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eh you make a good point. in fact you actually gave me a new idea for an arc to start with that will force our soul reapers to seek aid by the visors and your hollow character will make a good controversy
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@Archmage MC You mention that you're worried about the shikai I described, but do you mind if I ask what in particular worries you about it? I put a number of prohibitions on it to make it reasonable, but is there something abusive about it that I'm not thinking of? Criticisms and suggestions are welcome.
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@Archmage MC You mention that you're worried about the shikai I described, but do you mind if I ask what in particular worries you about it? I put a number of prohibitions on it to make it reasonable, but is there something abusive about it that I'm not thinking of? Criticisms and suggestions are welcome.


Well Portals or anything that meddles with a fundamental of physics like time or Space are inherently broken. whats stopping your character from getting people into a monologue like whats normal in anime, then just putting a rock inside their brain, instantly killing pretty much anything without 682 or deadpool regeneration?

Stuff like that.
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Well what's stopping her is the part in the shikai description where she has to touch the end-destination of her portal with her sword beforehand. To put a rock in someone's brain, she would have had to already cut their brain with her sword. Kinda makes putting a rock their redundant.

I will admit though that there's room for clarification in the power, and making it so that a living being can't be the end destination is a good additional safeguard to the power.
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Name - Luna Heron
Age - 150
Gender - Female
Class - Shinigami
Powers -
Shikai- aoi tsuki which translates as blue moon is a speed and kido zanpakuto that's primary ability is that it allows kido to be delivered via impact from the blade. This Makes The User Far More versatile. Another variation about Aoi Tsuki is that in all states it remains a kematu style blade (The cutting edge is inverted). The Release command is simply "Rise! Aoi Tsuki."

Flash kido- allows the wilder to deliver kido through a blow without stopping a flashstep. This is similar to Byakurai's Senka.

Flash stepping- is luna specialty she is among some of the newer captains for speed.

Utusemi

enhanced kido- the amount of energy put into kido modifies it's power. Luna is capable of turning a kido like sho from a light breeze to a small cannon.

CUSTOM KIDO
Bakudo 8 Shadousupaiku "The moon rises above, Calling the world to watch the dancing light, Fight in darkness" This kido launches a black spike from the users outstretched palm pinning the target to a surface behind them.

History - As a human Luna was a regular girl with a regular life other than having schizophrenic spells where she heard voices whispering or felt like someone was touching her. She didn't know it but she was very attractive to hollows and was hearing and feeling souls around her. She died at the age of 24 killed by a hollow but she lost

Details - Any additional information that would be helpful toward the development of your character.
Evolution - wip
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@Shadolordare you going to detail your character
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Name - Light
Appearance - Light is a 1.6m tall pure white female humanoid with blue appendages coming out of the top of her noseless aquatic looking circular skull head like hair. She has a very thin, almost pencil like neck that contrasts to her large head and slightly bulky torso. Her arms are relatively skinny but end with large pointed fingers all flowing without showing signs of a wrist or joints (Although she still has them). She wears a blue top with a white dress with blue trim, the dress having an M cut at the frunt to reveal slightly muscular legs that end in sharp points instead of her having feet. Her hole is where you'd expect it, on her chest.
Age - Unknown
Gender - Female
Class - Hollow

Powers -
Adaptive Total Regeneration: While most hollows have some limited powers of regeneration, Lights time spent in hell drastically increased her regeneration to unprecedented levels, being able to regenerate any lost body part, including vital organs or her brain. She can regenerate from pretty much anything that isn't straight up atomization, although regenerating from diminished states take time. When starting to regenerate, Light's body adapts to whatever hurt her and caused the regeneration to occur, eventually making herself immune to whatever was hurting her for a few hours before her body goes back to its normal state. Light's regeneration is not instantaneous and does take time to work unless the injury is something very mild or easy to repair like reattaching a limb or a papercut.
Chains of War: Having feasted on most of the denizens of Hell, Light gained the ability to shoot out searing chains from her hands, which slow down and burn those that are hit by them, as well as make them unable to use Sonido or Moon Step. She can use these chains to pull the target close to her for punishment, but doing so releases the target from the binding chains. Light can only have 2 chains out at a time, one for each hand.
Void Cero: Light's Cero is far weaker than normal, but in return, it absorbs energy it touches, even while charging. It also gives off an eery shadowy light.

History - Light was either a fortunate or unfortunate hollow, as she didn't spend much time in Hueco Mundo or the living world, but instead followed an escaping Togabito through a gateway into Hell, where this unmonitored realm was a dangerous safe haven for her. Her prey would often just come back to life at designated points in the realm, and through some clever work, Light was able to move up the chain of devouring stronger souls by constantly 'camping' the weaker ones while avoiding the guardians of the realm who for some reason had very little interest in finding her. She spent a great amount of time in this realm, and only learned how to escape it when she was strong enough to stand up to one of the guardians of hell and ate a part of its body.
When leaving Hell, she found that most hollows were stupid brutes or driven by instinct for souls she found detestable and weak, although she didn't find the hollows all that bad herself when she tried one. Nothing like the Togabito, but not as terrible as the living souls.

Details - Due to spending most of her time in Hell, Light didn't develop most of the tendencies of other hollows, and finds the taste of soul reapers/human souls disgusting. Light's energy due to spending so much time in hell feels different from other hollows, almost feeling 'empty' to those who sense it, making her both easy and difficult to find.
Evolution - NA

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@Archmage MCvery interesting so approved, put her in the character tab
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do we have enough people for this? Or are you just going to leave it open?
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I'll post the GM characters first, this will always be open but I think we have enough to start.@Shadolord make sure to finish your cs done soon
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Of course I'm just on a phone
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good to know. ill be making the opening post either tonight or tomorrow morning so be ready guys
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WIP

Name - Jynmi Imsar
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Hollow mask

Age - 315
Gender - Male
Class - Visor
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Zanpakuto - Lilith


Release Phrase -Cackle Lilith



Shikai Ability -
Lilith can release glowing black gas. Said gas has the ability to exert pulling/pushing forces, and can be freely manipulated into whatever shape the user desires. Basically its like telekinesis, but with the added option to pull as well as push.

