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The Grail Wars.

A bloody battlefield that oft spread out to include the innocent and yet was never known to exist by the general public. It was a bloody ritual sacrificed disguised as a mass ritual to summon heroes of ages past and future, bound as Servants to Masters, put in 7 different Vessels, all for the chance of being granted a wish by the omnipotent Holy Grail.

Once again, a new Holy Grail had been awakened, and summons champions to seek out its blessings. It was quite unfortunately timed however, that it coincided during a Magi civil war just barely kept secret from the public. The Church, as always stood by, but there were rumours they were trying to shift the war from the shadows.

Now with the start of the Grail War, the all three of the Magi factions went into a frenzy, each one trying to secure a leyline near a far off city of Chernyy Ushchel'ye in the middle of Russia where the next Grail War will begin.




So by now, you'd probably realize this is an rp about the Grail Wars. As mentioned in the info, there will be 7 pairs of Masters and Servants each vying for the Grail for whatever reasons. Masters who lost their servants can still participate, if they manage to contract another servant, but servants who loses their masters will often just disappear, unless they somehow manages to hold on until another master forms a contract with them.

This will start just before the Grail War, when the summoning begins for the servants.

People unfamiliar with the series are welcome, and I'd be happy to help you with any questions you might have.

Rules of the RP:
1. All forum rules apply. Be cool like Fonz.
2. No metagaming, powerplaying, goddmodding, or any other dickish behaviour.
3. Should you feel that something is wrong or anything, please do have a civilized discussion about it. It is a Fate rp after all, and sometimes there are conflicts.
4. GM gets the last words should any problem arises. Hopefully they don't.
5. Steel fuel can't melt jet beams.







And this is the copy pasted(mostly) OOC. REJOICE.



As a side note, DO NOT post your characters in the character tabs until your CSes has been looked over and accepted.
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The Archer Class is reserved for now, but all the other classes are open.
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I'd like to claim the Caster class, if I could.
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I would like to call the Berserk class for now.
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I would kindly like to claim Assassin class servant. I am working on both CS right now.
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Master CS:



Servant CS

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I should probably clarify that A+ to A+++ are extremely exceptional and rare. It requires being justified in his legends. Also, the Assassin class are routinely weaker than the others, hence the presence concealment. As it is now, Assassin is incredibly overpowered. Even Heracles reached only A+ on his strength stat.

Also, I forgot to put the description part for the noble phantasm. Please describe what your noble phantasm is and how they work so I can judge how they work.

P.S Master CS is alright.

P.P.S Don't be afraid to ask should you have any questions. ^^;
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I'd like to claim the Saber spot, will have the sheet up shortly.
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Alrighty, I have adjusted my assassin. What do you think now?@GreenGoat
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Hmm... I need you to explain more on what your noble phantasm does. Does it just take people into a snow world?

Also, I do hope you realize making a reality marble, essentially another plane, require a lot of prana. Like... a lot of prana. An amount non magus don't usually have. That may mean you self destructing with your Master.
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I would like to claim the Lancer, although I'm too liquored to make up the CS at the moment.
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Im getting some shuteye now.

I'll have a look over all the cses when I wake up. ^^;
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Alright, for Ferdiad. His personal skills alone make him very powerful, with the ability to use 18 original runes to buff himself, use damaging spells against the enemy, or whatever support he needs, combined with battle continuation and warrior of the ford, he would be very hard to take down.

Also, there is quite a lot of rank ups.

The noble phantasm thus serve to make him rather over powered. Trom is borderline acceptable, but that static rank up is kinda iffy. Does it simply rank up his strength to A, or does it add a + to the rank?

Duel of the desperate seems to be simply a souped up Ath n Gabla but the problem I'm seeing here is the rank up and the defense piercing. The rank up combined with the Warrior of the Ford, using the 18 runes to buff yourself plus the sword's rank up gives a very nasty combination that allows you to steamroll through most conventional heroes. The rank down is alright imo. The defence piercing is highly unnecessary considering the skill of Ferdiad as a warrior.

The skin is mostly alright except for that it reflects damage back to the attacker. 75% of damage reflected back is very high. This alone would allow him to simply facetank most everything and kill them while they kill themselves. Combined with the others, he could very much end the war by himself in the first day. Also, I doubt most people know about conceptual weapons or know about the realm of authorities.lol

The character concept is quite good actually, but all the rank ups are very iffy, especially since Warrior of the Ford plus his runes would already make him powerful in close combat. He is more suited to be in a game as an antagonist, where the protagonist at least has the story to back them up and perhaps some deus ex machina to be able to defeat him. My suggestion would be to tone Ferdiad down, especially all those rank up, fix up that Skin some, and leave warrior of the ford.
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Alright another try,@GreenGoat, I adjusted Assassin's noble phantasm. It is no longer a reality marble. You made some valid points. Now, it is his main weapon. Should be easier to use in roleplay.
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(See Characters tab for my Archer sheet.)
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@MarsAdept

Servant and Master is alright. Post them in the Character tab separately, and label your servant there with the proper class.

@Tatsua Aiisen

Illya EMIYA is alright. Same as mars, just post them in te Character tab with the right label on top.
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Seeing as Rider seems to still be open, I can take that~
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Alright, for Ferdiad. His personal skills alone make him very powerful, with the ability to use 18 original runes to buff himself, use damaging spells against the enemy, or whatever support he needs, combined with battle continuation and warrior of the ford, he would be very hard to take down.

Also, there is quite a lot of rank ups.

The noble phantasm thus serve to make him rather over powered. Trom is borderline acceptable, but that static rank up is kinda iffy. Does it simply rank up his strength to A, or does it add a + to the rank?

Duel of the desperate seems to be simply a souped up Ath n Gabla but the problem I'm seeing here is the rank up and the defense piercing. The rank up combined with the Warrior of the Ford, using the 18 runes to buff yourself plus the sword's rank up gives a very nasty combination that allows you to steamroll through most conventional heroes. The rank down is alright imo. The defence piercing is highly unnecessary considering the skill of Ferdiad as a warrior.

The skin is mostly alright except for that it reflects damage back to the attacker. 75% of damage reflected back is very high. This alone would allow him to simply facetank most everything and kill them while they kill themselves. Combined with the others, he could very much end the war by himself in the first day. Also, I doubt most people know about conceptual weapons or know about the realm of authorities.lol

The character concept is quite good actually, but all the rank ups are very iffy, especially since Warrior of the Ford plus his runes would already make him powerful in close combat. He is more suited to be in a game as an antagonist, where the protagonist at least has the story to back them up and perhaps some deus ex machina to be able to defeat him. My suggestion would be to tone Ferdiad down, especially all those rank up, fix up that Skin some, and leave warrior of the ford.


Fixed up most things, specified that the duel's extra perks only apply to those that try to interfere, and reduced damage returned by the thorned armor. I wanted to point out that the horned skin doesn't negate completely the effects of attacks, so things like mental interference or "damage over time" sort of attacks will be most effective, since the armor doesn't flat out negate anything, causing lots of instances of minor damage to still hurt in the long run. Wanted a theme of a duelist attrition type of character who stalls and stalls while a competent master does work, etc.
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Don't bully the loli.

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