT-- I might have a military battle cyborgel.

Alright, you best be prepared for being very thoroughly critiqued then.

Name: Razielle Gender: Female Character Type: Cyborgel Appearance: Description: Both of her legs, all the way up to her hips, are completely replaced with metal parts to give her the ability to run faster, that way she can get to patients faster. She has a completely replaced, thin, metal right arm that allows her to shift the fingers of her hand into scalpels. She has a movable X-Ray "eye" that can be flipped in front of her right eye to be able to see inside someone's body. It is movable so that she can have both her eyes for outer wounds. Her halo is only a gold circlet around her head now. Career: Nurse/ Doctor for some of the larger, more important hospitals, where government officials would go. She would help wherever she was needed within the hospital Skills: -Ability to quickly perform an operation that would normally take a human doctor hours within a few minutes -Though she is now mechanical, she does still have her brain, and she is very good at comforting people when they need someone to turn to -Has the ability to find a problem, health wise, with a person faster than a human doctor Supernatural Abilities: Mind Cleansing- She has the ability to cure people of any ailment that troubles them within the mind. For example, if someone was stressed out about something, she could calm them down just by touching them. Another example is if someone had schizophrenia, she could cure them of that just by touching them. It is only in the mind though. No where else. Personality: Quiet, Strong-Willed, Thoughtful, Grounded Bio: Before she was found out and captured, she would silently watch over people in hospitals. She was especially drawn toward younger children who had cancer or were paralyzed for some disease. Her heart ached for them and every once in awhile, there was a special child that she would fall deeply in love with and grant a miracle for, whether it was getting rid of their cancer, helping them to walk again, or getting rid of whatever ailment was upon them. When the angels began to descend, she tried to ease the children far enough to where they could die without pain, but she was captured before she could. She remembers nothing after the time she was captured. The next thing she realized she was waking up in a dumpster surrounded by piles of trash and disgusting smells. She stood up and shoot herself off and wandered into the city. She made sure to stay in the shadows because she knew one thing, though she didn't remember: if she woke up in a dump, then there were people who definitely did not want her around. OPTIONAL Likes: Snow (before she was turned), Sparkly Things, Most Animals (She Feels That They Are Healing) Dislikes: Spiders, Too Sweet People, Ignorant People, Sharks, Crocodiles Theme Song: Healing Incantation from Tangled (Just 'cause) Other: REBORN

<Snipped quote by ScarlettWaters16> Alright, you best be prepared for being very thoroughly critiqued then.

That's fine. I can handle it. :)

Added: Unlockable characters to be revealed during the rp. These are pinnacle to plot but may take quite a long time to be revealed. More will be added to the list, and revealed as the story progresses. Not much has been added to their CS, but the optional sections for them have been filled in. These are clues to who they are, especially their theme songs. Just things to shoot for during the story.

@ReaptheMusicDone. Critique away. Also realize I did all of that on my phone so sorry for any spelling errors.

Name: Zacary 'Zac' Yoxall Gender: Male Character Type: Human Revolutionary (Military defector) Appearance: Career: Ex-military sniper, now works with the Revolutionaries Skills: -Excellent cook -Elite-class sniper -Proficient with various weapons and hand-to-hand, but best with sniper rifles Personality: -Carefree -Humorous -Loyal -Protective -Tends to not be very bright Bio: Zac was raised in a well-to-do family. He had never wanted for anything, everything was readily provided by parents who tried too hard to please their only child and heir to their business. And he hated it. His family had several Cyborgels as servants. Granted, he was always raised to believe they were demons who had come to destroy them all back when he was five, but he had never believed that. He wasn't sure how, but he had a feeling there was more to the Cyborgels than met the eye, but could never exactly put his finger on it. When he was of age, mainly to get away from his posh lifestyle, he joined the military, where he excelled as a sniper. At first, it was all fine and dandy, protecting civilians from renegades and 'repurposed' Cyborgels who sought to do harm to innocents. That changed one day, during a brutal firefight between the Revolutionaries and the military. He had been forced into close-quarters with a Cyborgel and, severely wounded in his right arm, was forced to chase her down. When he finally caught up to her and leveled his pistol at her, he saw something: a spark of life in her eyes. Seeing this, he let her go. A month later, after his arm was repaired, he gathered his gear and seemingly vanished. OPTIONAL Likes: -Spicy food -Sweet food -Sour food -...Food -Protecting the true innocents Dislikes: -Rich people -People who use power to get away with their crimes -Bad cooks Theme Song: Drawnonward by Jack Trammell Other: Reborn! :D

Finished

Abso-freaking-lutely not. 1. Cyborgels were early Desium Corp creations. No machinery could be hidden as you put in her description. 2. No Angel was sent to earth to kill any one person. These are angels we're talking about. They came down in Legions to literally OBLITERATE the earth. Not to mention you say she had a halo, which are creatures of healing. No Aura-based angel would be sent to 'assassinate' anyone, and much less would they have to train for it in their purified state. These were ANGELS. Extremely powerful beings specializing in the class they were in. To restate, a healing angel would not be sent to assassinate any specific person, much less assassinate at all. 3. The eventual power, wound reversal, is far too powerful. 4. This character is definitely leaning on the side of Mary Sue. My rules explicitly state that that is unacceptable. 5. Why would she have a nickname, and one so different from her own 'name?' Cyborgels were treated like machinery, no one would give her a nickname (much less care about any name. It would be like naming a cell phone, but since the angels did have their own names, I digress.) 6. Trained in every form of weaponry? BEFORE she became a cyborgel?! How did no one pick her out of the crowd considering she was never military registered and no at ALL suspicious, might I add. 7. You give us literally nothing about what her career was. At all. 8. How the FUCK did she come across throwing knives, a pistol and a sniper? And she works as a body guard? Out of the question. Completely out of the question. Cyborgels right now are obsolete and there would be no way to not pick her out of the crowd. Any Cyborgel that the government even gets a whiff of being sentient, she wouldn't be able to survive. 9. All cyborgels were brainwashed. Even if I allowed that nonsense of a healing angel 'training' to kill someone, she would not remember any said training. She would, however, remember her military training since she worked for them.

I really enjoy this character! He seems like he will be a lot of fun and provide lots of contrast to the complete seriousness of the rp. However, there is one small error that might have been my own fault in not presenting more clearly. Cyborgels, while in reality WERE turned into the living dolls you see today, were not publicly marketed as being augmented versions of the demons (angels) that had attempted to destroy earth twenty years ago. Cyborgels were marketed as 'replicas' inspired by the demons (angels) that attacked earth to be servants. See, to the public, it was kind of a commercial joke. Like those old racist Donald Duck cartoons where he fought in WWII (that's actually a thing, look it up.) But for the demons in control, it was an easy way to dispose of the angels without getting ANY kind of lashback. So maybe just make a few adjustments to the bio and you should be good. As for the rest of you, I look forward to seeing your completed WIP's!!

@ReaptheMusic Wow you weren't kidding about being harsh. xD anyways, I will be changing it ASAP. And I will be changing almost anything. Is it possible to have a medically inclined Cyborgel?