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Hm. Magic is defined by its Forms and its Affinities prescribed during spell preparation. Also during the preparation, it is given a name/incantation which is used to cast it. If a person lashes out with magical energy, with no definition and an incantation made up on the spot, I suppose a primitive spell could be used. It would be a lot like raw magic, very dangerous and uncontrollable, most of all to the user. I've been thinking of making a little tab for certain supernatural diseases/afflictions present in Protea, and this would help thicken that list. I shall call it Burnout - decreased ability to regain mana and use magic after using a spell that hasn't been prepared.


Perhaps we could make the afflictions affinity specific? I'd be willing to come up with something if you would like as I've got a thought or two bubbling in the back of my mind.
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Perhaps we could make the afflictions affinity specific? I'd be willing to come up with something if you would like as I've got a thought or two bubbling in the back of my mind.


Sure, if one of them goes beyond ordinary magic warp.
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Okay, another question, is it like an industrial era setting, or what? I guess I want to know what the world looks like. Is it kinda like the industrial era, or like what?
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Okay, another question, is it like an industrial era setting, or what? I guess I want to know what the world looks like. Is it kinda like the industrial era, or like what?


1920s technology limit
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Alright, let's see what I can do with this...
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(I'll be editing the other character into this post, I'm tired right now and have generally had a shitty day so this will be all for now. Feel free to leave feedback about Lapizus thought, he doesn't add much to lore so if I change anything I'll probably add more world building stuff to him.)
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(I'll be editing the other character into this post, I'm tired right now and have generally had a shitty day so this will be all for now. Feel free to leave feedback about Lapizus thought, he doesn't add much to lore so if I change anything I'll probably add more world building stuff to him.)


Excellent! I have no critique to offer on this right now, though you might put a short description of the swords mentioned in his picture into his fighting style.
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@Lugubrious

I meant to indicate below the picture that he didn't actually have the swords, the picture was simply too close with swords to pass up.
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Sure, if one of them goes beyond ordinary magic warp.


On second thought, I think I'm gonna pass on doing that. In retrospect, being that specific seems like a lot of unnecessary work and not particularly relevant. XD
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@Mortalbean Isn't that picture a picture of a yugioh card? I forgot which one it was, but I swear it is...
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Giant solider of stone@Lord Santa. Also if not guessed I'm planning on a CS
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Ok, thanks.

Another question, any good wars happened on Protea? Actually, what about the history of Protea?
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Ok, thanks.

Another question, any good wars happened on Protea? Actually, what about the history of Protea?


Here's my stance on history: you can make some stuff up, and after you've done so I'll determine if any edits need to be made. A long-time-go war is the one mentioned in Mortalbean's character's bio, while more recent ones include the wars against the New Coven and the Sovereignty. Still-ongoing ones are those between the Hallowed Commonwealth and the Legion of Flies on Spinel, and between the Colonies of the Solstice and the wild on Tourmaline.
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Alright, that was more of a just-in-case kind of thing, but good to know. Well, here's my CS.

God it took a while, like, damn. I had a lot of fun with the spells, though I saw that no one really did it like I did. Still good, though. Tell me if anything's wrong with it, it's still practically WIP.

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Name: Ash (no last name)

Sex: Male

Age: 24

Race: Human

Affinity: Ignis

Personality: (I’m probably going to regret this) Ash has a pretty grim-dark personality, if you catch my meaning. Due to his tragic backstory, he doesn’t really trust people that much. He hardly speaks and doesn’t say anything unnecessary and he’s relatively unsociable. He also lacks direction so he’s a tad depressed.

Fighting style: Ash’s fighting style is fast and versatile. He excels at stealthy takedowns but is a terror on the battlefield with his wide array of spells and adaptable fighting style. He uses a shortsword and dagger combo when in melee, exploiting weaknesses the best he can. He has a series of throwing knives for mid-ranged options. He can switch either dagger or shortsword for a cool one-handed tech crossbow, opening up the battlefield for long ranged combat. This is just what he has on hand, and he has more deadly weapons in a few safehouses here and there, hidden in case he knows he needs them. Besides weapons and skill, his magic arsenal isn’t anything to laugh at. His spells support his fighting style, providing distractions and covering his weak points. Good thing too, because he doesn’t have much for defense. Ash’s only real defensive defense move is parrying, and he usually doesn’t wear armour. He favours mobility over tankiness, and he covers the rest with magic and skill.




Appearance:

Like this but with bandages covering the bottom half of his face and his clothes are dark grey. There are also bandages on his arms and legs. He has bandages pretty much everywhere, really. He’s about 182 cm. Also add a brown cloak going over his clothes and stuff.
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That should take care of the glaring errors. Eresa will share the rimary character spot with Ghurst. I do it so if the story gets bogged down in one place, I have another character free to work with until a log-jam sorts itself. I'm fine with setting her up as a person of importance in Ebb. Scheming is, after all, her true element.
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Very nice, Lord Santa! Your spellcrafting was right on the money. If you feel like it, you can make modifications to his personality to make him something you'll enjoy more. For instance, in another RP I'm in, which partially inspired some of Protea's magic, I have a character with an unfortunate past and dark powers, but he hides his pain beneath constant cheeriness and laughter and focuses instead on doing what he enjoys.

Good stuff, reddy.
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Very nice, Lord Santa! Your spellcrafting was right on the money. If you feel like it, you can make modifications to his personality to make him something you'll enjoy more. For instance, in another RP I'm in, which partially inspired some of Protea's magic, I have a character with an unfortunate past and dark powers, but he hides his pain beneath constant cheeriness and laughter and focuses instead on doing what he enjoys.

Good stuff, reddy.


Nah, I think I'll be fine. Good experience and all. I can't do super vengeance driven guys, though, so it's good I got that out of the way.

I was getting a bit silly down the end of that character sheet anyway to offset the seriousness, and I'll probably balance that by making another, stupider character. So it's all good
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Made a few small changes. Changed Ash's age because it works better that way in my head and added a cool tech crossbow to fit the time period.
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I'm starting to think we might be on the road to officially starting. While the RP might not officially start then, I plan to make the official OOC on Friday afternoon. Sound good?
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I'm starting to think we might be on the road to officially starting. While the RP might not officially start then, I plan to make the official OOC on Friday afternoon. Sound good?


It'll be good to sort out the characters from the other stuff, so yeah, sounds good
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