Custom Kido

Bakudo 3 Kuishinbō shushi(Gluttonous seed)- "Life must not be left to die, the sun cannot do it all, give of your strength so life may flourish." The user creates a small golden white spear in their hands, about the size of a mustard seed. The seed, when it comes into contact with any spiritual power will quickly engorge itself by absorbing the power, and then will pop once it becomes about two feet in diameter. The pop isn't very powerful, but its bright, loud, and very disorienting. Upon detonation the orb will release more kido seeds, and the cycle will continue until the supply of spiritual power is exhausted. Without sufficient energy to feed on the seeds will deteriorate in a matter of seconds.

Bakudo 99 Taimu poketto(Time Pocket-) "Not everything can be done in a moment's notice, step aside and take a deep breath, When waiting can't be done a moment's notice is just enough." The user creates a temporal sphere which they can use to suspend small objects indefinitely. Said spheres can be reopened at a moment's notice from empty space. This spell can only be used with a single item, at any given time.

Hado 50 Garasu no taihō(Glass Cannon)- "Around the world once, A smash amongst the crystals the breaking point is reached, shattered the world is cut to ribbons." The user creates a circle of light that floats in the air front of them, and smashes their open palm against it. The light shatters into thousands of needle like paces which shoot forwards.

hollowfication-
Jynmi has not yet mastered his Hollowfication so other than banishing his inner hollow back, he doesn't really have much control over her. His ability to prevent her from taking over his body decreases as he becomes fatigued, begins taking damage, or any other number of factors which might compromise the focus he uses to keep her out. When Hollowfied Anat increases Jynmi's speed, strength and spiritual power to monstrous levels.
Cero Aura- Unlike most Hollows Anat doesn't use a regular Cero, but instead manipulates said energy so it surrounds her, or one of her extremities for a few seconds for a minor increase in defense, and a massive increase to the amount of damage she can do with physical attacks.


History - Jynmi made it to the fourth seat in squad four before being transferred due to a complicated romance with a fellow squad member to squad 13. It soon became apparent that the new squad wasn't for him, but the captain never showed him any anger for his incompetence in the work. That is, until one day the man gave Jynmi a pill, which he explained was meant to bring him calmness. This was a ruse, and Jynmi woke up strapped to a table with the doctor staring down on him, and explaining that since he wasn't any good as an assistant he'd be used as a test subject. Jynmi would've commented on that, but there was a gag on his mouth. A needle appeared in the captain's hand, who explained that he'd gotten some interesting samples a few years back thanks to one of his associate's desires to bridge the gap between hollows and shinigami. The man's work would've been completed if not for a second division assassin getting in the way. As good as the man's formula was, the captain was certain he improved the compound by a large margin. "Don't worry" he said to his former assistant "I'm not going to kill you. In fact, I'm going to let you go, right after I give you a healthy dose of this stuff. Your new mission, my assistant, is to stay alive for as long as possible so I can get as much of the data I can." He took out a piece of paper and tied it around the young shinigami's arm. "I've even got you a nice gigai hidden away so the human world would cause you to wither and die. All you've got to do is find it." Without anything further he injected Jynmi and the world went black as the hollowfication process started.
Inside Jynmi didn't meet a white and black version of himself, but a black and white woman who called herself Anat. Before Jynmi could think of anything else the woman attacked him, and with a simple thrust of her arm sent him flying through several walls. The amount of power at the woman's disposal was ridiculous. Strangely though, she never tried killing Jynmi. Not once did she removed the blade from its sheath. She kicked the crap out of him until he pulled himself away from his confusion and in a desperate act stabbed her with Lilith. The blade didn't seem to do any good and Anat only looked down at it, buried in her stomach. She frowned. "Not good enough." And began to fade away. "Taking over your body isn't worth anything yet." She pulled out the blade and tossed it aside. "I'll help you for now, but you better become stronger because I'd rather us both die than take over something so worthless."

Details -
Jynmi's inner hollow calls herself Anat. Whenever hollowfied Anat reseals Lilith as she'd rather win with her own strength, and not what she refers to as "that black cheating other half."

Evolution - Jynmi will become a more confident fighter. He'll gain control over the hollow inside of him, and will unlock his Bankai.
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Make sure to have a picture of the mask he wears. And I'll wait to see what your shikai and bankai look later (if you have a bankai ) I'll start the rp when I get back from school
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@Shadolordnice you can move her to the character tab but since your a soul reaper you need to say which squad you work with
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Make sure to have a picture of the mask he wears. And I'll wait to see what your shikai and bankai look later (if you have a bankai ) I'll start the rp when I get back from school


Sure thing. I'll put them both up as soon as I figure them out. I mean, I've basically got the concept, but I'm fine tuning the ability.
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I claimed the third seat of Division 13
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@Jangel13
I claimed the third seat of Division 13


Sorry, I didn't read yours. I'll just change it to the fourth seat.
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I don't see much of a problem ,remember mal is a visor so she isn't associated with the squad at all anymore, you could just say you replace her when she turned
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I don't see much of a problem ,remember mal is a visor so she isn't associated with the squad at all anymore, you could just say you replace her when she turned


Uh. Jynmi is a male. I just thought it would be interesting to have an inner hollow who was a different gender.
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